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Amena Makajusi
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Trainer Name: Amena Makajusi
Trainer Gender: female
Trainer Age: 16

Personal Goals: Amena's goal is to have the greatest and the strongest Pokémons in her team and, of course, to win as much battle as she can.

Trainer Biography: Amena Makajusi grew up overall poor, and was an orphan, as she lost her parents at early age when they were trying to extinguish conflagration in their burning house. In the end there where no house left just ashes and dead parents bodies. When Amena realized that she is alone in the whole world she started living in old ghostly houses, where she was able to find good chatters and most of them were ghosts and wild aggressive creatures.

Later she found herself at training herself with wild Pokémon’s, Amena hasn't became friends with them and only thing which were binding them was fights and wish to become the best of the bests. Training day by the day and playing with them with no contact with real humans made her reserved.

One rainy night Amena was sleeping in the street alone. That day the creepy old man found her and asked to be her Master. Amena agreed with his strange offer and after about a month of training by following his teaching the girl comprehended how many things she doesn't know yet. The biggest part of the time in the old man hut called Paradise Amena listened to lessons about Pokémon’s and their exceptional. Remainder of the time the girl was relaxing, because those lessons was more psychological than physical, taking all her strength of the mind.

At very nice day morning .when the clouds seemed to be in perfect position to block the sun and start crying the Master took an umbrella and walked into the hustle and bustle city to replenish reserves of food. But that day was very unlucky because of the Wild scared Pokémons who encroached upon city, demolishing everything in their way. In this calamity many people died and one of them was the Master of Amena. After some time she elucidated that cause of this tragedy was unlocked pen of Wild Rhyhorn's who was scared of the little boy with Poliwag, squirting them with Water Gun technique ^.^

It took some time to accustom herself with being lost of man, who was like her father. So after one year from accident event the girl left old man place and started her own Pokémon Journey with her first and only one friend the Gevanni. She met him at one creepy house pool and because of the same goals they strike up a friendship.

Trainer Appearance: Amena is pretty short, slender fair-skinned girl. Her flaming slovenly red hair falls down to the middle of her back. She has little white earring in her nose which she found on the jewel shop and stole it. After this robbery the girl pierced her nose with her plunder to show herself that pain doesn't mean anything to her. Mostly Amena is wearing white dress with black embroidery or Gothic costume which emphasize her pale-green eyes.

Amena calls herself misanthrope who distrusts humanity as a general rule. The girl general dislike, distrust and hate humans because of her disposition to dislike and distrust other people. She self-exiled herself and become loners because of the aforementioned feelings. But generally she have normal relationships with specific individuals. Amena have many doubts about her faith, however she know what she is doing and why.

Poketech Color: :techpurple
Starter Town: Wayford
Starter Pokémon: :surskit :male Name: Gevanni
 
Lurk Jul 18 2008, 02:03 PM Post #2
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In the part where you said your master died in an accident, could you explain what the accident was? Your sentences also tend to get into a run-on sentence and extend too much. And could you separate your Biography into at least two sections? Do the above and someone will reevaluate your registration.
 
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Fixed. If I did it with many mistakes, please tell me where are they ;)

(I am sorry because of my bad grammar. English is my second language, but I am trying as hard as I can to write it without making any mistakes (but I know that made some I just don't know where... )
 
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Alright. It looks good now. Approved.

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Edited by Lurk, Jul 19 2008, 02:03 PM.
 
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This persons' profile, journey, and mask have all been set up...and thus this registration is now in the archives.

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