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Tweet Topic Started: Jul 10 2008, 10:51 AM (114 Views)
Deleted User Jul 10 2008, 10:51 AM Post #1
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Name: Duclover (luke)
Gender: Male
Biography: Ducklover was born in the johoto region. His parents then move to the Shinnoh region when he was ten. They didn't let him have a Pokémon because they thought school work was more inmportant. One moon less night he snuck out and run away their was a light rain falling but the rain quick intensified until he was wading ankle deep in water. He slipped into an alley and waited. He could hear police sirrens in to distance. He quickly ducked behind a garbage bin as the police car slowly rolled past red and blue lights flashing. Suddenly the car stopped. Luke held his breath, waiting for the cops to come and find him. He new they would and he knew they'd take him home. Where he'd be grounded from leaving the hhouse for a month. He knew this because it had happened before. Infact it had happened several times. Though his parents didn't know because last time he got scared and ran home. This time he wouldn't run home in fact as he was a bout to find out. He wouldn't be going home at all. The car started up again and drove off. He had done it now he need to get out of this city, and fast. That's how Luke's Pokémon journey began.

Appearance: Black shir with a collar. Purple pants, and a black belt. He aslo has black shoes. His hair is brown and spikey in the back and well cut in the front. He has brown eyes that turn hasle in the sunlight. He never buttons his shirt. All in all he has just and ordinary appearence.

Pok'etch color: blue

Starting town: Hurst
Starting Pokémon: treeko
 
Lurk Jul 10 2008, 12:27 PM Post #2
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Ok, there are MULTIPLE grammar errors and misc. problems on this registration. For one, you didn't even use the given format for your registration. Secondly, your Appearance is just a bunch of choppy sentences. Your Bio isn't much about your character's past but more when he's just starting his journey. If you haven't noticed, a Biography is about someone's past. Try and fix theses problems and another staff member will reevaluate.
 
Lurk Jul 15 2008, 07:28 PM Post #3
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This user has not posted in five days, and as a result, their registration has been archived.

If they PM asking for it, PM them a copy only of the first post.
 
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