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| Acubenz | Jun 27 2008, 12:49 AM Post #61 |
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As you made your way down towards the Cafeteria in the Pokémon center, you locked the door to the room behind you and noticed that you had three rather rare Pokémon on your team. Aron, Exo, trotted to your left with his heaviness, smiling happily as he thought about all he could teach Ridge. Where as Valor, your Pidoo, floated to your right, thinking of how he could teach Ridge some pretty good intellectual things. And then, there was Ridge himself who continued to giggle at his rumbling stomach before he started to close his eyes and doze off in your arms. After a good, oh, ten minutes, you found yourself in a packed cafeteria where tons of people worked behind the counters, serving people and Pokémon their food. Nurse Joy came up to you and looked at your Gible as she looked a bit confused, "Did you have that last night?" She asked, having healed your Pokémon the night before. She shrugged and grabbed you a plate as she walked along side you, seeing as you could'nt well carry the food with a Pokémon in your arms. As you pointed out the food you wanted, Nurse Joy served it onto your plate, and once you reached the Pokémon food, Exo and Valor each grabbed a tray and put it on the counter where Valor then started levitating the items into the trays. Nurse Joy walked with you to an empty table where she set down your food, and watched as Valor set down his tray, and Exo's tray, and then a thought struck you, what would Ridge eat? "Here you are," Nurse Joy returned moments later as she held a bottle of miltank milk out to you so that Ridge could each. "He looks a bit young, so I don't think he should eat solid food just yet. There are some vitamins in the milk though, they should help his teeth fully develop." She stated before leaving the milk with you and walking off to tend to some other people. Well, that was nice I suppose, and it was still rather early so you had the entire day to look... forward.... to... WAIT! Oh no, it can't be... Soon, a boy came up to you with a cyndaquil on his shoulder, looking a bit happy to see you. He looked over at you, and smirked, "Hey, cute Gible." He commented, before looking over at his Cyndaquil who was making funny faces at Ridge, who laughed. "Well, yeah, that's all we wanted to say, bye." He said as he walked off and allowed you to breath once more. Anyways, back to what I was saying, you had the entire day to look forward to, or you could just turn your head slightly and watch as Valor and Exo pretty much devoured their food like it was the best thing they had ever tasted. |
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| DDXD001 | Jun 30 2008, 02:36 PM Post #62 |
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"Oh...my...god...," Jeremy whispered, while observing the crowd in the cafeteria. Maybe this meant that he needed to wake up earlier. Perhaps he'd try to get in these things as early as possible from now on. He wasn't really a fan of crowds, but he'd have to live with it. At that moment, Nurse Joy came up and asked if he had possessed Ridge the night before. Thankfully, the Nurse let that slide for (hopefully) an assumption on her part. Shrugging, she grabbed a plate and started putting an assortment of food on it at Jeremy's request. Thanking her, he navigated his way through the swarm of people and found an empty place to sit down. While this had been happening, Exo and Valor had been taking care of their own needs of food. Grabbing two trays in his mouth, Exo carefully put them on the counter while Valor carefully levitated food on their plates as the Aron told him what he wanted. Levitating the two trays over by Jeremy, Exo and and Valor were pigging out in no time at all. "Wait...," Jeremy muttered uncomfortably. "What should you eat?" he asked Ridge, as the baby yawned and lazily stretched his limbs. Nurse Joy seemed to hear him, since she returned a moment later with a bottle for him. "He looks a bit young, so I don't think he should eat solid food just yet. There are some vitamins in the milk though, they should help his teeth fully develop." She stated before leaving the milk with you and walking off to do...well, whatever Nurses did. "Thank you!" he said to her retreating back. Then, he carefully inserted the bottle into Ridge's mouth and allowed him to drink. While the little Gible sucked the milk out of the bottle, he kept making little gurgling noises; either way, Jeremy could tell that he was happy. "I take it that you like this, don't you?" What a sweet baby...Yet, Jeremy would have to train this child soon. He couldn't baby it forever. All Pokémon matured in due time. A little later, after Ridge had drank his fill (and dozed off), Jeremy had started on his food. Indeed, it was delicious, and he had some enjoyment watching Exo try to scarf down a final piece of bacon. Well, an Aron's eyes were literally bigger than its stomach....WHAT?! Jeremy's blood turned cold as a boy with a Cyndaquil came up and complimented him on the sleeping Ridge, and then walked off. Jeremy could feel a chill creeping down his spine; he was far from forgetting the dream from the night before, if it had even been one. Soon, he had returned his Pokémon grabbed his stuff, and then exited the Center. He was in the mood for traveling today, especially to a certain Tohea City that he'd heard so much about. Now, where was the route that went there?...He was planning on training his Pokémon, especially littler Ridge. Yet, if things came down to it, he wouldn't mind a new addition to his team, either. |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 1 2008, 11:21 AM Post #63 |
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So, finally, after many ordeals within Wayford City, you were leaving. You had three Pokémon in your team and a will to succeed. Your eventual destination was the central city of Tohea Island, Tohea City. What an original name. Anyways, you left the city and stepped onto Route 2. Congratulations. You were on your way to Tohea, but now what? Luckily for me, you didn’t have to answer. At that moment, a fancy convertible sports car came flying out of the city limits and began racing down the road. You were forced to leap off the road to ensure you weren’t killed by the car. Well, you stepped back onto the road and began to walk down as if you didn’t have dirt in your hair and scratched from brambles on your arms. Everything was alright aside from that until it nearly happened again. Suddenly, the same car from before came flying by backwards. This time, you managed to stay on the road, but it was a little too close. The car stopped beside you, and you got to see who was inside. The driver was a young man in a purple button down shirt and khaki shorts, and his passenger was a beautiful girl with long blonde hair and piercing green eyes. She was wearing a simple tank-top and some modest Bermuda shorts, but that didn’t stop you from noticing anything about her figure. It looked just like 2 rich kids out on a date or something. Since the man was smiling, he seemed to be enjoying your pain, but the girl had a pained look in her eyes. She was NOT enjoying this at all. The young man looked at you and said, “Huh. You look like a weak enough trainer. How about you and I have a battle? I’ll show my girl how much of a man I am.” Taking a Pokeball from his glove box, he moved his car out of the way and stepped out. The Pokémon from his Pokeball was eventually revealed to be a Pichu. Real manly. Level 4Level 4? Even more manly. Maybe Ridge could benefit from this. Or you could enact painful revenge with your more powerful Pokémon. Take your pick and show this asshole what he deserves. |
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| DDXD001 | Jul 2 2008, 03:29 PM Post #64 |
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Jeremy let out a sigh of relief as he exited onto Route 2. He had always preferred the country compared to the city, since it was normally a tranquil place to be. He had spent many peaceful days in the woods near Hearthome when he had been younger. Hopefully, this experience would be just as remembering. A noise made Jeremy turn, and he was forced to dive off of the road as a sports car came zooming by. Cursing, he realized that the idiot driving it could've killed him easily. Trying to keep his composure, he darted back onto the road and kept walking as though nothing had happened. Yet, the same car came zooming backwards, and this time he managed to stay on the road. He did not find this amusing. To his deep annoyance, the car stopped beside him and his gaze was met by a rich-looking, snobbish male. He seemed to be enjoying this, but his girlfriend (that's what Jeremy assumed she was, anyway) seemed to not approve. Like Jeremy, she didn't seem impressed with the guy's way of flirting. "Huh. You look like a weak enough trainer. How about you and I have a battle? I’ll show my girl how much of a man I am," the idiot boasted, sending out the most "manly" Pokémon ever, Pichu...and a female, at that. Jeremy was extremely annoyed with this guy, but this would be a good opportunity to train Ridge.... "I really don't appreciate your form of amusement," Jeremy started, releasing the baby Gible from his Pokeball. Sadly, the young dragon partially ruined the moment by toddling over and hugging him. "Especially since attempting to create human roadkill is a crime. Yet, out of good sport, and to show that I'm not at all bothered (he was lying here), I'll accept your challenge." Smiling, he carefully dislodged Ridge from where he was hugging his pants. "Okay little guy, I'm going to teach you how to battle. First, I want you to run at the Pichu with a Tackle, which is essentially slamming into it with your body. Then, I want you to try and dodge any attacks or hits that it throws at you the best that you are able. If possible, run in and use Bite. That should pretty well be self-explanatory." Hopefully, the baby would understand him... |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 4 2008, 06:47 AM Post #65 |
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That was cute. Gible ran up to give you a big hug. If this as any other time, it might be okay, but now was not the best time. The young man said to you, "Wow. You're quite the man yourself." His voice dripped with sarcasm. The next thing he did was listen to the commands you gave Gible. He said to Pichu, "Alright girl, I want you to use Tickle when the Gible comes close. Then, hit him with a powerful headbutt." Damn, this guy was manly. Tickle? A female Pichu? Jeez. Anyways, the battle began with Ridge running towards Pichu. He managed to get one tackle in before Pichu began to start tickling the baby. Gible didn't like the tickling and started to get angry. He began to start snapping viciously at Pichu. His teeth caught one of Pichu's arms, and he shook the creature around like a doll. Pichu was so confused that she forgot the commands she had been given. Level 4 26/33 94%VS Level 2 29/29 90%
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| DDXD001 | Jul 5 2008, 03:00 PM Post #66 |
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Jeremy's eyes narrowed, and he immediately shot back some of his own words. "You're manly yourself. Come on. A female Pichu? Tickle? At least mine's a male...and a dragon-in-training. He'd probably catch more eyes than that little mouse...mainly because he's slightly larger." Yet, Jeremy had to admit that he was impressed with how Ridge performed after the first round. Apparently, the young Land Shark did not like being tickled. The little dragon had chomped down on the Pichu's tickling arm and had shook her around until the thing was too confused to do anything about her current situation. Perhaps Ridge had been born a decent battler...In that case, Jeremy needn't worry too much. "You're doing great, buddy," he told the baby ecstatically. "Now, keep a good hold on it, and then throw it in the air. Jump into the air after it, and bow your head and let your skull hit it. This is called a Headbutt. If it's successful, the move should send the Pichu into the ground; there, I want you to use a Tackle to give it even more grief. If that doesn't work, at least try to dodge any attacks that it throws at you; if necessary, use a Defense Curl to protect yourself." Those last orders hadn't exactly been short and sweet, but Ridge seemed like an intelligent baby. He'd understand in no time, right? If the baby Gible executed things correctly, they'd have that Pichu on the run in no time. It would be even better if his Pokémon took things a little more seriously. And then the girl...Jeremy hadn't really been paying attention to her, but she had seemed reluctant at her "boyfriend's" idea of fun. At least Jeremy wouldn't abuse his license privileges by trying to impress a female...not in a sadistic way, anyway. Yet, it had been a little while since he had last driven anything. |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 7 2008, 09:07 AM Post #67 |
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Now, I can't explain to you why this guy thought he was so manly, but he's surely amusing. Responding to your jibe, he called, "Yeah? My Pichu will be a big badass Raichu one day. AND I've got myself a nice car and a girlfriend. What do you have? O yeah. You got that "dragon-in-training." He sneered. "Loser," he called. Jesus, he's beginning to annoy even me. And I created him. He definitely needs someone to put him in his place. Hopefully, you'll be able to do that. Moving back to the guy's girlfriend, she sat stoically in the car, trying not to get involved in the testosterone fight. But if you looked her in the eye, you could see that she was boiling mad. A little more pressure from her boyfriend (if he can be even be called male) about his manliness, and she would snap. Then, all he'd have left would be a nice car. That is, assuming you don't do what I would do and steal it. As for the battle, Pichu was in a bind. Her arm was caught in Ridge's jaws and Ridge was really ticked off. The dragon-in-training tossed the mouse aside, just as you commanded. Leaping into the air after it, Gible aimed his head for the Pichu to pound it into dust. For Ridge, this seemed personal. Your opponent called out to his Pichu, "Pichu. Use Charm. A lot." A lot? This kid must be retarded. At least give a figging number for crying out loud. Well, Pichu responded by using Charm once because she had no idea what to do about a lot, especially since she's flying through the air. Ridge was so hellbent on destroying Pichu, that he barely noticed the attack. He got slightly confused for a second costing him his attack. Rather than nailing Pichu with his enormous head, the creature simply hit Pichu with a Tackle. Pichu landed in a cloud of dust on the road. Ridge stamped his feet as he hit the ground, scraping for a charge. And charge, he did. He ran full steam ahead at Pichu who, at her trainer's command, weaved around Ridge with Agility and knocked the land shark into the dirt. Ridge stood up and looked at you for guidance. It seemed that his attack wasn't working as you planned. His eyes implored you to help him exact his due revenge. Level 4 16/33 87%(speed +1) VS Level 2 23/29 77%(attack -1) |
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| DDXD001 | Jul 7 2008, 05:19 PM Post #68 |
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Yep, that pretty well tears it. Senor perfect Smart-@$$ was going to go down. Jeremy was trying oh-so-hard not to go completely nuts and attempt to beat the crap out of the guy. As for stealing his car....Jeremy definitely considered it, but he didn't want to seem like he was kidnapping the damsel. Furthermore, he didn't want to enter into a possibility for a prison sentence as a result. Instead, Jeremy merely raised his eyebrows. "Oh? Raichu usually came across as cute and not, as you say, badass. Ridge, on the other hand, will evolve into a Garchomp, a dragon/ground hybrid. That gives him a high resistance to electrical Pokémon." Sure, Jeremy came from a middle-class family, but he thought as though he had more to life than ten clones of this bully. "Okay Ridge, nice try last turn. Now, use another Tackle on that Pichu, and then I want to lower your head for a Skull Bash. That move takes a little while to use, but after you lower your head, a sort of whitish energy should surround your head. Use it to take down that Pichu; it will definitely allow you to have vengeance if it works. If that doesn't work and you get in trouble, clamp onto Pichu again with Bite." The damsel didn't seem to be enjoying this much either. Yet, Jeremy wasn't in the mood to flirt at the moment...Besides, he wasn't out here to date. He was on a mission: Find his true origins. |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 9 2008, 06:57 PM Post #69 |
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I like your spunk. Showing up snotty bitches like this guy was pretty fun, but personally, I'd be a little bit scared of who he might be. He might have shit for brains, but he obviously had something to make him act so smart and superior. It was likely money and influence. So a word to the wise, don't give this guy your name. It might cost you. But I didn't say anything. The kid knelt down and whispered commands to his Pichu. He's deciding to be sneaky, which is okay, I suppose. Either way, I'm pretty sure, he's going to lose. That's just me though. You'll have to prove it. "You watch your mouth. My Raichu WILL be badass. He will be so much cooler than your 'Garchomp,'" he said with a snooty attitude. "Tell me your name. I'll make you pay here in this battle and later." His girlfriend had continued to sit in this car until then, but now, she snapped. She stopped being nice and kind to her friend. She stood up, hopped out of the car, and walked towards you. She had an odd look in her eye that made you really suspicious. Might want to deal with that. As for Ridge, the shark put his head down and gathered some energy. In response, Pichu started to gather energy as well. Her energy was a bright yellow that nicely complimented Ridge's growing aura of white. So, Ridge's aura was getting nice and full while Pichu's began to crackle and spark. The mouse let loose her energy at the moment Ridge started his charge. Because of this the shark managed to dodge the impressive Thundershock that landed right near your feet. You were semi-preoccupied so you didn't notice it singe your shoes a bit. But Ridge performed perfectly, crashing into Pichu and sending the mouse flying. Ridge charged along with Pichu before both of them collapsed in the dirt. Ridge seemed to be spasming a little because of minor electric shock and his motions were greatly slowed. On the upside, Pichu looked like crap. Level 4 7/33 76%(speed +1) VS Level 2 15/29 67%(attack -1) (paralyzed) |
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| DDXD001 | Jul 10 2008, 07:38 PM Post #70 |
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Jeremy's eyes flashed dangerously at this last comment; he was not about to get slammed down by some rich snot from Stuck-up Estates or wherever. When he asked for his name, Jeremy cringed inwardly. Who knew what sort of legal trouble this ass could get him into if he did that, whether or not the charge was exaggerated or created out of thin air. Remembering a passage from Homer's Odyssey, Jeremy didn't hesitate to tell the scumbag his name. "My name is Nobdy," he said with a confident swagger in his voice. Hopefully, this git was brainless enough to not know any better. "Nobdy Carix." (AKA: Nobody cares) Looking at this guy, his ploy had a 50/50 chance of working. "You're doing great Ridge!" he coached his dragon, as the creature hissed and, panting, returned to his side. "Paralysis is normal in battles, but it's fairly common. If you can, ignore the pain and try to move your limbs. Now, you'll be wanting revenge on that little squeak, won't you?" Ridge nodded with a little "Gib!", showing that he understood. "Right, so now I want you to use Agility to give you an edge with speed, and then pool your remaining energy into a Tackle attack at the Pichu. Stay calm and focused, and I'm sure that you'll make it through. If you can, dodge any attacks if necessary." It was at this point that Jeremy noticed that the #1 Rich Moron's GF or whatever had hopped the car and was walking towards him. A strange look was in her eyes, but Jeremy couldn't really describe it. Keeping an ear in her direction in case anything went wrong, he once again turned his attention towards the battle. No use watching the female and making her feel strange.... |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 16 2008, 09:53 AM Post #71 |
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A 50/50 chance? Heh, this guy might be rich and his parents probably spent a fortune educating him, but do you think he even cares? He will likely forget that he lost to you ten minutes after you lose sight of him. He'll be like "Wait. Why does Pichu have no health left?" Come on. I mean seriously, he thinks that Raichu is badass. Do you really think he's smart? He took a piece of folded up paper from his pocket and a pen from his other pocket. He wrote Nobdy Carix on the paper and began to put it away. If you looked closely, it looks like a few other people came up with the same basic idea. For example one name read "Nobdy Likzu (AKA Nobody Likes You) and another read "Tehworl Haitsu" (AKA The World Hates You). Man this kid was retarded. Anyways, on to other things that don't include making fun of poor innocent rich snobs. For example, kicking said snob's ass in a Pokémon battle. Ridge drew energy into itself and increased its speed incredibly. The dragon vanished into thin air and reappeared next to Pichu for an instant before Pichu ended up completely unconscious inside your Gible's mouth. Vengeance is a powerful motivator, and Ridge was no exception to this. Now, we move on to the next thing. The next thing being the snob's girlfriend. She came up right next to you and turning you to her, she started to make out with you. Now I can't decide if this is good or bad. See you have a hot girl making out with you, yet also, she seems a little pissed off, which is always bad with girls. Trust me, I know (and I think you do too xD). So what're you going to do with her and the snob across the road? ((If I offended you, I apologize, but I'm a guy and I have too many friends who are girls to know that pissed off girl = lots of trouble. And of course, my ex being my best friend doesn't help in the least.)) |
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| DDXD001 | Jul 17 2008, 03:41 PM Post #72 |
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Jeremy's eyebrows were slightly raised as the kid wrote down his "name". Seriously, how incredibly stupid was he?! Looking at the sheet, he also saw that some people had the same idea. Funny nonsense names flashed in his eyesight; inhaling sharply, he tried not to laugh. This world had more idiots in it than he thought. What impressed him more was how Ridge behaved. The little dragon wanted revenge against that Pichu, and he wanted it very badly. Within what Jeremy termed as "two shakes of a Mareep's tail", Ridge had conquered his opponent in one fell swoop. Yep, the little guy was definitely going to be a valuable being to his team. Now, he only needed a little more training.... Jeremy was about to congratulate his little baby and taunt the smart-@$$ rich dork when the rich snob's GF walked up to him. She turned Jeremy towards her and, quite before he knew what was happening, started kissing him. He was definitely stunned by this, but the sensation wasn't unwelcomed...completely. It was probably best to not mention in public that the only girl he had ever kissed was his adoptive mother...unless you counted pretending to marry Cindy in Kindergarten. Now, this came off as a little wrong to Jeremy; after all, he wasn't dating the girl or anything. He could sense that she was rather pissed at her boyfriend, so why not play along to drive the guy insane some more? Vengeance is sweet...even though it involved kissing someone whom he didn't even know. He pretended to enjoy the kiss, while slightly winking at the girl so that only she could see; hopefully she'd catch on that he was doing this to annoy the other jerk. The only thing that would go sour here was if she really was kissing him...although hopefully then she'd misinterpret the wink. He even went as far as to pull her body slightly closer to his...no, he was not trying to be a pervert. True, he didn't have a lot of success with ladies, but his last dealings had been with a messed-up girl who had stolen some things. This was an entirely different situation...so he hoped. |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 20 2008, 06:46 PM Post #73 |
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Well, I think the snob has officially been snubbed. You had destroyed his Pokémon and were now making out with his girlfriend. Looks like it should be smooth going from here, right? I think that would probably be right. You know, this girl might be kinda powerful. With money comes power and power can give knowledge, so she might have some ideas. Or, she could be a hooker and you're just that much attractive than the guy who's paying her, but I doubt it. She probably wouldn't do that if she was being paid. Not that I've ever hired a hooker or anything, but you know.... Ahem. Anyways. Back to the problem at hand. If it can even be called a problem. You pulled the girl closer and she responded well. She pulled you right next to her and just kept on going. Apparently she missed your clue and was really enjoying this. Seems that the schmuck was a bad boyfriend in more ways than one. As for Ridge, he was having fun with the abandoned Pichu and the schmuck was watching you and his girlfriend dumbfoundedly. As much fun as this little escapade might be, you might want to figure out what's going on. Though you were a little preoccupied and couldn't see it, the kid was going back to his car with an odd glint in his eye. Seriously though, you and this girl seemed to have some serious vibes, but you might want to figure out just what is going on. That's just me. |
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| DDXD001 | Jul 21 2008, 08:46 AM Post #74 |
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Jeremy had to admit, this wasn't half bad. The girl seemed to misinterpret his signs slightly, but she did pull him closer to her and "kept going", so to speak. She had missed the wink completely, but this didn't matter to Jeremy too much. If he was lucky, this girl was rich and powerful; perhaps she knew something about his origins, or could help him find out. Pushing the thought out of his head for the time being, Jeremy decided not to take advantage of her like that. For all he knew, she probably did like him. He was getting too far ahead in his thinking here...perhaps he should just stay in the present. With the kissing female, anyway. He didn't tell her out loud, but she wasn't that bad of a kisser. The happenings of Ridge briefly skittered over his thoughts, but he assumed that the baby was smart enough to stay nearby. If that was the case then...what had happened to the rich moron that he had just trounced? He had probably crawled off to his sports car to cry and figure out why Nobdy Carix had just stolen his attractive girlfriend. Still, he may want to check on what's going on with the idiot. Slowly and tenderly finishing the kiss, Jeremy gently pulled away from the girl to show that he didn't mean any harm. He wheeled his head around to get a look at the guy, and indeed, he was in his car. Still, something didn't seem quite right about that.... At this realization, Jeremy's caution meter rose about fifty points. Something didn't seem quite right here...at all. |
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| Blazing Falcon | Jul 24 2008, 11:12 AM Post #75 |
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You had a good caution sense. Maybe that's because you think that I'm real and I'm feeding you information. In reality, I'm just a figment of imagination who happens to be able to see things that are usually right. I'm also just...Wait. This isn't why I'm here and I'm not supposed to explain my presence. I apologize for getting off topic. Now where was I? Ah yes. I love this part. So you finished kissing the girl and the young man was sitting in his car, rummaging around for something. You were afraid of him, but what about the girl? That's what everyone does wrong. You assume that the guy is the problem, when maybe the girl is the real issue. Then again, girls usually are the real issue. Anyways, suddenly, you felt something against your neck. It was cold and metallic. You had a blade against your neck. It wasn't sharp, but still. Wait. It wasn't sharp? The boy finally found what he was looking for and took out a pistol. He aimed it at you and began to step out of the car. The knife at your throat suddenly vanished and reappeared in the young man's arm. He dropped the gun and lay there screaming. Talk about a dysfunctional couple. The girl looked at you and said, "We need to get out of here. He's called the police on us because he lost. I'm fed up with him and so we'll need to go now. Are you coming with me?" |
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