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| <font color="RED">[X]</font><font color="GOLD">[Q]</font>Lotus Yean; Starter Pokémon: Loyal Nidoran Female | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 15 2008, 04:36 AM (146 Views) | |
| Demonkitty | Mar 15 2008, 04:36 AM Post #1 |
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Trainer Name: Lotus Yean Trainer Gender: Female Trainer Age: 16 Years Trainer Weight: 125 lb Trainer Biography: Lotus, was born far away, near a Mountain. Her house was nestled at the edge of the mountain. It was a beautiful sight, and there was no one else who lived there. Lotus lived there with her grandma and grandpa, her parents both went on a research far away so they could not visit their daughter. Lotus was a sweet little girl when she lived with her grandparents. Her grandparents loved her and took good care of her, but she always wanted to see her parents. She wondered what they were doing. Lotus was still a young child and she went to school, she was an average student with normal grades. As she grew to the age of 10, she did sports and was very active. She loved being outside, and she loved to walk around and explore. Lotus wasn't such an inside fan, and spent most of her days outside. She would even sleep outside, but her Grandparents always took wonderful care of her. Then finally her parents finished their research and they were on their way home. When they came, Lotus was 10 turning 11 in a few days. Her parents brought home also a little baby, her younger brother. She had to deal with the fact her parents would spend more time with him then with her. As Lotus was finally eleven, they left the house of their grandparents and moved to the city. She would come home with As on tests and report cards, but they didn't care all what she got was a "Good Job" and they turned back to the baby. Lotus grew angry at her little brother and her parents, and became more and more distant to the Outside world. She would lock herself in her room, and start crying she had a miserable life. Soon she started to fail in school as she turned 14 she didn't go to school anymore. She started to swear at them, and one time she even hit her younger brother. Though Lotus had one thing that could make her feel happy. She liked to read books, she would have small novels in her room. When she was younger she never thought about the idea to read in her room. Now it was her greatest entertainment. Her parents didn't know what they did wrong. They were worried, but at the time it was too late for them to say sorry. One night she left her house, not leaving a note that she is leaving. She left everything like it is, her room everything. She left the city and as the sun was coming up she had crossed the boarders to the city. She tried to remember her way to her Grandparent's house. After two days of failure, she started to live in the forest, keeping everyone from entering the forest. She grew long blue bangs to cover her face, and would cover her face with the hood she had. She was successful and keeping the forest for her self. Trainer Appearance: ![]() Starter Town: Ayer Starter Pokémon: Nidoran Female Sample RP: Lotus put up her hood which covered her face almost entirely. She walked up to the entrance of the boat with a Female Nidoran behind her. The Nidoran looked up at Lotus with a smile showing her white front teeth. "Excited?" Lotus said quietly, as she gave the entrance fee for the boat ride. As she went up the steps, she had her head lowered, so she was staring at the floor. She didn't notice any one until she bumped into some one. She raised her head to notice a human person. "Hey watch where your going!" the man said. "You should better watch out where your standing..." she said as she shoved herself past him. As the boat started to move, her Nidoran went in front of Lotus. "Nidoran!" "Hm? You want me to carry you? Alright come here." Lotus said bending down to pick up her Nidoran. She walked over to a spot where she could see the ocean waves. "I wonder how it will be in Tohea.... maybe...hopefully better..." Lotus thought as she sighed deeply. Her Nidoran nestled her self against Lotus chest, and yawned. |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 15 2008, 07:26 AM Post #2 |
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Since you asked, 75 lbs. for a 16 year old girl is very unrealistic, unless she is anorexic and on the verge of death. |
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| Demonkitty | Mar 15 2008, 07:30 AM Post #3 |
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I kind of figured, so ahm could you like give me a good weight? |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 15 2008, 07:36 AM Post #4 |
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Well I'm guessing she doesn't weight a lot but 120-125 sounds good for her. |
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| Demonkitty | Mar 15 2008, 07:39 AM Post #5 |
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OK thanks I fixed it =) |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 15 2008, 02:08 PM Post #6 |
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Okay I'm not sure if you know the difference between There and Their but you are misusing "There" a lot but still using the correct form "Their" in some places. I don't know what's going on but read through it or put it through some sort of grammar check and fix everything that sounds funny to you. |
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| Demonkitty | Mar 15 2008, 02:46 PM Post #7 |
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Yes I make that mistake often, I fixed everything I could. I fixed the history a little bit, and took away the wells in front of sentences =) |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 15 2008, 04:27 PM Post #8 |
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Great Job! Your profile has been approved. This means you don't need to make any further changes, and what you've done is acceptable for use in Tohea. Before you can FULLY begin your journey, however, you need to answer these four questions. If you get them all correct, you will be admitted into the RPG. Otherwise, you will be asked another four questions. Be sure to read the rules to find the answers, as you should have done already. [X] To what extent may you control what you see, in this RPG? [X] Is Tohea officially rated G, PG, PG 13, NC17 or R? [X] Do Trainer's have Pokémon food at the start of their journey? [X] Does the Pokémon a trainer was using gain experience when they catch the Pokémon they were battling? Thank you, Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message (3) |
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| Demonkitty | Mar 16 2008, 02:28 AM Post #9 |
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Oh yay I got excepted
^_^ 1. You can't Godmod or Powerplay. You can't change the weather, or make Pokémon appear. 2. PG 13 3. Yes your Backpack always contains Pokémon Food. 4. Yes, but the experience the Pokémon would normally get will be halved. |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 16 2008, 08:14 AM Post #10 |
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Approved Your profile has been approved and you answered all the questions correctly. Please wait as your profile, journey, and mask are set up. This may take some time, so visit the OOC Boards and/or post away within the Cbox. If you can't see the RPG areas just yet, please be patient. Thank you, Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 16 2008, 12:35 PM Post #11 |
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Have Fun! This persons' profile, journey, and mask have all been set up...and thus this registration is now in the archives. Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message |
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