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| <font color="RED">[X]</font><font color="GOLD">[Q]</font>Psyko; Sableye | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 3 2008, 01:58 PM (271 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Mar 3 2008, 01:58 PM Post #1 |
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Pokémon Nickname: Psyko Pokémon Gender: Male. Pokémon Age: 17 years Pokémon Biography: Sableye, the darkness Pokémon. It hides in the darkness of caves. Its diet of gems has transformed its eyes into gemstones. Recently, I have found that this is how the human race characterize specie such as myself. Is this all we are to them? Pawns in their game of chess? I was born in the sheltered care of my parents in the Hoenn region. We existed in the Dewford caves most of my childhood, feasting on abundant gems. Life was essentially perfect. Nothing had ever disturbed us, what would? But, all doesn't always work out. During, oh, I'd say the fourth year of my life? Yes, I remember, the fourth year of my life. That is when those renegade human decided to destroy my natural shelter. It started as small excavations, a few tunnels. But, as always, it grew. Grew more, and more each day. They were after the precious resources they so foolishly wasted in their everyday lives. There is a day, a day etched in to my memory so horribly. I regret to even document it, but I suppose it is of the up most importance. It was like any other morning. Or perhaps it was night, I couldn't tell, but then again, what inhabitants of a cavern could? One of those pesky human had made their way deeper, and deeper into our caverns. Excavating with their tunnels, they were able to call out my parents, among with other members of our tribe. The human were well prepared. They always had some form of our weakness, weather it be water or grass. The battle lasted for hours, but eventually, most of my kin had been captured. I happen to not know where the humans could of possibly taken my friends and family, but I knew they were gone. Simply mourning over the past wouldn't do any good. I planned to, for the first time in my life, emerge from my den and seek refuge in another world. The human world. I'm not sure exactly the hour, but it happened to be around dusk. A dreadful storm was carrying in, and the last thing I'd need after hours of wandering would be rain. That is when I met Jerold, a kind old nomad. He seemed to be the healer of these mountains. I remember stories from my kin, when they told me of a human that works with sick Pokémon. Of course, he was a myth. But, does this mean he exists? Hopeless, I spent my night with Jerold in his mountain side cave. Jerold was able to treat a few minor bruises and scratches I had acquired from my journey. Everything seemed perfect. I soon accepted Jerold as my human partner, something I had never done before. I realized that humans didn't always categorize us as monsters. Well, perhaps it was just Jerold that didn't. After a short period of time, we had set off on a new adventure. Jerold told me of places and Pokémon who needed our help. We spent, approximately, the next 8 years of our lives venturing through the Hoenn region, healing and helping all that we could. Even though he was a natural healer, Jerold had grown ill himself. Unable to fend for ourselves in the wild, we returned to Littleroot town. Jerold's sickness had increased, making it life threating. His family soon took him to a real hospital. Jerold had begged them to leave him, but they would not. He soon disappeared. And there I was, alone again. I had learned unfortunate news that Jerold's sickness had gotten the best of the pleasant man. Jerold's family soon sold off his house in Littleroot to a small family. This family that moved in consisted of an elder lady, I'd say around the same age as Jerold, her daughter, a middle aged mother, and her daughter, who was about eight. I felt it was best for me to not attach myself to any of these humans. Before I was discovered, I made a run for it. Catching a shipment truck all the way to Slateport wasn't exactly easy, but I needed to get out of here. Once in Slateport, I silently boarded a ferry which would eventually lead me to Tohea. The land of ports of Tohea weren't the place for a wild Pokémon. I made my way deep into the mountains, craving those precious gems I had once tasted. Pokémon Species: ![]() Wanted Egg Move: Recover During my time with Jerold, I came extremely fascinated with his ability to heal. Even though I wasn't his Pokémon captured in a pokeball, he was still able to teach me some of his more unique traits. It seemed the fonder of Jerold I grew, my own ability to heal became stronger. Journeying through a region has both its up points, as well as its downs. I quickly learned this when a pack of hungry Pokémon attacked Jerold and I. This was the first time in my entire life I'd have to fight. But it seemed as it would be my last. The Pokémon beat on me viciously, taking turns to bite and kick. Jerold had told me I needed to use my inner strength to tire them out, there was no way I'd be able to fend them off. Gathering my hidden art of healing, I slowly, but surely healed my self. With each bite the hounds dished out, I healed myself some more. Jerold has eventually able to chase them off. With this new found talent, I practiced more and more. Unfortunately, I was never able to heal others. For my sake, though, I was able to heal myself. Starter Location: Rocktomb Mountains. Sample RP: "That's it, Psyko, you've almost got it." Jerold said, coaxing me along with his sturdy old hands. I was reaching for a ruby located atop a large mountain. Craving the taste of one of these gems. Out of nowhere, a howl echoed through both of our ears. Apparently, this was not a ruby for the taking. Three canine like Pokémon jumped from atop the bluff. "Careful, Psyko!" Warned Jerold. We were both anxious to face what was coming. Four Poochyena hopped the ten foot gap. They each growled at us, flashing their teeth every which way. Jerold stepped back, reaching for his cane. One of the hounds saw him, and darted toward the large stick. It approached from behind, taking down the elderly man. I was left by myself to try and fend them off. As a form of strategy, I once again went after the gem. The Poochyena noticed me trying to take their ever so precious gem. All four of them lunged toward me, nipping at my hands and feet. During this time, Jerold was able to recover enough to get his staff. "Psy, use the power within yourself! Focus our healing arts!" With Jerold's strong advice, I was able to use recover on myself. I held out just long enough for Jerold to pick the gem and throw it to a near by forest |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 3 2008, 03:28 PM Post #2 |
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Can you lengthen your history and RP sample? They seem short and er... kinda strange to me. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 6 2008, 03:00 PM Post #3 |
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Right...I see someone else got the Pickacu? I rewrote the entire thing. |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 6 2008, 03:21 PM Post #4 |
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Whirlwind?! Pfft. Well anyway you need to write at least a paragraph(5-6 sentences) about how you learned your egg move. It can't be just so simple as "It was in his genes" and can it please be separate from your bio. Obviously it is part of your past but it is easier for us to judge it. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 6 2008, 04:32 PM Post #5 |
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...I did? |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 6 2008, 05:05 PM Post #6 |
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Alright now that I can properly see what's going on here and my eyes are spazzing out I see one major problem. I'm really sorry if i seem like I'm a bitch or whatever but we want people who have a high understanding of the english language and that knowledge of at least a 5th grader. This is one of the basic things. Where, Were, We're Where - One of the words than usually means you are asking a question. Shows location. "Where is the bowling alley?" Were - Past tense explaining an event. "We were bowling for hours." We're - Forget the term for this but it has something to do with compound words but is abbreviated as "We are." "We're going bowling later." "We are going bowling later." So please try to remember this and use them correctly so I am going to have to be a nag and ask you to fix all of these mistakes, please. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 6 2008, 06:43 PM Post #7 |
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Bitch or not, that's your job. I think I got it all good now? If not, would you mind telling me where exactly I goofed up? EDIT: We're is a conjunction. It's not that I don't know grammar. I just choose not to use it properly. |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 6 2008, 07:08 PM Post #8 |
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Well now it is mostly in your egg move. You are using the wrong forms of "there. their, they're" and "where, were, we're" just read it carefully because I'm too tired to point them out. And whether you like it or not you have NO choice whatsoever on whether or not you can use proper grammar, it is a must. Edit: Your starter Pokémon has been taken, again. Sorry >> |
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| Deleted User | Mar 9 2008, 04:01 PM Post #9 |
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Edited. Again. |
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| Chocobo | Mar 9 2008, 04:39 PM Post #10 |
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Di since I got a pm from Modkiller Psyko can have Sableeye |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 10 2008, 01:23 PM Post #11 |
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Great Job! Your profile has been approved. This means you don't need to make any further changes, and what you've done is acceptable for use in Tohea. Before you can FULLY begin your journey, however, you need to answer these four questions. If you get them all correct, you will be admitted into the RPG. Otherwise, you will be asked another four questions. Be sure to read the rules to find the answers, as you should have done already. [X] What rule allows any Pokémon to use Agility? [X] Can a Pokémon learn a move before it has reached the appropriate level, without the use of TMs? If so, how? [X] Is it permitted to advertise in the CBox? [X] Are Pokémon abilities (Eg Swarm and Pressure) taken into consideration in Tohea? Thank you, Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message (1) |
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| Deleted User | Mar 10 2008, 02:07 PM Post #12 |
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[x]The global attack list is the rules that will allow any Pokémon to use Agility, along with other moves. [x]Yes. A Pokémon can learn their moves through extensive training in the role play section. If a Global Mod + approves of your training, they can certify you to use that move. [x]Advertisement in the cbox is not permitted. I think if the admin needs to pay for the service, they will not tolerate you doing this, and action will be taken. However, you are able to link stuff to your name, but telling people to click it is still advertising. [x]Pokémon abilities are used in this battle system, and should be taken into consideration during the role plays. |
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| Dee Arr | Mar 10 2008, 02:08 PM Post #13 |
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Approved Your profile has been approved and you answered all the questions correctly. Please wait as your profile, journey, and mask are set up. This may take some time, so visit the OOC Boards and/or post away within the Cbox. If you can't see the RPG areas just yet, please be patient. Thank you, Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message |
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| Chocobo | Mar 12 2008, 06:53 PM Post #14 |
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| Dev | Mar 14 2008, 11:30 AM Post #15 |
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Have Fun! This persons' profile, journey, and mask have all been set up...and thus this registration is now in the archives. Tohea RPG Staff This is an automated message |
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