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| Deleted User | Mar 11 2007, 03:37 PM Post #1 |
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| Deleted User | Mar 11 2007, 03:38 PM Post #2 |
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Your first task is to design a fun and interesting quest for each of the players below. Take a look at their descriptions and short personality descriptions to get a feel of what might get this particular person interested. Please include a short (3-4 sentences) description of each quest, possible rewards at the end, and what might entail during the quest itself (battling, etc.) Please design a quest for the following: + Kaoru Kamiya: Read the mock profile for her information. + Nicole Wenstrum: Nicole is your typical environmentalist....she's obsessed with all things nature and preserving the habitats of wild Pokémon. In the future, she'd like to establish a Safari-Zone style area on Tohea and is a big leader in saving the Tauros' habitat around Tauros Town. She's intelligent, quick to act, and rather brave...especially for being only 19. + Jack Houst: Jack, is...uh, well...he's a villain. He doesn't work petty crimes, like stealing that Level 6 Hoppip, but goes for the big game such as Gym Leaders Pokémon. Recently, however, he turned down a request to join Team Rocket and is now in hiding...having been sentenced to death for his refusal. Either way, Jack is in need of some major money if he wishes to get off the island. + Ash Ketchum: You know him, right? Little boy, big dreams? Pokémon Master? I don't believe I need to describe him. + Design any quest you'd like right here. + Design any quest you'd like right here. |
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| Orona | Mar 11 2007, 10:40 PM Post #3 |
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(Woot! Training! *calms down* In retrospect, this'll probably be the only time when I'm excited about working. XD ) Kaoru Kamiya: Kaoru is walking the streets of Ayer, and she sees a school not too far up. As she continues to walk, she begins to see a little girl, not much older than 10, and a pair of boys, arguing. The boys looked to be 12 or 13, and seemed to have backed the girl into a corner of the school building. If Kaoru chooses to help the girl, she'll end up fighting a Level 3 Plusle and a Level 3 Minun. If not, quest over. If she wins, the boys leave and she gets more acquainted with the girl. Overjoyed, the little girl drags (not literally) Kaoru to her home, where Kaoru ends up meeting the girl's parents. The girl asks Kaoru to stay for the night. If she accepts, she'll end up following the girl to school again, and by the end of the day, have to battle the bullies' older brother. If she chooses not to stay the night, quest over. The 16-year-old boy sends out a Level 6 Pikachu. If Kaoru wins, the girl takes her back to her house and offers to let Kaoru have 1 of her 2 Pidgey (Both Level 4). (So much for 3-4 sentences... XD) Nicole Wenstrum: Nicole is biking down Route 1. She looks to her left and sees smoke coming from somewhere in the grassy area. If she chooses to investigate, she'll discover a small fire beginning to spread. If she doesn't, quest over. She should put it out, then look to see what caused it. At first, she'll find a cigarette. She begins to walk away, then hears a cry. If she continues to investigate, she'll find a Charmander, injured, laying belly-down on the grass (keeping the flame from touching anything else). If she helps, she'll end up carrying him to the Pokémon Center in Ayer. If not, quest over. On the way, she end up battling a Level 5 Rattata. Once she reaches the Pokémon Center, a trainer will meet her, saying that the Charmander is his. He'll show her Charmander's Pokeball to prove it and also hands over $750 as reward money. Jack Houst: Jack is walking through the streets of Kadaraa late at night. He notices that the Pokémon Center has it's door open, but the inside is dark. He approaches it, and sees that nobody is inside. If Jack continues to enter, he'll find out that there are trainers, sleeping in the back. If he leaves the center, quest over. Jack should find a room, where all of the trainer's recouperating Pokémon are. He realizes that over half of them are gone. As he continues to investigate, he sees that the bak door is cracked open, and that a Pokeball is on the floor. If Jack picks up the one Pokeball and leave, he'll find that he picked up a Level 10 Treecko; quest over. If Jack continues, he'll see a glimpse of another figure going through the back alley. If Jack continues, he'll find a Team Rocket grunt, holding a large bag of Pokeballs. By this time, Jack will have to fight a Level 7 Ralts. If Jack uses the Treecko he picked up, the Treecko will attack Jack, and the grunt will get away; quest over. If Jack wins (using his own Pokémon), the grunt will drop the bag and run in fear. If not, quest over. As a reward, Jack is able to sell the Pokémon back to anyone who's willing to buy them, or keep them for himself, although he'll find that none of the Pokémon are over Level 10. (Ok, that was a bit long. My apologies.) Ash Ketchum: Ash enters the Kadaraa Gym, looking to challenge Sorsha to a match. One of Sorsha's friends, who Ash assumes Sorsha left in charge. The girl informs Ash that Sorsha left to go to Rocktomb Mountains for some training. If Ash chooses to wait for Sorsha, quest over. If he goes, he'll end up fighting off 2 wild Geodude, both Level 17. If he loses, quest over. If he wins, he'll continue and find Sorsha, busy battling a Charizard. Sorsha wins, and Ash requests that she goes back to the Gym. Sorsha will pose a challenge. If Ash can beat the Charizard of her choice, she'll go back. Sorsha chooses a Level 30 Charizard (I'm 99% sure I can't spawn that). If Ash loses, quest over. If Ash wins, the two go back. The reward would be that Ash finds 2 Moon Stones on the way down, and the oppurtunity to battle Sorsha. If he failed, he'd have to wait for Sorsha to return, which could take any amount of time. Any Quest #1 (Jack Houst): Jack is walking through the slums of Kadaraa and sees a small bank. It doesn't look to be heavily populated, and at midnight, theft should be a breeze. If he continues, he'll notice that there's a serious lack of security cameras and only two clerks. Jack approaches the two, and finds that one of them are sleeping. The other looks to be awake, but is actually sleeping with his eyes partially open. If Jack continues, he'll walk to the back desk without waking anyone up, and will begin to walk down a small hallway, trying to find a vault. He finds one, but also finds a couple of Spinarak, sleeping on the ceiling. If Jack continues, he'll end up battling the two, which are both Level 10. If he succeeds, he'll proceed to open the vault, which he'll succeed in doing such. He raids the entire thing, gaining about $8000. As he leaves, he'll find the two clerks have awoken, and that both are blocking his way out. Jack'll have to win in a double battle against a Level 15 Psyduck and a Level 16 Dustox. If Jack wins, he gets away with the money. If not, quest failed, and he's caught by the cops. However, in the process of being moved to a prison, the police screw up (crash, unlocked chains, etc.), and Jack escapes. Any Quest #2 (Nicole Wenstrum) Nicole is walking through Nym Forest, and hears drilling being done off into the distance. She investigates, and finds that construction is being done, to build a small town. If she stops here, quest over. If she continues, she'll end up protesting her case. The workers will point her in the direction of the foreman. The foreman will challenge her to a battle. The foreman uses a Level 11 Machop. If Nicole loses, quest over. If she wins, the foreman continues to build, saying that this is "just buisness." After some thought, Nicole's final option is to get the forest Pokémon on her side. She releases her own Pokémon (whatever it may be) and has him/her communicate with the other wild Pokémon. Once Nicole thinks she has enough, she commands all of them to swarm the construction site, tearing up anything that they can. Not only do the workers leave, but Nicole ends up being followed by a Caterpie and Weedle (Both Level 6) that would like to travel with her. (That last one wasn't my favorite; not even close XD) |
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| Deleted User | Mar 12 2007, 08:45 AM Post #4 |
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Haha good job! One thing though, for the first Jack Quest, letting him have the oppurtunity to get so many Pokémon as well as a rare Treecko, is a bit to much in the rewards area haha. ^_~ And of course, keep in mind the trainer's Pokémon when you spawn Pokémon for them to battle. But other than that, good job! Lets move on shall we? But all in all great job! Lets move on shall we? Design a Quest for Kaoru in + In the middle of Nym Forest + Any where in the Unexplored lands And for any trainer in: + A cave in the Rocktomb Mountains + Fishing in Kiban River But this time, write it as if you were reffing a post, straight up. So no need to lay it all out for me ^_^ |
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| Orona | Mar 12 2007, 02:35 PM Post #5 |
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(Whoops, hehe..? ^_^; *mumbles something and dictates what Roo said onto notepad* Got it! Ok, let's try this again!) Kaoru (Nym Forest): You continue to whack at the great oak tree before you. If you ever were to restore your father's dojo, you couldn't afford to be rusty with your swordmanship, or swordswomanship, er, however it's considered to be "politically correct". After a final WHACK against the tree's trunk, you hear shaking from above. You stare up at the tree for a second, and an egg falls off of a branch. What to do? What to do? Oh my goodness, it's going to break! You watch as the egg lands on a tall patch of grass and rolls to your feet, avoiding breakage. Now, your motherly instincts are telling you...'That is somebody's egg. You need to take it back up to the nest or wherever it was that the egg came from. Blah, blah, blah...' Ok, enough listening to your mind. Things like that are more exhausting than life sometimes. Back to the issue at hand. Do you try to take it back up the tree? Or leave it here for some hungry Rattata or Pidgey to take? The next move would be for Kaoru to try to return the egg. She would be attacked by a Level 23 Noctowl if she did so. Ok, now...If Kaoru were to fight and win, the Noctowl would leave. (Hopefully) Feeling responsible for causing the mother to flee, Kaoru will have to care for the eggs. She'll end up having to fend off 2 or 3 Beedrill, and perhaps a couple of Spearow. X hours later, a trainer arrives with Noctowl flying by his side. He explains that the eggs and Noctowl were his. But, for caring so much, the trainer is willing to give Kaoru one of the eggs as well as a Pokeball. Quest complete! Kaoru (Unexplored Lands): Dusk. The time of day where if you don't know where you're going, you sure enough know that it's time to set up a campsite, lest you wanted to risk travelling through the night, but that would make you susceptible to twisting your ankle, getting mauled by Ursaring, and other inconviences-slash-untimely deaths. So, you and Cubone began to set up camp, pitching your tents and starting up a nice, crisp fire. You were setting up yours and Cubone's beds, and as you walked out you walked directly into the face of a Gastly. You unintentionally let out a shriek. The Gastly became scared itself and floated farther into the grasslands, which you were previously walking through. Once the Gastly made some distance between you and it, he decided to come back and bounce around a bit in your face once more. Then he stopped and loked at you with the most innocent and pleading eyes a ghost Pokémon could come up with, which isn't necessarily reassuring. The Gastly then proceeded back into the grasslands. Once he reached the edge of the horizon, he turned around to look at you once more with those pleading eyes. He then disappeared over the horizon. As best you could figure, he wanted you to follow him. But, with it getting darker and you not having any clue what's out there, you could be killed in the process. Beware! What does your gut tell you? Go against the common senses you have and follow him? Or relax by the nice, crisp fire and do nothing the rest of the night? If Kaoru proceeded, she would've come across a hut beside a tall, beat-up tower. She can choose then to enter the hut, as common sense should tell her not to enter the tower at this time of night. She'll then meet an old woman who asks Kaoru to stay for dinner. If Kaoru stayed, I would've had the woman explain some long anecdote about her husband giving her something when they were younger. Then I would've had the woman say something about being a trainer, who tried to catch ghost Pokémon in said tower. Anyway, the woman would've been scared about something and drop her sacred possession (most likely a locket). She caught the Gastly but lost the locket in question. So, Kaoru would've helped, and, basically all that entails is a few wild ghost Pokémon. Duskull, Gastly, and maybe a Haunter. Eventually she finds it, and upon returning it, would've received a $1500 reward. Quest coomplete! Any Quest #1 (Kaoru at Kiban River): (Hopefully, by the time Kaoru got to Kiban River [seeing as how she started at Ayer], she should've gotten another Pokémon. If not, this quest is impossible to administer.) Peace. Quiet. Tranquility. God, the sound of running water never sounded so good. It was a huge improvement as compared to the anxiety and stress that follows being in the cities. As you sat on the bank of Kiban River, fishing, you see Cubone drifting further and further away from you. She was following a Butterfree down the stream's bank. You continue to watch as Cubone walks farther and farther away from you....away from your presence....away from your guidance. What was next was unthinkable. Cubone, almost as if in a daze, began to follow Butterfree across a log in the middle of the River. All of a sudden, Cubone realized where she was. She looked down, and realizing that she was up high, she lost her balance and fell off of the log. She hit the water and was wailing as she drifted back towards you. The current is too strong for her to get out. Whether or not you can, well, we don't really know, do we? All we know is Cubone is stuck, and, wait....What's wrong with her? As Cubone crossed in front of your sight, you realize that her eyes are closed. She isn't gasping for breath, but she is definitely unconscious. Your lifelong friend is drifting at a dangerous speed down a river, unconscious. If you don't jump in, she's as good as dead, whether it be from drowning, or from falling off a waterfall, or crashing into boulders embedded in the riverbed. What now? If Kaoru jumps into the water, she and Cubone will end up travelling down the River and reach a small waterfall. They'll safely emerge, and Kaoru will realize that Cubone has a dangerously high fever. She'll aldo end up meeting a small girl, who offers some help. If Kaoru had the kid to help (of which she doesn't have much choice, she would've ended up going the small girl's home. Kaoru would have then met the girl's grandmother, a very experienced Pokémon Breeder. She'll inform Kaoru that her Cubone is very sick, and that she can only be helped with the application of a paste from a ground-up flower, which grows back up the River, from which they came. The woman also informs tha Cubone will grow better with time, but that the flower will speed up the process by 2 weeks (or some such nonsense). Anyway, should Kaoru accept, she'll end up fighting against some wild Sentret, and some guy who spots her at the River. After trying to hit on her (and hopefully Kaoru denies him), she'll end up fighting him. It'll be a quick battle against a Level 8 Sandshrew. She'll return, and her reward is she doesn't have to wait for her Cubone to heal. Quest complete! Any Quest #2 (Jack Houst at Riverwood City): Bleh. Daylight, who needs it? Not you, all you needed was that money, as quickly as possible. The sooner you could get away from Tohea, the better. You walked down the dusty streets of Riverwood. That damn sawdust was irritating. You saw the sawmill, and instead decided to turn around and go back the way you came. You reached a corner and notice a piece of paper, taped to a light post. The text was big enough to read: 'Pokémon Tournament! Single Elimination Tourney in which only one Pokémon may enter, concluded by a mock Gym Battle! But not just any battle! You will be allowed to use one of the Gym Leader's Pokémon! Winner of the Tournament receives $2500! And if you win the mock battle, you get 2 Great Balls, 2 Hyper Potions, and a Fire Stone!' Well, well, well. This was perfect. Only 1 Pokémon allowed? They have to be containing the others somewhere, right? If you could find them, well, I don't need to explain. On the other hand, getting your hands on a Gym Leader's Pokémon, that would result in a huge amount of money as well. What to do, what to do? But wait, where was it? Or, maybe you have other things to do? Some tournaments just aren't worth the time, right? Jack must decide whether or not to go and check out the tournament. He'll then be presented with the option to enter the tournament, or rob the other trainers of their stored Pokémon. Here, it becomes Jack's decision what to do. If he tries robbing the Pokémon, he'll end up having to break and enter the Gymnasium, and upon finding the stash of Pokémon, get caught by the Gym Leader. He'll have to beat the Gym Leader on his own if he wants to get away with the Pokeballs. If Jack wins, he gets away with, er, 50 Pokeballs or something. But upon further investigation of the Balls, realize that about 40 of them are empty. Why? Who knows? Maybe to catch guys like him...*shrugs* Anyway, he managed to escape, so "Quest Complete!" If Jack decides to enter the tournament, he'll obviously have to fight. He'll end up fighting a Hitmonchan, a Kirlia, a Pidgeotto, and a Croconaw. After that, he'll face the Gym Leader, yadda, yadda, yadda, and will receive whatever prizes he deserves based off of the flyer he read at the beginning. Quest Complete! (sort of) (Phew! Finished! And it only took....2 1/2 hours! o.O Well, at least I know I did good today. *nods* :D ) |
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| Deleted User | Mar 12 2007, 02:58 PM Post #6 |
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These are good! But I'm afraid that you control the character too much in your refs. As a ref, you have control of everything in the journey....except for the character/member themself. So for example. In the first ref you did, you had Kaoru climb the tree. You can hint strongly that she SHOULD climb the tree, but you can't say she climbs it unless SHE says she climbs it. In the second ref unless Kaoru decides to follow the gastly, you can't say she does. And so on and so forth. Each of your refs (though very creative and well written ^_^b) take a bit to much control of the character. How about editing them so that they don't anymore? I've given you hints to the first two, but I'll leave the other two for you to figure out. Edit them all though k? Good luck!! ^_^ |
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| Orona | Mar 12 2007, 03:41 PM Post #7 |
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Ok, I've edited accordingly. I'm not sure, but I think I may have controlled Kaoru a bit on the 2nd ref, still. What do you think? *That's my time for the day. I'll be back at night. ^_^* |
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| Deleted User | Mar 12 2007, 04:19 PM Post #8 |
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Much better job! Your right thought, you did still control Kaoru a little bit to much in the second ref. But if we assume that Kaoru did infact say that she was going to make camp in a post previous to that ref, you're fine. THough I might not have said she shrieked ^_~. In your third post about Kiban River, while you didn't take to much control of Kaoru, you also didn't really let her react as well. THe way you wrote it, there was plenty of time in between Cubone leaving and falling into the river, in which the Kaoru might have done something. In a case like that, you either have to ref it so that there would have been no way that Kaoru would have been able to do anything before Cubone fell into the river, or stop sometime before Cubone fell into the river, let Kaoru react, and then go from there. How about just doing the kiban river one over again, editing it into one of those two ways? ^_^b |
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| Orona | Mar 12 2007, 11:02 PM Post #9 |
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Before I continue, I want to verify some notes that I wrote down. I'm hoping to pound these into my head by the end of training; although right now would be preferred. When designing quests: 1)Keep a limit on rewards. Can't be too great or rare. (Which came from the tutorial, but it was learned here) 2)Pay attention to what I spawn. I cannot use any rares. When reffing quests: 1)I have little control over the player's movement UNLESS they tell me what they want to do in a previous post. 2)Time between actions, though seeming insignificant, IS a factor. Keep a track of how long each action takes. Now, back to training! I'm gonna move the quest down here to clean it up a bit. Any Quest #1 (Kaoru at Kiban River): (Hopefully, by the time Kaoru got to Kiban River [seeing as how she started at Ayer], she should've gotten another Pokémon. If not, this quest is impossible to administer.) Peace. Quiet. Tranquility. God, the sound of running water never sounded so good. It was a huge improvement as compared to the anxiety and stress that follows being in the cities. As you sat on the bank of Kiban River, fishing, you see Cubone drifting further and further away from you. She was following a Butterfree down the stream's bank. You continue to watch as Cubone walks farther and farther away from you....away from your presence....away from your guidance. Such a beautiful day. But perhaps, you should go and get Cubone back over here before she does something stupid, for lack of a better word. I mean, we wouldn't want her to do anything like drift into a heard of Beedrill or get snatched off by some Pokémon thief, right? All of a sudden, the Rod in your hands begins shaking. You felt random tugs but didn't let go just yet. After looking into the water for a second, you see a Goldeen jump out of the river and into the sunlight. Lvl. 14You picked your head back up to check for Cubone again, and you definitely saw her. But she was no more than ten, maybe fifteen feet away from a log that connected the two river banks. The Goldeen was flailing in your hands, but Cubone was setting off that red flag in you that told you to go and catch her. Which one holds the higher priority? If Kaoru let Cubone go, she would've fell into the water, and drifted back towards Kaoru, caught in a strong current. If Kaoru went after Cubone, the two would've ended up on said log connecting the opposing sides of the river. One way or another, Kaoru and Cubone should end up in the river. Kaoru and Cubone will end up travelling down the River and reach a small waterfall. They'll safely emerge, and Kaoru will realize that Cubone has a dangerously high fever. She'll also end up meeting a small girl, who offers some help. If Kaoru had the kid to help (of which she doesn't have much choice), she would've ended up going the small girl's home. Kaoru would have then met the girl's grandmother, a very experienced Pokémon Breeder. She'll inform Kaoru that her Cubone is very sick, and that she can only be helped with the application of a paste from a ground-up flower, which grows back up the River, from which they came. The woman also informs tha Cubone will grow better with time, but that the flower will speed up the process by 2 weeks (or some such nonsense). Anyway, should Kaoru accept, she'll end up fighting against some wild Sentret, and some guy who spots her at the River. After trying to hit on her (and hopefully Kaoru denies him), she'll end up fighting him. It'll be a quick battle against a Level 8 Sandshrew. She'll return, and her reward is she doesn't have to wait for her Cubone to heal. Quest complete! Oh, and I do appreciate all the optimism and encouragement. Thank you! :) EDIT: And more thing. If I get through this training in one piece, would it be ok to continue practicing quests on another thread? |
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| Deleted User | Mar 13 2007, 01:37 PM Post #10 |
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Yep yep on the notes! About the Pokémon, there's a list of what Pokémon pinklets are allowed to spawn in what areas in the staff section, so don't worry to much about that one. And good job here! I think we're ready to move on to the next task! ^_^ Ref me! Karu wlked don route 2, lookign 4 a pkm.n Writte now, she only had cubone, so sh waned more! She hops to find a lke to cach dritiny! |
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| Orona | Mar 13 2007, 02:12 PM Post #11 |
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((Karou, your grammar, spelling, and post length are attrocious. Just from grammar and spelling, we reserve the right not to ref this. However, you've caught me in a good mood. So, consider yourself lucky. I'm sure the next referee you get won't be nice enough to deal with this. Oh, and if you put the effort in, things like this won't happen to you.)) You continued to "hop" around Route 2, desperately searching for the Dratini you so badly desired. As you went through the patches of tall grass, trying to find a lake, you looked up to find some mosquitoes, and some dragonflies, headed in the same direction. Bugs, dragonflies and mosquitoes especially, usually meant water. And, seeing as how it hasn't rained for days, it must mean that there's a decent source of water somewhere. Being as how there's no river near Route 2, it must mean....That's right. A lake. You picked your head out of the grass, hoping to see the collection of water which would hopefully be home to wild Dratini. You saw a ditch, probably about one, perhaps one and a half feet deep. In the ditch was a mixture of water and soil, which probably was caused from the last major thuderstorm. The water wasn't dirty enough to be considered mud, though. It was more like water with some dirt sprinkled in it, which spread out to make a bit of a nasty, dusty color of the once pure rainwater. You looked at the dirty water, with some blades of grass floating in it, and realized that there was no way a Dratini would live anywhere near here. Well, a Dratini definitely wouldn't be living here anytime soon. Maybe you should go back to "hopping" around for another lake? You know what they say. Third time's the charm. Ok, so it would be your second try. But who knows? Maybe you'll get lucky. |
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| Deleted User | Mar 13 2007, 02:53 PM Post #12 |
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Hahahaha very nice indeed! Loved the note ^_^b. You seem to realize that good posts = good rewards, and bad posts = jack squat. Very nice indeed! We'll move on here. Now it's time for the highlight of the training....NPCS! *crowd goes wild* Create for me, two of your finest non player characters. Give them physical descriptions, bios, and Pokémon if you wish it. Have at ye! |
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| Orona | Mar 13 2007, 04:11 PM Post #13 |
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Hmm...For some reason I feel almost like Greg's came out incomplete, but I don't see where...What do you think? |
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| Deleted User | Mar 14 2007, 02:20 PM Post #14 |
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Nice! Nice indeed! I recongize the first picture. Shinobu right?
^_^ Love Hina's a good manga. Okay, for your training, I want you to make 4 refs, like you would in a journey, introducing your NPCs into Kaoru's journey. 2 with one NPC, 2 with the other NPC Have at you! |
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| Orona | Mar 14 2007, 09:13 PM Post #15 |
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You would be correct. That is Shinobu...I loved Love Hina! Oh, right, training. XP Ref #1 (Kaoru and Loren in Ayer Town): Well, you needed to build up on supplies before heading back out to train. Well, thanks to that map, you had a pretty good idea of where you were going. And what you lacked in knowledge, you made up for with charisma. So, if for any reason, you got lost or needed help, you'd simply ask the next person to walk by. Most Ayer Town residents were nice folk, anyway. While you walked down the road, you looked around, observing your surroundings. A couple of shops, a deli, even a hair salon. You noticed a group of girls standing outside of it as well. Next to the group of girls was a small cat. Well, you needed to make sure you knew where you were going, so you turned your attention back to the map in your hands. According to the map, you were supposed to take a left at some shoe emporium. You picked your head back up, looking around for it. Nope. Nothing. You then looked down to Cubone, who was supposed to be helping. Just great....Cubone left your side. Yout turned back around; she was there just a moment ago, where could she've gone? Cubone was in the center of the group of girls you saw earlier. It was a relief, sort of, knowing that Cubone was safe. But the fact that she strayed from you, oh, she would deserve some kind of scolding for that. You crossed the street and approached the group. They saw you coming and the cat jumped in front of the group, making distance between you and everyone else. Wait, that wasn't a cat. It was a Skitty. "Skitty, calm down....please?" one of the girls spoke up. She looked to be 10, maybe 11 years old. She made eye contact with you, and then shyly turned her head to nothing, not even her friends, almost as if she were scared of you. What a weird one. Well, maybe you should at least thank her for not letting her Skitty kill you, huh? Ref #2 (Kaoru and Loren on Route 2): Man, where are those wild bird Pokémon when you need them? As you continued to look through the tall grass along Route 2, you realize that this is ridiculous. Bird Pokémon aren't known for being in the grass. They're known for being in the sky. So, looking through the grass definitely wasn't going to do it. You picked your head up to the sky, debating with yourself whether or not waiting and watching the rolling clouds for birds would be worth it. Then, you looked down to Cubone, who had just been waiting by your side, just itching to fight. Before Cubone said anything, she stared off into some other part of Route 2. Your eyes were fixed on Cubone's face, so you couldn't really say what she was seeing. Then, she looked up at you, and tugged on your leg. "Bone!" she exclaimed, pinting with the bone into a bush. As you picked your head up, the bush began to rustle. Was Cubone trying to help? Was there a bird Pokémon in there? Did you trust her enough to check it out? Or, maybe there she was warning you. 'Stay away' she could've been saying. Then again, she'd probably start pushing you away if it was. So, what to do? If Kaoru chose to check it out, it would've been Loren's Skitty. She would've walked over, picked Skitty up, and apologized, thus starting a conversation, provided she gets over that lack of confidence she has. Ref #1 (Kaoru and Greg in Unknown Territory): Sunrise. A good night sleep is what everyone needs. It's good for recharging yourself, and apparently, Pokémon as well. However, there are times when sleep doesn't go your way, Especially when you're in the middle of who-knows-where and there's someone screaming at you from outside your tent. "Whoever's in there, come out right now!" Well, whoever it was yelling woke up on the wrong side of the bed. Or something woke him up, because it was at the latest 5 AM. The sun was just peeking over the horizon. You couldn't see much except for your hands, and that's how you could tell. You turned your head, to see Cubone still sleeping. Good. If she woke up, that guy would've had another thing coming..., or maybe that's just how most people would react. You were trained, and disciplined; maybe you should keep yourself beneath him or her's level. "On the count of three, I'm setting this camp ablaze. 1...." Was he serious? Maybe you should get out there, quick, before he does what he says. Obviously, the voice is Greg's. He'd explain that the area's not safe and that she should leave. He'll probably tag along for a short time just to make sure Kaoru's not a thief. Ref #2 (Kaoru and Greg at Nym Forest): Pikachu, Pikachu. One in ten. Those are the chances of finding one in forest-like areas. At least, that's what experts say. But, one in ten? Those were pretty good odds, or so you thought. Who knows where else electric types can be found? Mountains? Not likely. Lakes? Wrong. So where else? Hey, compared to nothing, 10% sounds great. But, now, you know, since you were looking, and struggling, it started to look a little hopeless, and discouraging. All of a sudden, you heard a command, some ways away. "Metal Claw!" You looked in the direction of the call, and after hearing the command, saw a tall pine tree, jump. It wasn't literal, it just looked to you like the tree had a random rise and fall in height. Of course, the change looked miniscule, and for a moment, you began to doubt your thoughts, until... "Timber!" That tree was beginning to arch in your direction. Damn. You might want to start moving, you know, before that two-ton tree, or however much it weighed, turned you into mush. And Cubone, she'll just turn into Pokémon food for whatever other wild ones walk by. Oh, here it comes. Hurry up, now. GET OUT OF THE WAY! They would only get introduced if Kaoru tried yelling at him. |
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