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Tohea Masters; FanFic Competetion entry #1
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Rob Nov 21 2006, 10:53 AM Post #1
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Before I start this story off let me tell you that this is basicly what I'd call an episode in a real pokemon anime, I've based it around that.
It will have 3 episodes. Just for all you guys. A chapter usualy is a finishing of a story. So 1 episode isnt 1 chapter ;)

Prologue (this will tell you about the hero)
Episode 1 - Big Bad Granbully!
Episode 2 - A Wildgood Battle!
Episode 3 - Don't say Ditto!





Prologue



In the great city of Ayer, the first city created in Tohea has many residents, from caring mothers to brave new pokemon trainers! Ayer is the capital city of Tohea and has been for some time. Overlooking the great city is the magnificent Ayer Gym. Home to one of the most tohean person around. Rinoa Wildgood. Her family the Wildgood's we some of the first people to start building Ayer. Her family's legacy started on this great island.
In the inner suburbs of the capital city lies some cottages made out of wood and silk string from caterpies. In one of these Cottages lives a boy called "Flint Kayoki".
He was 12 years old and started his pokemon journey 3 months ago. Over time he has spent most of his life in route 2 and 3 trying to raise up and catch wild pokemon.

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Flint Kayoki
Age: 12
Nature: Lonely - He has not many friends, he is bullied alot. This is mainly what makes him lonely.

Pokemon:

:Aron His beloved Aron, one day he left his home and wanted to to see where pokemon came from. He then saw Aron injured on route 1. They both shared a sence of lonelyness. Flint carried him to the pokemon centre to be healed and been best friends ever since. He follows Flint around, he dosen't have a pokeball.

:caterpie Caterpie was caught early in Flint's adventures, but the caterpie had the feeling of not following instructions. It didn't like how Flint behaved and wanted to see him become a stronger trainer. But unfortunately, caterpie has been known to be his least used pokemon.

:rattata Flint didn't caught this pokemon, but saw a pokemon store closing down and thought he'd better buy the rattata to save it. He has been proven useful but sometimes has the feeling to run away from Flint in battles...


And now the chapter can begin!




Episode 1 - Big Bad Granbully!



It was a bright sunny day, the sun was at the top of its peak at glorius ayer! Flint had just woken up for another adventurous day!
Flint Yawns.
"Ahh what a beautiful day right aron?"
Aron nodded happily.
Flint looked out his bedroom window to see a load of comotion going on at the City Centre.
"Looks like theres something going on Aron! Lets go find out!"
"Arrron!!!" Aron cried happily.
Flint got dressed into his normal outfit of a black poloshirt with a black collar, with blue jeans and black sneakers. He then placed on his red jacket which had a black hood that he lightly hooked over his head. he then walked out of his house casually missing his mothers awful bean soup for breakfast.

Flint and Aron raced down to Ayer Square to find out all the comotion. He then saw the Gym Leader of Ayer announcing something on a stage. He started to listen in.

"Those worthy trainers seeking for a fantastic battle better come see me in my Gym! You better hurry because I grow tired of having to put up with easy challenges! Thankyou!"
Rinoa then walks off the stage into her Gym with a crowd around the Ayer Gym doors.
"Hehheh, when she went on about easy challenges I think she was refering to people like you Flinty!"
A group of tall fat boys walked up to flint laughing at him. Aron then growled at thm fiercly but only made them laugh louder.
"ooooh, so you think your Aron can growl at me eh? Flinty?" said a bully
"Nono, Im so sorry for that. Aren't we Aron?" Answered Flint quickly.
The bullies laughed louder but then the leader of the gang put up his hand and which all the bullies stopped laughing at him.
The people started to disperse from the Square, but the bullies wern't finished with flint yet! As Flint walked away they tripped him up and started to laugh.
"Hahhahaha, what a little Flinty you are Flinty" Cried the gang leader.
Aron started to get angry, his head started to go red.
"Oooh, is that a challenge from your pathetic looking aron?" Asked the gang leader.
"Nono, it isn't!" Cried Flint.
"Too bad, this is a battle! Go Granbull!" cried out the bully.

:granbull it looked fierce and started to stare at the aron.

"Granbull! Use tackle!" commanded the gang leader.

Aron awaiting the attack tried to dodge the attack but got a hit straight in the face and fell to the ground as if injured. The bullys then laughed.
Flint was walking away when he just noticed what was going on, he ran over to Aron and try to comfort his best friend.
"You okay aron?" Asked Flint
Aron got out of Flint's arms and act as if he really wanted to battle. Flint got the sign but only shrugged.
"look, whats going to make you bullies leave me alone?"
The bullies gathered into a circle and started to discuss the issue, a few seconds later.
"We'd like to see you enter that Ayer Gym and come out absolutely trashed!" answered the gang leader whilst sniggering.
Aron looked at Flint, Flint was looking down in defeat, or in deep thought. he then raised up his head.
"Okay, fine. Will challenge the Ayer Gym!" Shouted Flint bravely.
Bullys started to break into laughter again. Aron and flint ignored them and looked at the entrance to the Ayer Gym. They walked towards the door and entered the room.

The room was filled with lights gleaming down at the gym floor. Which looked like it was made out of white marble. Flint and Aron saw a face appearing. It was Rinoa.
"Welcome, trainer. Welcome to my Gym!" cried out Rinoa.
"Are you ready to face a spectacular display of beauty grace and passion for my pokemon? The hear this, prepare for one hell of a battle!"
Flint and aron nodded at rinoa folding her arms ready to bring out her first pokemon.
 
Rob Nov 21 2006, 11:23 AM Post #2
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Episode 2 - A Wildgood Battle!




Rinoa stared down at Flint, trying to puzzle him and see right through his eyes as if she was trying to find out something about him. She stopped, she then curled her hand down to her belt holding her 3 pokeballs.
"Okay you ready trainer?" Asked Rinoa.
"Yes! I am!" Replied Flint.
"Okay go Gora!" cried out Rinoa

:clefairy The clefairy came out focused on what it had to do.

"Go Rattata!" Cried Flint.
He threw his pokemon at the arena floor and out came out of a ray of light was his Rattata!

:rattata It looked okay but was a bit intimidated by the clefairy.

"Gora use pound!" Cried rinoa whilst pointing at the Rattata.
Rinoa's clefairy ran towards the rattata at a fast speed.
"Okay Rattata lets try using quick attack!" Cried Flint
Rattata was too consumed though into what clefairy was going to do, clefairy thrown its hand really fast at Rattata only to miss by a fraction. But then rattata came back using quick attack.
"Alright good job Rattata" Happily said Flint.
Rinoa smiled then pointed at rattata again.
"Okay gora lets try sing!"
Clefairy then started to sing, the music was beautiful but for Aron and Rattata it was sending them to sleep!
"Rattata try to stay awake!" Cried out Flint
But it was too late, Rattata was consumed by the music and dropped down to the ground with a thump, he wasn't knocked out but started to snore loudly.
Rinoa laughed and then commanded Clefairy.
"Okay lets use Pound again Gora!"
Clefairy then ran towards the rattata delivering a powerful blow. Rattata was still asleep leaving Flint helpless. He didn't know what to do.
" And Again Gora!" Commanded Rinoa
Clefairy again shot a powerful blow art rattata this time knocking him out. Flint felt defeated and returned rattata to his pokeball.
"Alright its time for you Aron lets wha?" Said Flint
He just noticed that aron was asleep as well. He tried to snap aron out of it but it was no use.
"Want to end it now puny trainer. I have no time for lowlives." Said Rinoa
Flint then started to here things in his head, they were abusive words. He felt worse and worse as if he wasnt cut out to be a trainer. He felt defeated.
But then...
"Aha, I can use my Caterpie! Go caterpie!" shouted Flint eagerly.

:caterpie He looked bored and tried to show off with string shot around himself but ended up trippng itself up.

Rinoa laughed.
"hehe, your pokemon are quite the circus act! Now Clefairy use pound!"
Clefairy ran towards caterpie to use pound but caterpie was shooting string shot at it. Clefairy ended up becoming mummified with string and fell to the ground.
"alright nice work caterpie! Use tackle!" Commanded Flint.
Caterpie took his chance and ran head on at the mummified caterpie. The attack was so strong the string broke off clefairy as rinoas first pokemon collapsed before her eyes.
"Ahh impressive, Gora return" Said Rinoa
Flint was really really pleased with caterpie's success the noise woke up his aron who saw the ray of light returning the clefairy.
"Its not over yet trainer! Go Horror!" Cried Rinoa

:tauros The tauros looked fierce as if it could do some damage, it started to prepare for a charge scratching its heel on the ground several times.

"Okay finish this pest off Horror! Use Horn attack now!" Cried Rinoa pointing at the caterpie.
Tauros started to gallop towards caterpie, he got faster and faster and faster!
"Try to dodge it caterpie!" Cried Flint.

Caterpie ignored orders and tried his string shot move again, it wasn't working. Caterpie then got a horn straight into the forehead knocking him out. The impact boosted the fainted caterpie into the air which Flint catched and returned.

Aron felt as if it was his turn, he got ready for the battle knowing his opponent was tough. Flint knew Aron was his only hope, he was feeling fragile though but his aron wasn't it wanted to battle and give it everything!
"So you going to use your Aron or what?" asked Rinoa.
"yes sure I am! we're best buddies aren't we Aron? GO!" commanded Flint
"Heh, finally. Horror! Horn Attack now!" commanded Rinoa.
Tauros galloped once again but aron and Flint had an idea.
"okay aron sand attack now!"
Aron swiped some of the sand up into tauros's eyes. It couldn't see where it was going and ended up charging into the wall getting his horns stuck in the wall. Rinoa gasped in amazement. Tauros finally got his head out of the wall with some of the bricks in its horns. Tauros then charged again at Aron.
"Right lets finish this aron! Headbutt straight into its forhead go!"
Both pokemon charged at each other with great speed. They both engaged hitting ach other but Arons rock head gave him an advantage knocking tauros out, the amplify of the attack sent tauros flying with the brick on its horns crumbled.
Tauros was defeated.
"Your a very talented trainer Flint. You and Aron surpass a normal team. Lets see how you do against my next pokemon!"
Flint looked eagerly and so did aron. They awaited to see the next challenge, the last challenge between them and the normal badge!
 
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Episode 3 - Don't Say Ditto!



Before Rinoa got out her last pokemon she smiled and started to stare at flint's Aron.
"Heh, I've always awanted an Aron." smiled Rinoa.
Flint try to ignore her thinking she was trying to patronise them.
"Now im going to get one!" Cried out Rinoa happily.

Flint and Aron looked puzzled and tried to stay focused.
"Okay its time for my last pokemon! see how you do against pink!" Cried rinoa

:ditto It was a ditto! it came out of the pokeball and after a few seconds.

:Aron it managed to copy the dna of Flint's Aron and became one!

"Wola! My own Aron! Behold your end Trainer! Pink use Headbutt!"
Flint snapped out of shockness abd gave orders to aron.
"Okay, try to play weaknesses against weaknesses aron! It is a different pokemon! You must remember that! Now use dig!"
Flint's Aron started to dig underground whilst pink stood still not knowing what was going on. A few seconds later, Flint's Aron jumped out right below pink and gave it a nice blow to the chest!
"Great job Aron!" Smiled Flint
"Quick attack now!" Shouted Rinoa
Pink sprinted towards flint's aron, it was helpless and was it into the chest also!
"And again Pink!" commanded Rinoa
Pink was utterly destroying aron, every time Flint's aron tried to dodge, pink managed to find out where Aron was dodging next, Aron was helpless and got hit four or five times before collapsing to the ground in exhaustion and pain. Flint was shocked at the power of Rinoa's Aron "Pink".
"Aron, come on! We can do this!" Shouted Flint.
"This is over, your aron won't survive that!" snigger Rinoa evily.
"You have no idea of our passion for battling an succeeding Rinoa! We work hard to become the best we can! We only came in here because we were forced to by a bunch of bullies!" Shouted Flint, tears started to drop from his eyes.
Flint's aron could hear all this, the anger he felt when he was attacked by the granbull made it think, aron then was getting angry and felt a friendship between Flint and himself. He felt as if Flint was changing into a strong brave person. Aron then got up.
Aron cried out "ARRRROOOOOOOOOONNNNN!!!!"
Rinoa was scared and intimidated by this shout. When suddenly Aron started to glow, Aron was at full power it seemed and was about to evolve.
The tears shedded from Flint's eyes realising what his aron was doing. He walked up to aron and kneeled by him.
"Your my best friend Aron, nothing can change that. We will show this world what we are made of!" Cried out Flint.
Aron then gleamed and glowed. He was evolving! Pink and Rinoa looked in shock, Flint stepped away and was also in shock watching Aron glow and grow bigger. He started to grow a tail it seemed. When his evolution was finished.

:Lairon Aron became Lairon! Big strong and ready for anything Lairon gave out a big roar!

"LAIIIIROOOOOOONNNN!" Roared Lairon.

The power of the roar sent a powerful blust of wind towards Rinoa and Pink, pink was scared and changed back into a ditto!

"Pink return!" cried Rinoa.

Lairon and flint looked puzzled at what was going on.
"What? Why did you return your ditto? You have no other pokemon, thats a forfeit Rinoa!" Said Flint.
"Indeed it is trainer, what is your name?" Asked Rinoa.
"Flint, Flint Kayoki!"
"Then Flint Kayoki! I present to you the Normal Badge!"
Rinoa handed over a Badge, Flint had tears in his eyes when recieving it, and then placed it on his jacket. His first Gym Badge!

"Thankyou. But why didn't you finish the battle?" Asked Flint.
"Your Aron, well, Lairon and you showed me true friendship for each other, the combined power you shared was remarkable, a person like you deserves a badge. Besides, you saw how my Pink was hiding behind me, she was scared out of her wits!" Replied Rinoa.
"Heh yeah, we sure showed them huh lairon!"
"LAiron!" Replied Lairon happily.
"Your the first person I've seen one me over with true spirit, I've never seen a pokemon so talented and yet a trainer that cares for it so much." Smiled Rinoa.
"Yeah we rock don't we Lairon, heh we can take anybody on!" smiled Flint.
But then flint started to sadden, Lairon seemed to know why.
"Whats the matter?" Asked Rinoa
"Well, outside theres going to be bullies waiting out there to laugh at me." saddened Flint.
"Heh, don't worry! Your lairon scared even me with that roar! Im sure they will stay clear of you when you come out! Just act strong and brave, they hate that!" Replied Rinoa.
Flint smiled and started to walk to the exit with Lairon.
"Thanks Rinoa."
"No, thankyou for showing me that display" Smiled Rinoa. "Good bye!"
"Goodbye!" waved Flint
"Lairon!!" Shouted Lairon

Flint walked outside of the gym happily when the gang of bullies walked up to him
"So I guess you got absolutely trashed?" Asked a bully?
"Hmm, Wipe that smirk off your face Flinty! You got wiped!" Shouted the gang leader.
"Im afraid I didn't" Smiled Flint "That so called, Puny Aron has kind of, well, changed. Come on out Lairon!"
The bullies look in shock as Lairon comes out and starts to roar loudly at the Bullies
"LAIIIIROOOONNNNN!!!" Cried Lairon
"Aaaaaaaah Run! Its gonna eat us!!!" Cried the gang leader.
"Lets chase them this this Lairon!" Said Flint
Lairon nodded and they started to run after the gang of bullies whilst lairon roared fiercly at them. Flint just kept laughing. Lairon and Flint were not lonely anymore, they were brave and a fierce opposition!


(I hate putting this at the end but its so anime so I will)
THE END

This is for that Fanfic competetion btw.
Any comments? :)
 
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Grammar errors everywhere, a typical "To the Gym and Battle" plotline, the battle was filled with nothing but commands and 3 word descriptions of the outcome, illustrated with forum sprites, etc. :|

Grade: D-
Prizes: $100 + 1 Rare Candy
 
Rob Nov 25 2006, 02:06 AM Post #5
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Oh wells. Least I written the most. Ill consider myself not doing another one and not going for any staff position since i suck so much :/
Least i got a rare candy :)
 
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