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Tweet Topic Started: Aug 25 2006, 11:24 PM (111 Views)
Deleted User Aug 25 2006, 11:24 PM Post #1
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Well if you read my profile you know that in the rpg me and Sally have 12 older brothers welll i do she has 13 Here I will explain all of them then start my story

1.Keith: Keith is the oldest and strongest of the Kethum siblings and extremely cocky and I mean extremely fearow is the weakest of keith's Pokémon being a sturdy 43

Party: 1.:Dewgong Lv.63 2. :banette Lv.59 3. :crawdaunt Lv.61 4. :grumpig Lv.57 5. :milotic lv. 60 6. :fearow lv.43

2.Jordan: Not the strongest but a strong sibling very down to earth and unlike all his siblings he loved his mother like Sally and Larry And has her old lickitung and her skiploom's baby hoppip

Party
1. :Scizor lv.57 2. :Magcargo lv.51 3. :Lickitung lv.60 4. :Marowak lv.54 5. :Snorunt lv.44 6. :Hoppip lv 6

3.Josh:Josh is the most rude arogent and bigheaded of the siblings and has a strong dislike of Larry Sally and Jordan but he has Jordans Magcargo's twin
Party: 1. :nidoqueen lv.49 2. :nidoking lv.50 3. :Magcargo lv.51 4 . :Heracross lv.45 5. :torkoal lv. 43 6. :Swellow lv. 46

4.Bill:Bill was the third youngest of the siblings but still very well known
Party: 1. :charmeleon lv34 2. :Wartortle lv35 3. :Venusaur lv.32 4. :Dustox lv.34 5. :Beautifly lv. 34 6. :milotic lv.30

5.George: George is the father of the kethum clan and is extrmely tough

Party 1 :dragonite lv.97 2 :ariados lv.93 3 :noctowl lv.96 4 :Ampharos lv.95 5 :Charizard lv. 97 6 :ditto lv. 100


sorry didn't get them all that's all thats going tobe in this instalment of the thingy ma bob
 
Deleted User Aug 26 2006, 12:04 AM Post #2
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Keith Jordan Bill and Josh all sat in the living room with noting to do then Keith sitting in the background said "Jordan I'm so bored I think I'm going to battle you even though your a loser" they walked towards the stadium and with Keiths voice command the field turned to a forrest looking field
Round 1
"I'll give you a chance and use fearow"Keith smirked "I'll use snorunt" proclaimed Jordan making this a fair battle "Snorunt blizzard"Jordan shouted watching the field freeze and fearow shiver "Fearow aggility so you don't freeze"Keith commanded and saw Fearow hustled hard


End round stats
:fearow :Snorunt
:hp %63 :eng %93 :hp100 % :eng %79

"Fearow quickattack" Keith said lightining fast. Fearow was about to strike when Jordan quickly commanded a icy wind. then out of no where came the devastating icy wind hit fearow.
End round stats:
:fearow :Snorunt
:hp %53 :En %83 :hp %100 :en %69

my friends I leave you hanging here wait for the next part
 
Nick Sep 10 2006, 04:43 PM Post #3
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The grammar isn't the greatest, but I like all the pictures. :P. The stats, in regards to Tohea's system, are off...but hey, it's your novel and probably not based off of Tohea. ^^.

You should describe how the attacks are carried out, too.
 
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