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| Topic Started: Apr 24 2007, 09:29 PM (26 Views) | |
| pud44 | Apr 24 2007, 09:29 PM Post #1 |
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I would be grateful for your constructive critiscm about my poems, to enable me to perhaps increase the ability of my work to speak to others. Boulders His love descends upon my shoulders lifting canvas sacks of boulders I have carried so long. His love carries those canvas bags of boulders I dutifully carried for so long my responsibility, to do so I believed. His love carries those boulders to new fertile ground, to plant in rows ploughed by His sure hand. Over time with His careful tending those boulders, change renew the drag they once had upon my shoulders lifts my spirit, once concealed under a mountain of rocks. |
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