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U.S.A YUI - Lover T-Shirt Design
Topic Started: Apr 20 2011, 04:30:10 PM (543 Views)
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YUI 是我的信仰,我的爱

So I couldn't sleep last night and while I was bored I drew a basic design for a U.S.A YUI-Lover t shirt. Tell me what you guys and girls think. Any advice would be helpful.
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Kikino!
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YUI IS ALL (to me)

I think the main problem is it has too many elements,

having many elements is not bad as long as they interact with eachother. this is called consistency.

Here we see this shapes on top, the USA text the YUI text and the Lovers text, all using different codes. So it becomes confusing.

I don't really understand what that shapes on top mean. Well I can see the USA flag, but i think you can work on the concept a little more. maybe replace those random shapes with somethng more meaninful...like sakura flowers or hearts i dunno.

I like the L♥vers part the most, but try to use a font that is not so common / default.

Also, the YUI text is not really working because it has too many twirls. Capital leters of that font are thought to be used at the beginning of a word only.
That was the same problem the guys of sony had to deal with Your Heaven jackets, and the reason they wrote Yui instead!

hope it helps :sry
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