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A drawing of YUI part 4!!!; Did another drawing today...
Topic Started: Feb 11 2011, 11:21:30 AM (300 Views)
LunarChords
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Thinking in progress...

Well, here's my fourth work. Kind of off again this time, but I'll just upload it. The face shape is off i guess? I think the lack of proper sleep is the issue of my focus... So, nights people. I'm off to rest.

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Kikino!
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YUI IS ALL (to me)

Personally I think blending is really bad technique! it's very hard to master and often makes your drawing look dirty.
I would try practice ...uhmm I dont know how to say it in english = =

look at this drawing http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/1159/yuitomotherresized.jpg

graphite is not blended, volumes are mabe by many lines crossing eachother

Eyes are still to big. maybe next time try to draw them really tinny! even if it looks weird to you. It might help.

I admire your effort! The only way to get better is by practicing non stop!

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LunarChords
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Well, thanks. I'll do another drawing soon. Maybe during the weekend... Till then again. Please do give your comments to support me. Thanks people.
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hmm like my other comments on ur past works.. eyes still big..the eylashes are off too.
nose and nose bridge is off (esp the bridge)
lips needs more shadings and details (esp its highlights and dark tones on the sides)
needs more hair and should be flowing smooth.
undetailed clothes
darker tones on the shadings too bcoz as of now, it doesnt have depth and so flat.
messy shadings/smudges
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LunarChords
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Here is the edited version... still not very good but guess it'll do for now. The lips are still off but oh well... can't be helped since I've did too many plastic surgery over and over again...



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LunarChords
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Here is the final edit for this drawing. Made her eyes smaller a little this time and touch up on certain areas.


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akuma_tsubasa
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NyAPPY!~YUI-ING

oh even better you blend it just right :good
Rain photoshoot ? looks amazing :clap i like it
Edited by akuma_tsubasa, Feb 19 2011, 05:48:39 PM.
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