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Alyssa Gale; The Deadly Gale, Pirate
Topic Started: May 30 2007, 05:33 PM (426 Views)
Alyssa Gale
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PIRATE]

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.__[size=1]General Info[/size]__.
Full Name: Alyssa Jennifer MecGale
Pirate Name: Alyssa (Deadly) Gale
Pirate Name Explanation: Alyssa was only 16 when he father's crew started calling her the Deadly Gale. She often wondered about the meaning of it until her father told her that it represents kinda like A Nighting Gale than has gone somewhat rather evil. That name has stuck with her since then. Her last name means NightingGale ans since she's A pirate 'deadly' was added on. Alyssa NightingGale = Pirate = Alyssa (Deadly) Gale.
Age: 24
Gender: Female

.__[size=1]Appearance[/size]__.
Overall Appearance:
Alyssa is an average in height with a tomboyish look about her. She has stunning hazel eyes which hints off her overall personality. She has dark brown hair layered down to the nape of her neck. Alyssa usually wear a bandana to tie up her hair when she's working. She has light to tan skin from being in the sunlight for to long. Alyssa tends to have a good posture about herself, but she tends to lean against something or put her feet up on a nearby table. For her attire she wears brown breeches that has stains from blood battles or have patches from cuts long ago. Her white shirt has turn to a yellowish brown from weather worn or not changing which she does occassionally. Her shirt is half way tucked into her bown breeches that supports a black leather belt has houses her father's cutlass. She also wear a long dark red flock that sceretly hides her pistol and dagger. She wears this coat only if she's in a town or on a beach. Alyssa's boats are more a hispantic type of boats from the Aztecs.

Also Alyssa wears what looks like a gold chain with a Aztec coin (not cursed) from her mother on her 13th brithday. Alyssa has several tattoos on her. One is a dolphin on her left upper arm that means freedom and loyality. She has a star tattoo on her right ankle that signatifies when she was born and that she loves the nighttime also like a night owl. Alyssa also wears a coverup going into sertain non-pirate ports for spying. She usually wears a simple villiage dress and a wide rimmed sun hat that her mother had worn in years past to cover up the messy hair of hers. During her spying she always carries her gold dagger in case of an chase or a uneasy mishap.
Hopeful Celebrity: Kelly Clarkson
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Cutlass
pistol
dagger
sometimes a rum bottle

.__[size=1]Personality[/size]__.
Personality:
Alyssa in general is determened and adventerious. She always looks for the best in people and treats them with respect. Alyssa has a caring and friendly side towards her friends and would help or defend them if they couldn't do it on thier own. She always half-listens to every word that comes from her friends. If Alyssa sees anyone that she knows being hurt or picked on. She will stand up for them and get very angry at her opponiate.

On the other side of her the main words of clever, short tempered, and the common most one Defensive. Alyssa is clever and smart of charting out maps and back tracking if they get lost. She is very short-tempered getting mad and defensive at the same time. When this thing happens she become with-drawn and very quite not wanting to be bothered with. She would always have good opinions that people like and agrees with. Alyssa is also a evil little wrench always wanting to do things her way even though sometimes she . She is also lustful towards her flirting oppoints. She's easliy entertained and loves to have a good time. Her words of kindess speak to her friends when they are down.

Alyssa likes to be introduce to random people and if she doesn't like them she doesn't say anything, but kees it to herself. When it comes to fighting with other pirates she tends to be a follower until appionted otherwise. She doesn't like to speak to a great number of people because of her keen sense of shyness and weak knees.

When it comes to the game of love. Alyssa knows what to do with a pirate, who as a thing for her. She plays The Plain Hard To Get until the game stops. She likes it that way, but doing so people take adventage of her and began to push her buttons. She's also very tender hearted when it comes to someone, who is seriously injured or dying. Alyssa is not what all pirates expect from her, but that is the way Alyssa is.

Likes:
Practicing Swordfighting
Having fun
occasional firlting

Dislikes:
EITCo
Death
deadly warfar

Strengths:
Sword skills
navigation either map or compass
convincing others
backtracking
bieng brave
loyal towards her alliance
helping others

Weaknesses:
stubborn
losing her friends
staying away from the ship to long


.__[size=1]History[/size]__.
Personal History:
Alyssa was born to an American pirate captain Richard McGale, who was the Pirate Lord of the Atlantic during the first brethern. Her mother Daniella Garica from Spanish Mexico gave birth to her during an unexpected war with the American Military. Her life was bieng a pirate since she first took her first steps. Alyssa was rised as a pirate, learning how to sword fight at an early age of 7 and was a skilled master at the age of 13. She loved her family especailly her father, who told her many tails from different places that he has been to. Alyssa always did her part on board her father's ship and loved it.

One day the Brethern made a call to go and defend a every important pirate port in the Caribbean. The long, but dangerous warfare went on forever, many ships were lost and even Alyssa (age 17) was fighting as well. A cannon left an American or British Naval ship and hit her father causing him to disappear overboard. The whole crew even her mother was mourning thinking that he was dead. Later that night on they're way back to the war Alyssa saw her mother take her own life. She was buried that night without warning, now Alyssa was the captain of her father's ship and withdrew it from the war.

7 years later Alyssa had left captaicy for a crew member life on board a pirate ship, but soon left it without warning or a reason that caused a state of confussion onboard. During this time she came across a old man that happened to be her father alive. She told him about her mother's tragic death of thinking that he was dead. Alyssa gave his ship back to him to sail the oceans once again. A year later she finally found a ship that needed help and she finally accepted the fact that she was meant to sail the seas as a working pirate. Even though her captain was a girl she felt safe and yet opened to everything around her. Alyssa always defended her right and others in some kind of an agruement turning into an on coming battle. Alyssa is a true pirate to the end always standing up to the colors and the code.
Family:
Captain Richard McGale
Daniella Maira Garcia-McGale
Love Interests on TTC: Currently looking

.__[size=1]Conclusion[/size]__.
Any extra information we need to know about? no

RP example:
Alyssa smiled slyly at the pirate would who causing alot of trouble in Tortuga. She walked up to him like a princess. She touched him and looked at him. A clever smile appearing on her face.
"I heard that a smart and ranbious pirate unlike youself is causing so much trouble." she said as all three captains and four crew members raised there eyebrows at her.
The pirate said something charming which at this point Anastasia picked up a half empty rum bottle and hid it behide her back.. She did something that other pirate girls had done by wrapping one of her legs around the pirate.
"Well, if you think that your so smart then you.." she said bashing the rum bottle over his head causing him to fall."You are so wrong."
She heard clapping and cheering behide her. Ana turned to find all the crew members and captains clapping.
"You're amazing." her captain said with excitment. Alyssa smiled and thank her before riviling the set of the crew members up and heading to her captain's ship.

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Giselle Van Garrith
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Ok, I'm not accepting or denying you at this point. I'm going to call you an [size=7]Inbetweener![/size] Yes I know very witty >.< Anyways I don't want to outright deny you b/c you are almost there.

There are just a few things I would liek you to take care of.

1. This has been irritating me for a bit now, but every female pirate that I have seen so far on this board is loving, caring, gentle, blah, blah, blah! I love the part about Alyssa being short tempered! Though I'm just annoyed that every single female pirate is so damn sensitive. I think that if you are a pirate you must have some evil in you or a really good reason to why you want to pillage, plunder, rifle, and loot! But don't get me wrong pirates were very democratic and followed their own guidlines very strictly. So if originality is what you are looking for then you need to make some changes.

2. I keep reading that every little pirate wench has a dead father. Again with the originality. Now please don't think that I am asking you to go and read every single persons app to see if they have your idea (that's why I'm here lol), but maybe changing a couple things in your history would make you a more realistic and more of an individual. Also your personality needs to be at least three paragraphs.

Anyways, I can't wait to welcome you! ^.^
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Alyssa Gale
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Okay I twiked it a little making her self-centered and lustful. And her history of the disappearance of her father.

I hope this is alright.
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Giselle Van Garrith
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You still need to add a bit more to your appearance., though I like what you said about her clothing.
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Alyssa Gale
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okay I added a bandana and a coin necklace.

anything else?
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Crimson Thorn
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-jumps in-

No, Giselle doesn't mean a 'little bit' as in two items added. She means that you need two more paragraphs to meet our minimum requirement.
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Alyssa Gale
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Okay I made the two paragraphs that you two wanted. It's all there.
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Crimson Thorn
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No....two imore paragraphs! Three is the minimum! And I can't see paragraphs...I see blobs of text. Please show that they are indeed paragraphs? Same goes for the history....
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Alyssa Gale
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I made it easier to see.
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Giselle Van Garrith
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[size=7]Accepted[/size]
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