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Luis Sera
Topic Started: May 28 2007, 09:29 PM (210 Views)
Luis Sera
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[PIRATE]

●»»[size=5] Out of Character [/size]

Name/Alias: Wade
Age: 15
Contact: micaljaxon@yahoo.com
Other Characters: The Gentleman

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.__[size=1]General Info[/size]__.
Full Name: Luis Sera
Pirate Name: He's not a pirate YET, so he doesn't have one.
Pirate Name Explanation: He doesn't have one yet, because he isn't exactly a pirate yet.
Age: 28, and still going strong
Gender: Male

.__[size=1]Appearance[/size]__.
Overall Appearance: Luis' hair is long, brown, and wavy. It droops into his face a little. He figures that his hair is one of the most irresistible things about him. He also regularly has some slight facial hair His eyes are a solid blue-gray. They are very mysterious, but also very cheerful and sometimes almost boring. His eyes aren't really the best.

He weighs around 148 lbs. and has a very slim build but it is lined wrll with muscle. He's considerably tall at 5'11. He has a slight grungy look to him, and he's not really all that handsome, despite his claiming to be gorgeous. Despite this, he is a man of class.

He spends most all his money into his clothes, and keeps himself looking as good as possible. At least he knows that women don't like a man who smells like a barbarian. Lately, he's been favoring a classy vest over a long flowy long-sleeved dress shirt. He wear a thick brown belt, with tough brown pants and brown shoes. That being said, he's more of a stylish-yet-casual sort of person.

Hopeful Celebrity: ???
Picture:
Effects:

Luis's weapons are things he prizes. He wields a straight Spanish and jeweled rapier, made by the very finest. It is encrusted in Rubies, and stands out on his shabby wearings.

+Rapier http://i18.photobucket.com/albums/b108/mic...pier_1605_2.jpg

His gun is also very unique. Most handguns can only shoot once or twice (depending on the number of barrels), but Luis had a special handgun crafted, so that it can fire four shots without reload or cock. It's an extremely powerful gun, and therefore big and bulky, loaded by unique clips.

+Pistol:
http://i47.photobucket.com/albums/f160/Dod.../mauser1896.jpg


.__[size=1]Personality[/size]__.
Personality: A self-proclaimed ladies man, Luis is often chasing after them; and being rejected. He isn't nearly as suave as he likes to believe. He tosses out witty comments right and left, and has a good heart deep down, but his personality is constantly getting in the way, and getting himself in trouble. That aside, Luis is actually a truly good person.

He likes to be a bit of the life of the party. He's the guy drinking and making everyone around him smile and getting a bit too wild. He just loves to have fun. He typically doesn't listen to very many people, unless he has a good sense that that person owns him. Is higher up in the food-chain than him. Sometimes, Luis can use his suave personality to get what he wants, but he's not necessarily on that level of deceit.

He's honest and extremely loyal. Luis sticks by his duties and follows orders extremely well. If Luis and his comrade are trapped, and Luis has the chance to escape but without his friend, then there would be no question in his mind that the two of them would fight until the death. Luis has a good heart and a good should, and always means well in practically everything he does, but his fascination and border obsession for the opposite sex seems to get in his way frequently.

All in all, Luis is a good person, but it's hard to see that through a thick exterior.

Likes:
+ Females
+ Cash
+ Gold
+ Chicks
+ Gold
+
Dislikes:
+ Being deceived
+ Idiots
+ Being hit
+ Looking like a fool
Strengths: A very good talker. He is very persuasive and manipulative. This is just the minor strong traits he possesses however. His loyalty shines abouve all else. He's the type of guy who would stay with you till the death.
Weaknesses: Women get to him, and shiny things. Yeah, that's like, the two things that tend to get in his way the most. Also, his personality and the way he tends to want to have fun and slack off gets on peoples nerves. Still though, he is loyal to a specific person.
.__[size=1]History[/size]__.
Personal History: Born in Spain, raised in Spain, he's a Spaniard to the bone. He was born to an extremely wealth family in Spain. He was a nephew to ruler of the country, and as such his parents were indulged deeply into politics and he lived like a prince. Luis spent his time learning and developing fencing. His style is called the Epee`style.

It focuses more on the defense rather than offense, and it requires extreme skill to use the style. It consists of fast blade techniques and it is a bit of an 'improv' style, making it bendable for him to adjust to any type of terrain. But abouve all else, Luis' fencing looks extremely stylish and he is an expert in showing off with it. He can do numerous sword flips, spins, twirls and other eye-catching feats.

His life was all going well up until he reached his eighteenth year. He happened to be out of his home-city, when there was an attack. Luis' family were all dead, supposedly their home collapsed upon them during a fire. the only thing Luis has left, is his father's jeweled rapier sword. Upon asking the few survivors of the city, they told him of pirates coming into port and attacking. Knowing nothing of pirates, he set out, believing that Davy Jones were his parents killer. He seeks revenge against him, though Davy was not their actual killer. ((cliche`, I know))

Upon leaving Spain, he honed his skills for years and entered the Caribbean, where he quickly became a drunk. He turned to rum and thought that drowning himself in it would make all his problems. He remained in this state of a pathetic drunk for a few years, until around twenty-three, he decided to pick up his life again. Luis had known bits and parts of the English language, but at this time he began to become fluent in it. Simply by listening to others and occasionally asking for help. He can speak it near perfect now, though his accent is strong, and when he gets considerably angry, he may start rambling in Spanish. He was now poor, with nothing really but the clothes on him, his sword, and his gun. he now looks to join a crew of some kind, as First Mate.


Family: + Mother deceased
+ Father. Deceased
+ Twin Siblings. Deceased.
Love Interests on TTC: Any pretty girl that may be walking by at that moment. =P

.__[size=1]Conclusion[/size]__.
N/A

RP example: Sometimes, Luis just wanted to shoot someone. Right now, he wanted to shoot that girl who had stolen his pouch full of gold. Of course, when he found her, he wasn't really going to, but he felt like it. He should have known not to let her kiss him like that. It was too good to be true. A girl just coming up to him and having a good ol' time. Sure, in his dreams it happened all the time, but he wasn't dreaming now. In fact, he had pinched himself just to make sure that he wasn't.

Singapore was so crowded. Singapore was always crowded. It was going to be impossible to find this girl. Luis had some difficulties navigating through the crowd, and cursed loudly. He didn't see her anywhere, and quite frankly, he was thinking about giving up. It was his fault that he was robbed so easily anyway. She had just swiped it right off him while they were kissing. Then he tuned around for just a moment (to have a drink) and when he turned back, she was gone.

There! the same pretty pink dress! he only saw the back of it, but he was certain it was her! Pushing some idiot down, and stepping over a chicken (how foolish to let chickens go about) he began running for her. She was walking, and she would be easy to catch up to if the place wasn't so densely populated. god, he was running into people bigger than him, and constantly having to find other routes. the only way to get the drop on her, would be to take a shortcut. And he saw his shortcut.

Slipping into the shadows, he too an immediate right, and had to travel through into an alley. The man was quite calm in moving to the opening of the alley-like crevice that was in the middle of the building. he waited. Waited so patiently for the woman to shoq herself. Pink! He saw the pink dress and lunged for it, bringing the woman down.

"You have something that belongs to me, lady! I want it back, lady. Now you-- sorry. Sorry. Dreadfully sorry."

Not the right woman. She was large, fat, and scary looking. Only, he noticed upon further inspection after getting off of her, she wasn't fate. per say. No. She was muscled. Large. Very unfeminine like. She frightened her. And now she was approaching him. Slowly, but surely, and she did not look happy. IT did not look happy.

"Very sorry senorita. A beauty like you wouldn't--" a sudden fist in his face told him that there would be no talking out of this one. Not for Luis Sera, who was now on the floor. Completely unconscious. And currently being robbed. Again.

Except this time, he would be robbed of his pants.

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Crimson Thorn
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HAHA! OH MY GOD, I loved your RP sample! :lol:

-ahem-

ANYWAYS--down to business.

You're appearance is quite one-sided...it being in a first-person POV...and it makes Luis sound like a 'tard for being so cocky. >__>; -punchesLuis- If you don't mind changing it and writing the minimum requirement of three paragraphs, then that will be good. And about you're computer...game...character thingy, I rather have a REAL person playing the characters here. It's not that hard to think of a movie with a grungy-looking dude that you can look up pictures for, aye? If you need any help, you may ask me.

Also, keep in mind that the simplest grammar errors are the easiest to find--so go looking for them! XD Copy and paste your posts in Microsoft Word before posting or something, eh?

Other than that, very original, and I loved it!

OH! And if you're a Spaniard, how does Luis know English? -blinkblink- Please explain in your history!
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Luis Sera
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Re-reading that, i realized how out of it I must been while writing that last night! Hahaha~!

Anyway, I fixed the appearance, and hopefully fixed most of the grammar errors. I only skimmed it though, because I'm at school and can't really take so much time here.

As for the actor thing, I'm having a terribly difficult time finding someone to use. Could you please maybe perhaps possibly help me? You know. A grungy Spaniard?
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[size=7]Accepted![/size]

Rennie and I decided that either of these two men would work well for your character: Jared Padalecki and Cillian Murphy


-added by Rennie:

Ashy also said that Spainards look like they're white, and she's all knowledgable :3
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