If you can read this, the song is A Little Peace of Heaven by Avenged Sevenfold. A WARNING, the video is very graphic.
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| Topic Started: Sep 14 2006, 02:05 AM (150 Views) | |
| Ginta | Sep 14 2006, 02:05 AM Post #1 |
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im bored and the go site isnt working so im going to make this up as i go along....*im still working on the names so....i know they are lame but im working on it*[EDIT] I have some names to try but they are from anime/manga I like because I cant think of any thing else...*the fun part is finding what anime/manga they go too^^*[edit] -------------------note-this isnt a fanfic------------------------ Tokiya, Yuki and Homura were walking down the sidewalk talking. Yuki saw a poster and said "its too bad school started...that concert is on a thursday" Tokiya laughed and said "I'm going, im not missing this for school!" Homura rolled his eyes and said "last time you tried skipping school you got caught and had detention for a while" Tokiya rolled his eyes and walked off. "Yuki glanced over his shoulder and saw a cop car driving by and said "run Tokiya its coming for you!" and started laughing "thats not funny "he said and continued walking. Homura looked around and said "I'm going home now..its getting late!" Yuki said "okay! see you tommorow!" and walked home. "hi Yuki! you got a phone call earlier" his little sister said when he walked in "who was it?" he asked,she turned on the t.v and said "no idea!" and snatched the remote. "why didn't you take a message,Akane?" Yuki asked,"because I was busy" she said, " you don't even go to school,how can you be busy?" he asked,"i forgot...oh well" she turned the tv off and said nothing goods on". |
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| Raikou-Neko | Sep 14 2006, 05:08 AM Post #2 |
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its pretty good! But I suggest go back and capitalizing the names... |
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| Ginta | Sep 20 2006, 12:08 PM Post #3 |
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i stopped capitilizing because I'm going to change their names once i get some better ones...these are temporary... now that I'm home again I can work on them....its taking a little longer than i thought though... |
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| The White Tiger Alchemist | Sep 20 2006, 06:57 PM Post #4 |
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Well I can't wait to see how you'll manipulate the plot, please post soon! I love it when people write, everyone seems to have fun with it! So I'll be awaiting your update, 'kay? |
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| Ginta | Sep 21 2006, 12:46 PM Post #5 |
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I updated it! I found some names! even the sisters! *very common name though..sorry ^^*and the chapters will go by days...so 1 is monday,,, ------------------Tuesday "Wake up or you will miss the bus!" Akane yelled in Yuki's ear,"finaly some good news" Yuki said half asleep,"wake up or I will throw Chompers into your bed!" she yelled in his ear,"okay-I'll get up,just keep that sadistic dog away from me and walked to school.Tokiya was standing outside with a cig in his mouth "put that out or you might get in trouble!" Yuki said."why do you think I'm outside?"Tokiya said,(he quickly threw it in the bushes). "Are you going to that party after school?" Tokiya said, "nope,I'm busy" Yuki said sadly,"I already tried to get out of this but i can't..." "thats too bad..all the cool people are going to be there!"Tokiya said. The bell rang so everyone rushed to their classes,"wheres homura?" whipsered Yuki,"late again" Tokiya said" thats 2 days in a row now..." "be quiet and pay attention!" the teacher said "whats his problem?" Yuki thought to himself. hours later,school ended "Bye Tokiya! f get this done fast I might be at that party!" Yuki said while running home. Tokiya went home to change his clothes, he got home and he found out that his house was broken into, "What happened here?" he said, "someone broke in" his brother said. Tokiya ignored him and walked around the house to see what was stolen, "NO! ITS GONE!" he yelled, his brother ran upstarirs and said "what is?" and he said "um...nothing...i was trying to scare you! go back downstairs" he picked up the phone and tried to call Homura--no answer-- so he called Yuki and said "Yuki, remember that thing I found at that one place?" Yuki said "you mean that thing that was supposed to be cursed by some evil spirit that was worth alot?" Tokiya said "yeah,that...its been stolen! what if someone is trying to--" Yuki interrupted and said "hold it- this isn't some fictional story! theres no such things as ghosts! and besides-if this story was about ghosts then it would be put in the horror section!" *lol-just a little joke-its really not a horror story* Tokiya got a little mad so he hung the phone up."that thing was going to be a gift..." he heard a sound,"whats that sound?" sirens... ""not good,the police..now I'm going to have to miss that party...and where is Homura anyway? he wasnt at school...and he wasnt at home...maybe hes at the doctor..thats probably it..." |
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| Ginta | Sep 26 2006, 11:46 AM Post #6 |
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* read a book where it awitched main character every chapter and since its one of my favorite books-I'm doing it to! lol* Wednsday- Homura woke up and walked to school and saw Tokiya and Yuki looking around, "whats up guys?" he said, "WHERE WERE YOU?" they yelled, "I was sick..." he said quickly,"then why didnt you answer the phone?" the bell rang, "Saved by the bell" Homura thought, after school Yuki,Homura and Tokiya went to the movie place to watch Fullmetal alchemist. "That movie was awesome!" Yuki said, "it wasnt as good as I hoped" Tokiya said,"but still good" Homura said "gotta go! lots of homework!"and ran off "...we dont have homework tommorow" Yuki said to Tokiya, "somethings up...and I donnt like being left in the dark,lets see what hes been up to lately friday,how about that?"Tokiya thought for a moment and said "all right! but I need to get home,I have to make dinner tonght" "Dont burn the house down!"Yuki yelled. Homura paced around his room waiting for the phne to ring,it rang, "Hello?" Homoura said,"hello,is this Homura?" said an unknown voice, "Yes it is" he said,"good,I just called to make sure you knew your box arrived here,we will send it to you and you will get it in 2 days, so this friday be sure to skip school to get the box or your mom might get it" and then hung up." okay...looks like I'm sick again friday..."Homura said,then turned out the lights and slept. |
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| Ginta | Sep 26 2006, 11:46 AM Post #7 |
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[Edit-it made me double post ><* |
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| Ginta | Sep 28 2006, 05:18 PM Post #8 |
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Thursday------- Yuki woke up and wondered "why do I have to go to school ...I don't want to be a lawyer or anything..." he ate breakfast and went to school,he saw Homura and Tokiya and then remembered "Tommorow is the day we see what that guy is up to..." and yelled "Hey guys!" Tokiya looked over and said "you study for the test?" Yuki ignored him and said "Homura,you sure get sick alot" Homura looked around and said "yeah...thats because my little brother keeps playing in the sewer...-"bell ring, "saved by the bell,eh Homura?" Yuki thought and walked to his classroom.several hours later. "School is finaly out!" Yuki said happily, "I'm gonna get some pizza! who else wnats some?"Tokiya replied," I'll come!" ?Homura looked around and said "um...no thanks...gonna do homework..." and left. as he was walkng a car drove by and someone came out and grabbed Homura and drove off."WTF?? "Yuki yelled,"he just got kidnapped! call the cops!" Tokiya hopped on his bike and said go haead-I'm gonna get the license plate number!" they chased him and it turned out to be his cousin taking him to the concert.*had to wrap it up or I would never finish this chapter* |
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| Ginta | Oct 10 2006, 02:03 AM Post #9 |
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Friday- Tokiya couldn't sleep at all last night,he got sick at the concert,"todays the day me and Yuki would have spied on Homura...I'm just not feeling very good" *bus!* |
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| Ginta | Oct 17 2006, 11:09 AM Post #10 |
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-story ends here...i dont like it and i dont like writing a story i dont like.....- |
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