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| PHEREME | Feb 5 2006, 10:39 PM Post #1 |
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We have to write (with pics) a story for our final grade, I'm still writeing it but I have good stuff so far. Basically I'm indecisive between the "Crimson" ending and the "Runaway" ending so please choose one. After fighting the Kusabi, we were ready for anything. The sun was softly rising, and it was high time to take a break so we exited outside. The birds were chirping softly and I could faintly hear the sound of rushing water from the creek where we found the bag. Mio sat down next to me, her hair glowing from the light, it danced in the wind and her smile made me feel I could tell her anything. We’ve gone through hell and back to get where we are. She scooted closer to me; she wrapped her arms around me in a warm embrace and gently whispered into my ear. No matter what happens, I’ll forgive you. This was the third time she told me that, did she too know of the ritual? Quote~ “In a area outside Tokyo, there lies a mansion I which it’s said seven people were murdered in a grisly manner. On the same property, there lie three detached residences that surround the mansion, all which are rumored to have ties to the mansion’s troubled past. It It’s said there is an underground network of tunnels that lay beneath the premises, but nobody knows who made these tunnels or what purpose they served. Many inexplicable phenomenon have been reported occurring on the property. Bloody handprints have been splattered all over the walls. Sprits have been spotted on the premises… even in broad daylight. A narrow stairway leads to an attic where a sprit-sealed talisman is rumored to be locked away. Men sought this talisman, only to be found latter with their bodies broken and rope marks around their wrists. There’s crumbling old statue of a woman in a kimono, but its head is missing. If you take a picture of a certain window, a young girl can be seen in the developed picture. Theses incidents have provoked fear in the people of Tokyo, and many believe that those who live near this area will be become cursed, The deaths of those seven people are unexplained to this day.” ~ Quote by Makoto Shibata, Chief Producer of Fatal Frame (Zero). ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Crimson ending We pushed past the large door and reentered the cavern the smell of demise had once again been forced upon us. There was only once place we haven’t been, we had avoided it for we knew what was inside. But we had to face our demons, literally. There were two large doors that stood on either side of us, but they lead to the same room, they had kanji written on them: Kirie on the left and Remaining on the opposing. I knew that I was to be the remaining; we opened our respective doors, but Mio got in first. Inside was a room filled with candles; it was a room very familiar to me. I had seen this place in my visions and in my darkest nightmares. There was an altar standing in the center of the room across an octagonal pedestal, surrounding it thousands of candles guarding the immediate area. None were lit though. We walked hand and hand. Our clothes changed with every step, we were soon wearing kimonos, similar to the other shrine maidens. We walked to the pedestal, and as we did, one by one, the candles lit up, they cast a dim light on us that allowed me to see Mio once more. I looked upon myself and saw, to my horror, the fate of my sister, my kimono did not have red imprints, and it was wet with blood, the blood of those who came before us. The Abyss wanted us to perform the Crimson Ritual. She had let go of my hand and walked much faster to me now. She stood alone at the alter; she met with the remains of the high priest. The succession of the ritual was now in full swing. I was being pushed forward by men with white robes like the priest, all their faces covered. I was worried now what would happen, but Mio just gave me a shy smile. Had she given up on herself? She whispered in the midst of the song, but I heard it clearly. Kill me.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Runaway Ending Mayu… why are you leaving me? I ran, never looking back, I couldn’t face what I had to do. Mayu, don’t run. I tripped over a wet log, falling face first, I trusted my hands out in front of me to break my fall, but it was to no avail. My hands burned with hate and sorrow, my skirt was badly torn, my legs badly cut and twigs entangled in my hair. A single tear came down my right cheek. I felt alone, but she felt worse. Mio stood at the alter alone, she couldn’t perform the ritual alone, it would fail just as Yae’s and Sae’s ritual. But she was determined to try. The high priest and the lone mourning crept out of the dark and once more to take their place in the ritual. They awaited the two shrine maidens. But one never came. Mio’s eyes looked towards the door in hope that I would come, but I was long gone, I had omitted her from my life in order for her to thrive. My hands never touched her throat, but she remained inert. Frozen in time, it seemed like hours pasted as she waited. Eventually, the Abyss could not wait any longer. If the abyss was not pleased with the offering it would unleash the Calamity. Chitose, Itsuki, Mutsuki, they died for nothing if it doesn’t work. But in order for Mio to live, I had to leave. Mio was cold, just as my heart was. I reached the shrine where the others escaped through. Thousands of talismans sealed the door, but I was able to open it. Inside was a small ladder that led to a cave. Written on the walls were Kanji symbols that told how to leave. But the last step was blurred. I stepped close to read it. Mayu, why are you leaving me? Don’t you love me? Didn’t we promise to always be together? Mio’s voice rang through my head once again. It suddenly became cold again; I turned to see a transparent figure. Sae was draped in the same kimono as I. She came close to me; I could feel her long hair touch my shoulders. She extended her arm out to touch my shoulder. Her touch was cold as ice, and was painful; it left a blue imprint that covers my whole back. I felt lightheaded. When I awoke, I was standing, alone, near the Twin Deity Statue. The village was gone; I had run to the hill overlooking the village. I stubbed my toe on a rock; I looked down to see what it was. To my right was Mio’s pendent. |
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| TheRedDeath | Feb 6 2006, 12:52 AM Post #2 |
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Very greatly written. I like both, but I had to go with crimson. |
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| PHEREME | Feb 6 2006, 12:56 AM Post #3 |
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9 def 17 magic def In BERA Edit: Didn't notice we had a price check section... So I'm bascailly going with higest price to auction |
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| Anthony | Feb 6 2006, 06:26 PM Post #4 |
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150k~200k |
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| PHEREME | Feb 21 2006, 06:58 AM Post #5 |
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aww... bought for 180k |
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