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| Zakou's poetry.; Dey r gewd. trst m. :) | |
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| Zakou | Jun 20 2007, 12:36 PM Post #1 |
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The dragon of Mist.
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I'll only post two here for now... Tell me what you guys think! XD Info: Some rhyme, some don't. Lullaby of death. There’s so much dark in the light Yet this man still puts up a fight But he can’t win For he’s been done in There’s no more for him Every breath could be the last whim He clutches his far and close soul Wishing his pain would just roll And slip through his weakened hand He’ll lose it all like glass to the sand His tears are of the agony The disease in his heart All of hope destroyed The seams torn apart He looks to his child Of which can never come back He weeps a sad tune That of which could make heaven crack His lullaby of death Remorse to his love Consists of forgiveness That’s makes fly the dove So he sings with regret As the fight was never fought His closes his eyes forever To think what could never have been brought My Rose out of Violets. So there she is My rose out of violets The unique of the few The key to my license With love how I trust This maiden of fair wonder With it as our pillar We'll never go under But we'll sink and we'll swim In a clear blue true love To be saved my life's rope To not feel hates shove For she is my rose out of violets The one so proud and tall The growth of us might be hindered But surely we'll never fall For we go beyond the reach Of the poets and the dreamers Our bond is but unbroken Filled and lined with committing streamers So I look to her My rose out of violets Like fog she disappears before my eyes And everyday without her thus My heart and soul surely dies Tell me if you want me to post more... I'm trying to find a way to get published, but so far no luck XD I have a ton of poems
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| Kakashi Elite | Jun 20 2007, 01:32 PM Post #2 |
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NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER MY NIGGER NIGGER
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I read the first one, I guess I liked it. I'm just not a big fan of poetry
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I HAVE HERPES FROM MY MOTHER PLEASE MAKE SEX WITH ME | |
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| Ryo88 | Jul 17 2007, 07:38 PM Post #3 |
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Shammy Rae
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wow you have a way with this kind of stuff i could never come up with anything like that.... ^~^ |
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| Kaji | Jul 19 2007, 08:04 PM Post #4 |
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Sannin
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Pretty nice. I not really into poetry though. But still pretty nice. |
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| Kazoku_ Satarou | Jul 24 2007, 09:01 AM Post #5 |
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Genin
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Very good! |
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| Arashi | Jul 25 2007, 03:42 PM Post #6 |
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Genin
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Wow, I really liked them
And I especially found myself becoming fond of your poem A Rose out of Violets <3 I love how every verse just sees to flow into the next, I really love them, your really good! You should post more <3
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I love Axel and Demyx <3
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And I especially found myself becoming fond of your poem A Rose out of Violets <3 I love how every verse just sees to flow into the next, I really love them, your really good! You should post more <3

1:46 AM Jul 11