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| product vs disasta | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 29 2006, 11:16 PM (616 Views) | |
| product | Mar 29 2006, 11:16 PM Post #1 |
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FUCK how many BARS N ROUNDS JUST SPIT BITCH! Im Planning 4 a execution/ this rocket launcher be my solution/ in my war for retribution/ u just polution/ cuz i c this rap game as the ozone/gets worse evrytime u moan/thought u was grown/actin like a kid/prick u can suck my dick/n my tone/ bitch gohome/ya words soft as foam/grab my chrome/45 4 cappin/u aint made forrappin/especially scrappin with g'z like me/ im deep/in the streets n with the speech/u just a leech/ sic-illy/ u could neva beat/ive got too much heat/ bet with you catchin dope lines in ya brains like find n seek/ (DUMBASSBITCH) thatswhy ya talk is cheap/disasta just plain/sic illy hydro like maryjane/ bionic chronic/disasta take 1 hit n vomit/im too insain/plus my game a different strain/ u pussy/on the net sellin yo ass sucky sucky 5 dolla/ fuck that 1.50 so atleast ull get a holla/ product a balla grown shot calla eradicatin fakes n fonies/(disasta & nza) ya just get votes from ya homies/ (dickriderz=nza&disasta) it been me n mcillem solely/just us on our lonely/ that fuckd u up/thinkin u dope bitch but u outta touch/ cuz nowu gettin rushed/pushed ova tha edge/holdin on to the ledge/ tryin to pledge wot usaid was wrong/ but im'a makesure u cant hold on/ hit the floor/splatter ya body/ thats wot u get fortryin to act cocky/ u cant mock me/cant stop me/ya flow poxy/ya prossy/ go put on ya red light like roxy/ im too hot see/the scriptures just leave u in hells fixtures/ i had to do this with the right mixture/ just like an alixa/ cuz u fuckd around n i had to split ya/flipya/rip ya up/ in these lyrical gats i trust/ face crushed to the ground the pace of the pound 2 fast 2 see/ come on im on a higher level then u even ya momma agree/let it be/ SIC-ILLY CLAIMZ ANOTHER VICTORY/ in the end flesh torn entrails adorned by demons/ cuz i gotta feed em/any way u gonna meet em/ greetem at hells gates/we already late/ shouldda killed u the date u decided to rhyme/ cuz bitch u aint got 1 dope line/ heres how to spit take a look at MINE/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^ fuck u punk ass bitches. u want beef lets go! |
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My Webpage ILL-FINITY RECORDZ PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine) MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN! BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P | |
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| NZA | Mar 30 2006, 01:39 AM Post #2 |
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Crazy structure, but some good rhymes. Uppin Disasta. |
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| mcillem | Mar 30 2006, 06:43 PM Post #3 |
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ha ha ha see nza this explain things Ha product thats the shit uppin disasta |
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| product | Mar 30 2006, 06:46 PM Post #4 |
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i was jus crazy typin,possesed n shit,cheers 4 tha holla mcillem. up we go where the fuckz thiz ho? |
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My Webpage ILL-FINITY RECORDZ PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine) MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN! BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P | |
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| mcillem | Mar 30 2006, 07:31 PM Post #5 |
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i ant getting touched its you beefing on honest votes its all good |
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| NZA | Mar 31 2006, 01:42 AM Post #6 |
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What? Disasta will come out man... But chill kiddies, I dont want your beef... I just dont like you gettin all touched over some honest comments... |
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| product | Mar 31 2006, 11:42 AM Post #7 |
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i aint touched,just seein who tha punks n pussies r, like you |
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My Webpage ILL-FINITY RECORDZ PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine) MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN! BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P | |
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| Disasta | Mar 31 2006, 02:02 PM Post #8 |
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Soz boys. Only just found out thru MCillem that I had this battle on 2nite... And had some trouble getn onto flip, but shit heres my verse. Keystyled as, but I still feel it's better than yours product. Peace. MC Product/ never top-gun/ your constantly a cock-suck// Frontin like a thug/, always talkin bout how you rock-bucks// Your structures/ so fucked/ it reminds me of a whore// Battlin with me'll have your guts/ strewn out over the floor// Grabbed ya by your throat and tore/ ya achilles/-tendon// I dont even/ see the reason/ why Sicillys/-mentioned// I dont consider you worth/ a rhyme/, so I put my lines/ in the past/ tense// Cos I gave birth/ to your mind/, so rewind/ ya last/ sentence// My lyrics/ are wicked/ spirits/ so devilishly hypnotic// Psychotic/, they'll have ya on ya knees moaning erotic// So pass me your throat/ and a rope/ I'll slip-knot-it// Lock-it/ hang you up, ya mama and ya pop-it/ cant stop-it// Listen bitch/ you aint shit/, actin like your hard to split// Till I hit/ with steel-fists/ blow/ explode/ ya fuckin lips// Have you tryin not to cry/ but ya eyes/ begin to tingle// Then I crack ya in ya side/ smash ya ribs up like pringles// By now your leaking-blood/, its seeping-into-the-mud// Thats what the fuck you get for tryna be preaching-like-a-thug// Disasta/ I'm a pirahna/, come plastered/ with so much game// Whereas your verses contain/ more "bullshit" than arenas in Spain// I run over your tracks/ like a train/ pointin a Mack to ya brain// Blow with so much point-blank force, all ya homeys see is blood stains// I called you out, but you should never have accepted// Cos I rhyme so fucking sick, its like I was AIDS infected// Leave you on the floor rejected/ bisected/ thats half disected// Put you in your grave/ raise/ leave a statue of my frame erected// I make the laws/ break the jaws/ carve revolutions/ with my claws// So dont plan for fuckin executions/ cos its gona be yours// Ive gauged-ya-spit/ you raged-a-bit/ but you aint shit next-to-me// The only way you'll rhyme dope/ is if you straight choke/ on mescaline// You aint claimin no victory/ Im takin this battle for my own// Fuck with me your prone/ to get blown/ like faggots in they homes// Run up on ya back/ and smack/ hard lika Mack/ truck// Hear ya skull crack/ beneath my bat/ and now ya fucked// I keystyled this bitch/ spit/ this shit/ so fuckin relentlessly// Now ya like a snitch/ on ya knees beggin the judge for clemency// But I dont take pity/ no mercies how it fuckin goes in the city// Even towards little kiddies/ like you, who still suckin they mamas titties// Now to end this beef/ Ima take you out into the street// Cut off ya feet/ arrest ya piss weak/ heart-beat// Dude Im so fuckin raw even if you stab me I bleed-rhymes// I wouldn’t flinch if you cut me three-times// So whats this bullshit bout the ozone-layer// Don’t come fuck with me, you aint a full-grown-player// The only gats you tote are fuckin lyrical// If you win it’ll be a miracle/ Better start prayin if your spiritual// Ive taken this as far as it gets/ no regrets, I rhymed/ vigorous// Your so pussy-soft you remind/ me of a wet clitoris// |
| Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda... | |
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| Disasta | Mar 31 2006, 02:07 PM Post #9 |
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Uppin votes.... |
| Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda... | |
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| mcillem | Mar 31 2006, 02:30 PM Post #10 |
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fucking hell there some reading here ill vote tomoz mayne |
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| product | Mar 31 2006, 02:32 PM Post #11 |
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finally,n yeh mines keystyled too. i mostly do that any way |
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My Webpage ILL-FINITY RECORDZ PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine) MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN! BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P | |
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| NZA | Apr 1 2006, 06:17 AM Post #12 |
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Nice verse D, Ill vote soon...Hey Product and MCillem, I dont want beef with you guys, lets keep it real guys...Wanna call it duece? Hit me back. |
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| NZA | Apr 1 2006, 06:47 AM Post #13 |
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Before I vote I want to say, This wont count because me and Disasta are homies. I just want to give my opinion. [size=7]~Rubrix~[/size] Intro: Tie. Neither one appealed to me really... Outro: Tie. Both were SICK... Flow: Disasta. The structure gave it a good flow. Originality: Product. bet with you catchin dope lines in ya brains like find n seek/ (DUMBASSBITCH) thatswhy ya talk is cheap/disasta just plain/sic illy hydro like maryjane/ bionic chronic/disasta take 1 hit n vomit/im too insain/plus my game a different strain/ Nice lines, quite original.^ Complexity: Disasta. Both were complex and some hidden meanings...But disasta's was more appealing. Punches: Tie. im too hot see/the scriptures just leave u in hells fixtures/ i had to do this with the right mixture/ just like an alixa/ I liked that line^ Cos I rhyme so fucking sick, its like I was AIDS infected// Leave you on the floor rejected/ bisected/ thats half disected// Put you in your grave/ raise/ leave a statue of my frame erected// And that was some dope shit^ Personals: Product. He had like, one. Multies: Disasta. Not as played out, and they flowed not as forced... Combos: Product. They were both all over the place, but products had a nice sound to them. Structure: Disasta. This doesnt really need to be explained. Disastas was quite legible. Wordplay: Disasta. Whereas your verses contain/ more "bullshit" than arenas in Spain// Nice piece right there^. I didnt really see any from Product. Vocab: Disasta. Grabbed ya by your throat and tore/ ya achilles/-tendon// I dont even/ see the reason/ why Sicillys/-mentioned// Even thought it went over the head cause sicilly is an alias...it was a good rhyme. Vote: Disasta. [size=7]~Advice~[/size] A good battle. Very close. Both had really good verses. [size=7]Product.[/size] Product, work on your structure, and use some wordplay, wordplay is a key to winning battles, because its what I really look for after punches and vocabulary. Your multis were a bit played and forced, try to let them flow naturally. Overall from you I give a B+ about 17/20 [size=7]Disasta.[/size] Disasta, work on your combos, attack the same thing for a few lines and bring it back near the end, and personals, try and find some stuff about your opponent and work it. [size=7]~Opinion~[/size] I liked this battle it was real good. A nice read from both people. And I'd like to RE-ITERATE, that this vote does NOT count towards the final vote count. |
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| Disasta | Apr 1 2006, 07:30 AM Post #14 |
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Cheers for the advice NZ..... UPPIN VOTES.... |
| Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda... | |
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| mcillem | Apr 3 2006, 09:18 AM Post #15 |
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soz product i did a rubix n shit but the screen went down when i posted it you got my vote coz nza dident feel ya Structure n one two overs things fucking mad battle tho both you were digging into each over lmao |
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