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product vs disasta
Topic Started: Mar 29 2006, 11:16 PM (616 Views)
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FUCK how many BARS N ROUNDS JUST SPIT BITCH!



Im Planning 4 a execution/
this rocket launcher be my solution/
in my war for retribution/
u just polution/
cuz i c this rap game as the ozone/gets worse evrytime u moan/thought u was grown/actin like a kid/prick u can suck my dick/n my tone/
bitch gohome/ya words soft as foam/grab my chrome/45 4 cappin/u aint made forrappin/especially scrappin with g'z like me/
im deep/in the streets n with the speech/u just a leech/
sic-illy/ u could neva beat/ive got too much heat/
bet with you catchin dope lines in ya brains like find n seek/ (DUMBASSBITCH)
thatswhy ya talk is cheap/disasta just plain/sic illy hydro like maryjane/
bionic chronic/disasta take 1 hit n vomit/im too insain/plus my game a different strain/
u pussy/on the net sellin yo ass sucky sucky 5 dolla/
fuck that 1.50 so atleast ull get a holla/
product a balla grown shot calla
eradicatin fakes n fonies/(disasta & nza)
ya just get votes from ya homies/ (dickriderz=nza&disasta)
it been me n mcillem solely/just us on our lonely/
that fuckd u up/thinkin u dope bitch but u outta touch/
cuz nowu gettin rushed/pushed ova tha edge/holdin on to the ledge/
tryin to pledge wot usaid was wrong/
but im'a makesure u cant hold on/
hit the floor/splatter ya body/
thats wot u get fortryin to act cocky/
u cant mock me/cant stop me/ya flow poxy/ya prossy/
go put on ya red light like roxy/
im too hot see/the scriptures just leave u in hells fixtures/
i had to do this with the right mixture/
just like an alixa/
cuz u fuckd around n i had to split ya/flipya/rip ya up/
in these lyrical gats i trust/
face crushed to the ground the pace of the pound 2 fast 2 see/
come on im on a higher level then u even ya momma agree/let it be/
SIC-ILLY CLAIMZ ANOTHER VICTORY/
in the end flesh torn entrails adorned by demons/
cuz i gotta feed em/any way u gonna meet em/
greetem at hells gates/we already late/
shouldda killed u the date u decided to rhyme/
cuz bitch u aint got 1 dope line/
heres how to spit take a look at MINE/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

fuck u punk ass bitches.
u want beef lets go!
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ILL-FINITY RECORDZ
PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY

NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine)

MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN!

BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P
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Crazy structure, but some good rhymes.
Uppin Disasta.
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Wins- 14
Loses- 1
K.Os- 14
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ha ha ha see nza this explain things Ha product thats the shit

uppin disasta
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i was jus crazy typin,possesed n shit,cheers 4 tha holla mcillem.
up we go
where the fuckz thiz ho?


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ILL-FINITY RECORDZ
PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY

NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine)

MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN!

BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P
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i ant getting touched its you beefing on honest votes its all good
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NZA
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What?
Disasta will come out man...
But chill kiddies, I dont want your beef...
I just dont like you gettin all touched over some honest comments...
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[size=14]Usual Suspects abusin' the subtext.....[/size].......One out to Disasta and The Saint.........[size=14]N[/size][size=14]Z[/size][size=14]A[/size]
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Wins- 14
Loses- 1
K.Os- 14
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i aint touched,just seein who tha punks n pussies r, like you
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ILL-FINITY RECORDZ
PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY

NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine)

MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN!

BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P
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Soz boys. Only just found out thru MCillem that I had this battle on 2nite... And had some trouble getn onto flip, but shit heres my verse. Keystyled as, but I still feel it's better than yours product. Peace.



MC Product/ never top-gun/ your constantly a cock-suck//
Frontin like a thug/, always talkin bout how you rock-bucks//
Your structures/ so fucked/ it reminds me of a whore//
Battlin with me'll have your guts/ strewn out over the floor//
Grabbed ya by your throat and tore/ ya achilles/-tendon//
I dont even/ see the reason/ why Sicillys/-mentioned//
I dont consider you worth/ a rhyme/, so I put my lines/ in the past/ tense//
Cos I gave birth/ to your mind/, so rewind/ ya last/ sentence//
My lyrics/ are wicked/ spirits/ so devilishly hypnotic//
Psychotic/, they'll have ya on ya knees moaning erotic//
So pass me your throat/ and a rope/ I'll slip-knot-it//
Lock-it/ hang you up, ya mama and ya pop-it/ cant stop-it//
Listen bitch/ you aint shit/, actin like your hard to split//
Till I hit/ with steel-fists/ blow/ explode/ ya fuckin lips//
Have you tryin not to cry/ but ya eyes/ begin to tingle//
Then I crack ya in ya side/ smash ya ribs up like pringles//
By now your leaking-blood/, its seeping-into-the-mud//
Thats what the fuck you get for tryna be preaching-like-a-thug//
Disasta/ I'm a pirahna/, come plastered/ with so much game//
Whereas your verses contain/ more "bullshit" than arenas in Spain//
I run over your tracks/ like a train/ pointin a Mack to ya brain//
Blow with so much point-blank force, all ya homeys see is blood stains//
I called you out, but you should never have accepted//
Cos I rhyme so fucking sick, its like I was AIDS infected//
Leave you on the floor rejected/ bisected/ thats half disected//
Put you in your grave/ raise/ leave a statue of my frame erected//
I make the laws/ break the jaws/ carve revolutions/ with my claws//
So dont plan for fuckin executions/ cos its gona be yours//
Ive gauged-ya-spit/ you raged-a-bit/ but you aint shit next-to-me//
The only way you'll rhyme dope/ is if you straight choke/ on mescaline//
You aint claimin no victory/ Im takin this battle for my own//
Fuck with me your prone/ to get blown/ like faggots in they homes//
Run up on ya back/ and smack/ hard lika Mack/ truck//
Hear ya skull crack/ beneath my bat/ and now ya fucked//
I keystyled this bitch/ spit/ this shit/ so fuckin relentlessly//
Now ya like a snitch/ on ya knees beggin the judge for clemency//
But I dont take pity/ no mercies how it fuckin goes in the city//
Even towards little kiddies/ like you, who still suckin they mamas titties//
Now to end this beef/ Ima take you out into the street//
Cut off ya feet/ arrest ya piss weak/ heart-beat//
Dude Im so fuckin raw even if you stab me I bleed-rhymes//
I wouldn’t flinch if you cut me three-times//
So whats this bullshit bout the ozone-layer//
Don’t come fuck with me, you aint a full-grown-player//
The only gats you tote are fuckin lyrical//
If you win it’ll be a miracle/ Better start prayin if your spiritual//
Ive taken this as far as it gets/ no regrets, I rhymed/ vigorous//
Your so pussy-soft you remind/ me of a wet clitoris//
Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda...
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Uppin votes....
Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda...
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fucking hell there some reading here ill vote tomoz mayne
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finally,n yeh mines keystyled too.

i mostly do that any way
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ILL-FINITY RECORDZ
PRODUCT AKA SIC-ILLY

NIGGAME AKA MR-BURNZ(Wen i see dude again lost tha motherfucker number,buthe left sum written shit at mine,so its only fair i make him shine)

MCILLEM THA HOMIE,1 OF MY COMRADES IN LIFE, DOINHIS THING REPRESENTIN THEHOMETOWN,LAYIN DOPE SHIT DOWN!

BO$$-THUG AKA SLICK-SHOTTI R.I.P T.I.P
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Nice verse D, Ill vote soon...Hey Product and MCillem, I dont want beef with you guys, lets keep it real guys...Wanna call it duece? Hit me back.
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[size=14]Usual Suspects abusin' the subtext.....[/size].......One out to Disasta and The Saint.........[size=14]N[/size][size=14]Z[/size][size=14]A[/size]
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Wins- 14
Loses- 1
K.Os- 14
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Before I vote I want to say, This wont count because me and Disasta are homies.
I just want to give my opinion.

[size=7]~Rubrix~[/size]
Intro: Tie.
Neither one appealed to me really...

Outro: Tie.
Both were SICK...

Flow: Disasta.
The structure gave it a good flow.

Originality: Product.
bet with you catchin dope lines in ya brains like find n seek/ (DUMBASSBITCH)
thatswhy ya talk is cheap/disasta just plain/sic illy hydro like maryjane/
bionic chronic/disasta take 1 hit n vomit/im too insain/plus my game a different strain/

Nice lines, quite original.^


Complexity: Disasta.
Both were complex and some hidden meanings...But disasta's was more appealing.

Punches: Tie.
im too hot see/the scriptures just leave u in hells fixtures/
i had to do this with the right mixture/
just like an alixa/

I liked that line^

Cos I rhyme so fucking sick, its like I was AIDS infected//
Leave you on the floor rejected/ bisected/ thats half disected//
Put you in your grave/ raise/ leave a statue of my frame erected//

And that was some dope shit^

Personals: Product.
He had like, one.

Multies: Disasta.
Not as played out, and they flowed not as forced...

Combos: Product.
They were both all over the place, but products had a nice sound to them.

Structure: Disasta.
This doesnt really need to be explained. Disastas was quite legible.

Wordplay: Disasta.
Whereas your verses contain/ more "bullshit" than arenas in Spain//
Nice piece right there^. I didnt really see any from Product.

Vocab: Disasta.
Grabbed ya by your throat and tore/ ya achilles/-tendon//
I dont even/ see the reason/ why Sicillys/-mentioned//

Even thought it went over the head cause sicilly is an alias...it was a good rhyme.

Vote: Disasta.

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A good battle. Very close. Both had really good verses.
[size=7]Product.[/size] Product, work on your structure, and use some wordplay, wordplay is a key to winning battles, because its what I really look for after punches and vocabulary. Your multis were a bit played and forced, try to let them flow naturally. Overall from you I give a B+ about 17/20
[size=7]Disasta.[/size] Disasta, work on your combos, attack the same thing for a few lines and bring it back near the end, and personals, try and find some stuff about your opponent and work it.

[size=7]~Opinion~[/size]
I liked this battle it was real good. A nice read from both people.
And I'd like to RE-ITERATE, that this vote does NOT count towards the final vote count.
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Wins- 14
Loses- 1
K.Os- 14
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Cheers for the advice NZ..... UPPIN VOTES....
Disasta One... One Love > DKUPS ONE... AFT Crew... Down South, Down Unda...
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soz product i did a rubix n shit but the screen went down when i posted it you got my vote coz nza dident feel ya Structure n one two overs things fucking mad battle tho both you were digging into each over lmao
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