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| The School Teacher vs. The Weather Detective | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 23 2009, 11:47 (226 Views) | |
| Max | Jun 23 2009, 11:47 Post #1 |
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Clive was excited as he walked down the street with Marty, saying "Okay, so Dr. Touchdown says based on the data he gathered from you that Uncle Pudge could defiantly make a device to give him shaman powers, obviously dangerous, but otherwise the apparent situation." Marty replies with less interest "And why is this exciting?" Clive replies "Because, I never told you but my investigations have lead to track down Uncle Pudge's Five Fingers." Marty was confused; he says a bit annoyed "That's supposed to mean something?" Clive explains, not even watching where he was walking, "Uncle Pudge's Five Fingers is the gang term for Pudge's original assassins, all were eventually killed by Pudge, well all but one." Marty asks, a bit tired, he was pulled out of bed for this, "Why was the fifth not killed?" Clive grins, now looking forward as he says "Because Pudge married her instead." Piecing things together Marty says "This is a search for Pudge's wife? What would she know?" Clive explains "She may know more then we think, all I know is if we find her she may give us clues, she's the only one Pudge was never able to find and kill, she got away from him, but it won't happen tonight, I tracked her down." Walking up to an apartment building Marty and Clive walk in. Going to the counter Marty asks "Excuse me sir, we would like to ask if you have seen this women?" Clive pulls out a picture, of supposedly Uncle Pudge's wife; her short curly hair shows her sitting in a car while the sun beats down on her. The man looks then says "And you guys are?" Clive buts in saying, "Were psychics, she asked us to come see her, but we don't have her address." Marty hated it when Clive took over; he was brilliant, but sloppy. The man studies them then says "Psychics that can't find one women, right." Marty knew he would have to fake something; he looked around at the guys desk. It was filled with paint color samples, all in yellow and pink, looking down Marty also caught some writing on the calendar, marking a spot around three days, obviously this guy was going to have a baby, marking the possible due dates, and a girl, for the samples were for a girl's room, pink and yellow being primarily for a girl. Marty was about to comment when Clive interrupts saying "Yeah, you're going to have a girl." The man was wide eyed, he says "Amazing!" Clive smirks in pride as he says "So you'll tell us if you know her?" The guy replies quickly "No" and goes back to reading a book. Walking out of the building Marty says "Well this has been a waste of time." Clive replies depressed "I know, that guy wouldn't let the world's greatest detective, and you into that building, it's appalling." Spotting three people Marty and Clive can't help but overhear them. One in a red sweater says "I don't get it Becky; Dave hasn't said a thing, OMG!!!!" The other one a short girl says "Maybe he fell asleep?" The other is a guy holding a box he says "Well we can tell Dave his cheese fries are getting cold, this is bull shit." Clive thinks then says quietly, thinking aloud "You know that guy wouldn't let two strangers in, especially bachelors like us....but he does like kids." Marty fake laughs saying "Funny Clive, but no." A pause sneaks into their conversation, leaving Marty to say "No" |
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| Max | Jun 23 2009, 11:50 Post #2 |
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Clive explains to the man behind the counter again “I’m sorry, but my son really wants to see me read this woman’s fortune, he’s heartbroken I can’t do my job and put food on the table, right Adam?” Marty pouts saying, “Yeah, whatever.” The guy at the counter is not amused. Clive reacts quickly, he nudges Marty saying “Sell it Malone; I know you’ve done this before.” Marty sighs, then turning to the counter he says “Oh, please Mr. my father is a loser, he can’t do anything, I want to see him read this woman’s fortune, she asked him too, I don’t even have any money for a Wii because of the stupidity of my psychic father.” Less than ten minutes later Clive is knocking the apartment door, saying “Great job Malone, I did most of the work of course, now Pudge's wifes name was Marissa Vermouth, it says in this women's records that her name is Sharon Barrel, she’s a school teacher, Spanish apparently.” Marty replies sarcastically “Great.” The door is answered by a woman in a robe with a towel around her head, she appears wet, but looks like the woman from the photo, she asks “May I help you?” Clive replies “Yes, I’m Clive Cartwheel, this is Adam, we were wondering if you could answer us a few questions?” She pauses, asking “About?” Clive replies quickly “Were doing a news report, about school teachers, stuff like that?” She pauses, then looking down at Marty she smiles and says “Okay, give me a moment; I just got out of the shower.” Few minutes later Marty and Clive are in the apartment. Marty whispers saying “We have no proof this women is an old assassin of Uncle Pudge’s, let alone his ex-wife, she would be in hiding.” Clive thinks then says “What better alibi then a school teacher.” The woman walks in now saying “I’ve never been interviewed before, what kinds of stuff do you want to know?” Clive grins, replying “¿Cómo te llamas? She pauses then replies “I’m Sharon Barrel, easy enough.” The door bell rings and Sharon rises, saying “Excuse me if you will.” Clive nods and when Sharon is out of ear shot Marty whispers “Are you insane, how do you think she got a job as a Spanish teacher if she couldn’t speak Spanish?” Clive sighs saying “I was just checking, whenever someone claims they speak Spanish I ask them a question in Spanish, it has yet to pay off.” Marty sighs, he was getting annoyed whining a bit he says, “Look Clive, she looks like this Vermouth lady, but that’s it, she doesn’t even seem like the killing type, even if she was part of Uncle Pudge’s organization at one time.” Clive pouts, crossing his arms, he knew something was not right. Their attention is diverted as they hear Sharon’s voice rise saying “What, dead? I didn’t hear anything?” Clive and Marty walk over to see several police officers at the door; Clive asks “Is something wrong?” The police officer replies adamantly “Yes, the man in the room across from here, he was found dead, jumped off his window, were checking leads.” Marty pauses, looking down the hall to see the bedroom, he knew this Sharon woman couldn’t have done it, but if she was part of Pudge’s organization, she may be good enough….good enough to murder right in front of him. |
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| Max | Jun 25 2009, 10:21 Post #3 |
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Clive and Marty are taken outside, they look to see a man, sure enough he has hit the pavement. Inspector Gizmo appears, Marty recognized him, he had seen him all around, usually he's called into the outer Soma areas. Gizmo asks "Okay, so um...suicide???" The officers all agree, but as Clive looks up to the window, he says "Not exactly inspector" The police are stunned, turning to view the stranger Gizmo asks "And you are?" Clive smirks then says "That would be, Clive Cartwheel, Detective Clive Cartwheel, maybe you've heard of me?" Gizmo's eyes light up as he says "But of course, Mr. Cartwheel, I'm sorry I didn't recognize you in the night sky." Clive waves to him saying "Not a problem, just allow me to do my business." Gizmo spots Marty and asks "Who's the kid, he can't be at a crime scene." Marty freezes as he stops examining the body. Clive smirks again saying, "That's Adam, my assistant, he's cool, dumb as a rock though, I'm teaching him the ropes." Marty rolled his eyes, but at least now, he and Clive were even. Sharon appears shocked she says "I had no clue you two were detectives." Clive pauses then explains "Sorry ma'm we’re investigating a lead and had to lie." Gizmo now gets impatient, he says "Okay, that's fine, but what about the victim, was this really not a suicide?" Clive nods saying "Just look at the window above." The cops do so, Marty does not, he had already seen it, and was continuing to examine the body. Clive explains "The curtain, anything funny about it?" Sharon looks up, commenting "It appears to have been practically ripped off the window valance." Clive nods explaining, ![]() "The only way that could have happened was if the victim grabbed it as he fell." ![]() "Now if he was committing suicide, why grab the curtain? Plus if he had jumped he would of been a few feet away from the window, unable to even reach the curtain. "I doubt our victim changed his mind seconds after deciding to commit suicide, leaving on conclusion...." Clive pauses to build up a more dramatic line, he finishes, "Murder" |
![]() My HBRC Characters: (left to right) Norrington, Videl, Hawkeye, Oliver, Cherry, Stewie, Rocky, MacGyver, and Dr. Finkelstein. | |
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| Max | Jul 18 2009, 11:01 Post #4 |
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The police speak with three people who were outside the victim’s apartment, Marty recognizes them as the two girls and the guy with the cheese fries from earlier, the victim was Dave Car, the man they had been calling for. The short one Becky quickly says "We were up in Dave's apartment drinking, then we wanted to go to dinner, he had been recently promoted where we work, but Dave was too drunk, so we had him go to bed and told him we would bring back cheese fries for him. The other girl a tall one in a red sweater named Kim quickly adds "We got here and his door was locked, so we yelled up to his apartment building." Clive adds "Yes, I remember seeing you guys, my friend and I bought your cheese fries, but what happened after that?" They go silent raising some suspicion, Clive entices them saying "You can answer that at the station if you like?" Kim looks to the man in their group, a tall guy in a suit jacket and jeans, named James who says "I called him, and we had an argument, but it's not like I told him to commit suicide or anything." Clive responds "As I've said it was murder." Marty watches the group; he knows Vermouth could have done this, if the teacher really is Uncle Pudge's ex-wife, but if so how could she do it? The apartment was locked from the inside, the only contact the victim had was from the phone." As Marty finishes thinking it, Clive does it as he asks "What was the argument about, because if what the evidence is telling me is true..." "You convinced the victim to jump." |
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| Max | Aug 8 2009, 16:24 Post #5 |
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James gets frantic now he quickly says "No, I just yelled at him for not showing up, I told him off, see we were in line for the job at the same time and he got it, but he chooses to waste his time drinking, so I just blew up at him, and told him to die, but I can't be held responsible, I don't control other people I didn't tell him to jump." Inspector Gizmo is convinced he says "He's right boys, sorry but until we find more sustainable evidence, I don't think we can make an arrest." Clive and Marty were not about to give up, they follow the other officers into the victim's apartment. As the police bag and tag things, Marty notices a dent in the victim's cell phone upon showing it to Clive he asks "How do you think that got there?" Clive examines it and says "Didn't he have the phone when he went to the window?" Becky speaks up, overhearing their conversation she says "Actually I remember Dave had his phone in his hand, but I didn't see it outside." Marty and Clive thank her as they go out to the balcony. "He must of threw his phone back into the room, but why?" Marty asks as he stands on the balcony's railing to get higher up. Clive replies "Maybe he had a message on it he just wanted us to hear." Suddenly the boys are distracted by a phone ringing; Inspector Gizmo answers his cell phone quickly saying "Not now honey, I'm still working." After a pause he says "Honey I can't hear you, one second dear." Inspector Gizmo goes to the balcony, checking his phone's reception, he then says "Okay much better dear, but seriously I need to get back to work." Clive and Marty stare at each other and Clive quickly pulls out his cell phone, he checks his bars and sees that there is better reception outside on the balcony, then inside, he looks into the room and pauses. As Inspector Gizmo hangs up Clive quickly asks "Inspector, I think maybe we can solve this if we do a reenactment of the crime, just to check everyone's story." Gizmo nods in agreement then asks "Okay, what should we do first?" Clive smirks as he says "First.." "...We'll need alcohol." |
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