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| Max | May 30 2008, 10:39 Post #1 |
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![]() Marty was talking to Booker when he heard a gunshot, he radio was destroyed, someone had shot it, he turned to see Jordan Sulivin standing in his doorway with a gun, he then said “Your dad gave me allot of trouble seventy five years ago” He then lunged on Marty and shoved him to the ground, Marty summoned fire and was going to shoot it at Sulivin, but quickly realized he didn’t want to burn the house down, he lunged at Sulivin and knocked the gun out of his hand, as they both reached for it on the ground, scars slowly appeared on Sulivin’s face, Marty was confused, nothing had scratched him, and the scars looked like they were extremely old Even stranger Marty was getting these strange memories, of Sulivin, much younger, in his house when he was a kid, Marty then reached for the gun and knocked it away, Sulivin, jumped for it and grabbed it, he then shoved Marty to the ground Getting on top of Marty Sulivin held him down and said “Time to die, Little Detective”, suddenly the gun went from Sulivin’s right hand to his left, as his right hand disappeared leaving a stump, Marty was confused, he then thought and realized it, he remarked “You went down seventy five years ago, you just don’t know it yet” Sulivin slowly gained memories and didn’t react to the fact that his hand was gone, he then said “Goodbye” and pointed the gun at Marty’s head, then out of nowhere Marty heard a gunshot and Sulivan went flying across the room, and hit the wall, he then fell to the ground dead with a steak in his heart |
![]() My HBRC Characters: (left to right) Norrington, Videl, Hawkeye, Oliver, Cherry, Stewie, Rocky, MacGyver, and Dr. Finkelstein. | |
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| Max | May 30 2008, 10:55 Post #2 |
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![]() Vivian laid in bed waiting for Booker to come to sleep, she then felt the bed move as the space next to her became occupied, realizing Booker had come to bed, she said “It’s about time Book”, she then felt a hand rest on her check and realized, it wasn’t Booker Sulivin grabbed her by the wrists and said “He’s a little occupied right now”, breaking free of his hold, she scratched his face as hard as she could leaving long bleeding scars on him, he held her down harder and heard noises, it was a boy, he was running down the hall, Sulivin lunged out the room after this kid Meanwhile Booker was downstairs, he awoke with a head ace, but was alive, he reached for his shotgun, and ran for the stairs, and there he saw Sulivin standing in the hall, he pointed the shotgun at him and almost instantly Sulivin grabbed Marty, and held him in front, he then said “I wouldn’t do that if I were you” Out of nowhere, Vivian beat Sulivin in the head with a vase, and grabbed Marty and ran out of the way, Booker aimed the shot gun, realizing what was going on, Sulivin lunged for Booker his right hand out reached to grab the gun As his hand grabbed the gun Booker pulled the trigger and shot the hand clean off, Sulivin hit the ground in pain, but his vampiric immortality would insure he lived, he yelled “You bastard, I’ll be back for your son, one of these days”, he then ran off into the night There was calm, Vivian and Marty came out and Booker hugged them, as everything was once again peaceful, Vivian said “Wait, Marty, he’s in trouble, in the future isn’t he”, Booker replied “I need to help him, but”, he thought for a moment, he looked over at his desk and saw the blue potion that Toejam had left him, he then remembered what he had said about the potion being able to transcend time, he then said “I think I know what to do” |
![]() My HBRC Characters: (left to right) Norrington, Videl, Hawkeye, Oliver, Cherry, Stewie, Rocky, MacGyver, and Dr. Finkelstein. | |
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| Max | May 30 2008, 11:06 Post #3 |
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![]() ((Note: I perpously kept Marty and Booker out of the same post until now, just to make this part a little more special)) Marty looked to see his father, Booker Malone standing in the doorway with a gun, he was glowing blue, kind of like the ghosts from Star Wars as Booker walked over he put his hand on Marty's shoulder and said "You said you were taller than this" Marty hugged him and after a while he said "How are you here?", Booker replied "Maybe some of Toejam's magic isn't so stupid" there was a pause and Marty said "My radio is shot up, I don't think I can fix it, it's really old in these days", Booker paused then said "I guess you're not meant to change the future, Marty, continue to do what you’re doing, and don't think of your power's as a curse, it's a gift when you use them", Booker began to disappear and said "I'm proud of you son" as he vanished Marty stared at the old house with pride and said "I guess my vacation is over", Marty had now had a new understanding, he would continue to live his normal life by the principles that Booker taught him, and he would be a superhero, by those same principles packed up Marty left the house and headed back to The Soma, his home |
![]() My HBRC Characters: (left to right) Norrington, Videl, Hawkeye, Oliver, Cherry, Stewie, Rocky, MacGyver, and Dr. Finkelstein. | |
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