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Ryusei Brimstone; hoping to get into the earth union force
Topic Started: Sep 23 2006, 09:39 AM (216 Views)
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Name:Ryusei Brimstone
Date Of Birth:6/26/2079
Age:18
Birth Place:Granada
Genetic Type:Natural
Faction:Earth Union
Gender:Male
Eye color:Light red color
Hair color:Brown
Height:5' 6"
Weight: 120 lbs.
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Personality:He is quiet and timid not easily noticable unless you actualy try to find him. He is still quiet in the midst of battle but not at all timid, he doesn't hesitate to kill anyone in his path, except his teamates, and the rest of the Earth Union forces.
Biography: His parents were Rei and Ryu Brimstone. The had a comely little house on Granada. There life before he was born was living hell, they may of had good jobs as mobile suit repairsman, and desginer but they were suffering on the inside. After he was born they were starting to get better, then his dad got drunk and shot Rei, then realizing what he had done shot himself. His family was buried in a cemetary on Granada.

He became an orphan, because his parents killed themselves in a fight, and wandered the streets. He survived off of table scraps, and whatever money people had given him out of pity. Soon he became interested in the mobile suits and hopefully one day would join them. He would sit for hours on end watching them fly by, and run the tests. He watched as they swirved and glided around like birds.

Then after a while he would go to his empty house that was always dark and gloomy. He ate whatever he could scrounge up from the day outside trying to find his next meal. After a few more months he turned 18. He joined up with the military a about a week later. He adapted to the life style with ease event though he was used to living on his own. Now was his chance to be able to pilot a mobile suit. His one goal in mind was piloting a mobile suit thats all he wanted to accomplish.

Role-play sample: He sat there behind a rock, of course going through another training simulator before heading to lunch. He jumped out from behind the rock using his thrusters as a faster way to get to the next part. Pulling the beam rifle trigger once, and then again, destryoed the target to move on.


Note:: He favorite color is black, or red.
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Antom Stride
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Even though im not gonna approve you, Id like you to put some more detail into your bio. Where was he born, what are his goals, what happened to his family?

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I concure with Antom's statement. You need to expand the Bio quite a bit.

Who were his parents? What was their life like before they died? What did they do? How did they kill themselves in battle? How did he survive on the streets? When did he join the Union Military? How did he adapt to it? Whats his favorite colour?
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There i did a little bit of modifying, and added a note section where his favorite color is.
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Better than your old one, nice work.

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Um thanks
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Good job Ryusei, approved. I'll pm you the password to our hq-just repost your profile in our pilot's section
Name: Rodrin Durtal
Group: Earth Union
Rank: Brigadier General
MS: Nu Gundam

Wars come and go but my soldiers are eternal.

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Thank you.
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