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Advent Legacy(Story)
Topic Started: Feb 16 2008, 12:18 PM (2,202 Views)
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-A small parade is going on. Despite the heavy rain, most of the people are smiling and dancing and lack umbrellas or any raincoats of any kind. A remarkable thing about this town is that is it the most peaceful and joyous amongst the sections. Even the soldiers are often smiling.


Rakuo entered the town without any trouble. He soon found out that it was because of the Parade that was happening. Rakuo stood and watched as the Parade marched by despite the rain. After a while, Rakuo realized that night was almost upon them and that he had to check in to somewhere for the night. He found one inn the Ame Sindai. As he went in, the crisp smell of ale hit his nose. Rakuo had forgotten what it was like to be among people since he went into hiding. As he bought a room and a mug of ale, he noticed another person with a similar hood on. When he had received his drink, he proceeded to sit on the other side of the room. As he looked around, he could see that everyone was happy. Hell, even the soldiers were happy. This, Rakuo couldn’t understand. He thought that all the sections would be miserable thanks to Vetmodes’ rise. And that the soldiers would be oppressing the citizens. Perhaps there was something in the rain? No. Probably not. Rakuo didn't feel that warmth the other people had.

After a while, the population at the inn was slowly going down, and the noise around town had ceased. Rakuo had kept the person in the hood on in check. Rakuo took a guess at saying it was a woman. He could see that the person had breasts but even so, it was hard to tell what sex the person was. The robe was unisexual after all. Not that much different from Rakuo's.

The person then got up and went outside and Rakuo followed him/her. When he closed the door to he inn, Rakuo looked around the see that the person was gone. Or at least he thought so. Rakuo went into the middle of the street to see if he could get a better view of where the person might have gone.

THAT is when it happened. Rakuo was suddenly punched in the face and flew backwards. As he landed, he looked up to see that Knives were flying at him. He drew 'Tori no Raiko' and Parried the knives that could prove fatal to him. Rakuo grabbed the last knife that would have hit his face, threw it back, and launched a shard of lightning from his blade to hide right behind the Knife. The person then threw her palm up, and the knife blew up. Canceling the shard of lightning right behind it.

Rakuo started a charge at the person, with his Nodachi in hand and jumped in the air, just to come back down with a humongous force behind his nodachi. Rakuo's blade was about 2 feet from the persons face when he blinked. He opened his eyes to discover that his nodachi was stopped by the persons Katana.

When the two blades met, A shockwave came blasted out from the force of the slash, causing Rakuo's hood to fall of his head. The same had happened for the other person.

When her hood fell off, he couldn't help but be awed by the Radiance of her hair as it flashed from the force of he shockwave. When he landed, he slowly backed up to get a better look at the person. It was the one who had crafted his nodachi. Rizui!

"So you haven't broken that blade yet eh?" She said with a tempered voice.
"Nope. It doesn't even have a scratch yet." Rakuo grinned. He Walked up to Rizui and gave her the blade he was using.
"I can't believe it. You actually went more then a week without breaking the blade. Which would have been the goddamned 100th time." She replied. A she inspected the blade; she was getting more and more upset with it.
"You know, you could at least polish it once in a while!" She exclaimed.
"Why the hell do you care? And what do you know why that blade kept breaking. There aren't many weapons that have the amount of resistance to Vetmodes blade." Rakuo said angrily.
"Because I was the one who forged this blade dumbass!"
They both went back inside and went to the room where Rakuo was staying.
"So, you going to fight Vetmode?" Rakuo asked as he sat down on his bed
"Duh. My question is why the hell haven’t you openly announced yourself into the fight?" Rizui asked, sitting on the chair and glaring at Rakuo.
"I can’t even defeat one of his generals by myself. How am I going to kill Vetmode? No, I cannot announce that I am alive till I'm absolutely SURE that i can beat his Generals. And even then, I couldn’t beat him last time, what makes you think I could win this time?" Rakuo questioned.
"Well, you almost defeated him the last time. I thought your power would have grown." Rizui said.
"It did, but not as much as Vetmodes. And besides, when i got close last time, i had the Chaos Emperors power." Rakuo said.
"He he. I laughed my ass off after we won the fight. That was just so lame!" Rizui burst out laughing.
"S-shut up! That wasn't funny at all!" Rakuo burst out. He stood up and turned his hand into a fist.
"Hell, even VETMODE laughed his ass off!" Rizui teased, still laughing. When Rizui was done laughing, Rakuo asked,
"So, are we going after The Nate?"
"Yeah, but we might want to wait a little while. Word on the streets is that 'The HeartCard' is moving from section 5." Rizui said.
"Oh? And how do you know this? She could just be moving to a different part of section 5." Rakuo replied.
"Well, I guess I don't really know. But it wouldn’t hurt to wait would it?"
"I guess not. Fine. We shall wait one week. This way, we can figure out this annoying wave of happiness in this town, and train to make sure that you’re not weak." Rakuo remarked.
"Yeah. I guess.....H-HEY! I am NOT weak!" Rizui burst out.
"I don't know you took a lot of time blowing up that knife. I could have blown it up almost instantly."
"Apparently I'm strong enough to block a strike that you put effort in to."
"Yeah, what ever. You sleep in the bed. I’m going to sleep on the floor."
Rakuo then got up and sat on the floor, putting his sword up so that the hilt was at his head, and closed his eyes to get some sleep.

OOC: I'll stop here. Damn this peaceful town. Can’t find one proper place to stick a damn opposing force in. Well, more chances next time I guess....
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OOC: Epic Lulz. Section Seven is indeed uber weird.
Based on the thus far information, Vetmode's armies stormed and Section Four's thriving and floweristic nature is due to taking little siege due to being the farthest section from where they entered. Which would mean Sections One and Seven shoulda taken the brunt of the hit.

Leaving the only explanations being the mysterious and unknown-even-to-meh nature of "Rain"(What can I say? I make it up as I go) and the fact that Section Seven is under the most care becuase of the "White Countdown"(Where The Empire rebuilds the sections counting backwards, so Seven receives the most). I've decided "White Countdown" to reflect a "Fading out" being that light will bring hope to the people, but that it will also blind them to the general fading out of sight/existance.

So then...White Phoenix, Therren, S.Cloud, and Myself have done our Chapter One intros.

It's be best if someone else who wanted to participate joined.
As I said before, I would wait till wednesday, but it's now thursday.
I'm extending the time period to friday's midnight gmt+0.
At which point I'll then add the start of Chapter 2.

You can join anytime during any chapter. However, you'll find it's abit more work to join in at later chapters as you'll probabley be having to work on your own means of an entrance. I can help, but as I said it would be more strainuous.
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OOC: Aw shit, sorry Cloud I must've miscounted the events in the list x.x

In any case, nice little piece there. Pretty funny back-forth rant.
I can not tell, is it just me or do we all look just like
Adolph fucking Hitler with this swoopy emo-boy dreamy haircut dangling in our faces, making us all indescribably indistinguishable from each other; or maybe I'm just another megalomaniac?
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OOC: Well, I guess four is enough, that leaves 3 sections relatively untouched, but also room for progression . . . Suppose we can manage, besides, anyone else who entered wouldn't be able to handle the seriousness of our epic lulz. Now would they?
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OOC: Well...I'm officially pissed. I'm having to retype the ENTIRE Hour-Long post I just wrote becuase of 'Server Maintence"...Not sure it'll be as high quality as the original. I apologize if so.

WhitePhoenix: I'll cover all the sections myself using mutliple characters if need be. Next post I'll begin assuming multiple roles.

And yes, the base of this story often makes me wonder if it should be taken seriously or seriously lawled at.

Back in Character:

As our stories' "interests" end their night to move onto the day, so to shall our story progress.

*Within the inner sanctum of the Main Castle, a bolt of blueish white lightning streaks through corridors and then finally into Vetmode's Throne Room. The lightning materials itself into the form of a young lady around the age of eighteen. Pure white as snow hair and eyes, and skin to match. A pure white robe covers her body, but her sash that holds the robes closed is of a light blue. The lady stands at five feet, and not an inch taller. Her eyes gaze upon Vetmode's black helmet, where the holes for his eyes should be there are two crafted rubies into the helmet. She speaks, her voice is ghostly and echos, but clearly gentle and calm.*
"They Exist"
*Vetmode seems unaffected by her sudden appearence. And replies to her statment. He does not lift his slightly lowered head at all.*
"Who exists?"
*The lady does not speak. She instead flips her right arm into the air in a manner. She closes her fingers except her index finger, and then brings the hand down slowly as if to pass judgement from the heavens. Wherever her finger falls a trail of lightning is left in it's wake. Once her finger reachs the point that it points at Vetmode the lightning begins to open like a portal. Vetmode lifts his head to gaze into the portal.

Vetmode's ruby eyes begin to glow an intense and bright blood red. Darkness itself seems to be escaping from Vetmode's armor and it becomes more physical and more foglike. Vetmode can clearly see the image within the portal

the image of the Crown of Spathis...

[size=4]Chapter II - "Strings"[/size]

As the first night ends, the next day begins.
Happenings are of plenty within Afdefrum.

*In the junkyard that is Section One, The Nate sits overlooking his ruined area to reign upon. He does so from a throne of metal, more than three times the size it should be to fit him comfortabley, seemingly without any emotion.

There is however, life still within this section. A small blood red haired girl awakens...*

*In the barrens that are Section Two, the two young ladies Merciless found yesterday are bound by ropes to poles. Much hay has been placed at their feet. Their mouths with tap overthem for the time being to keep them from making too much noise Before the flames are lit. Another Demonstration of Merciless's name. He stands infront of the girls, looking at a watch.*
"That fucking asshole is making me wait..."
*His often vulgarity showing it's face once again. He taps his foot in annoyance.*

*The scorched lands of Section Three, Haku of the Flame sits atop a house he had lit aflame the previous day. Or atleast...what remains of the house. The burnt corspes still inside. The reason why? He did not think of one, he did not care. At the entrance of what was once a house lies the scorched corspes of two soldiers not quite in the correct section, and thus completely dispensable. A boy kneels to Haku, and is told the following:*
"Alright, listen up. I saved your life and gave you my personal flame, your life is mine from here on. Now, Slave, my first order is for you to go to Section Six. There's a housing section I ordered be set aflame, and I haven't gotten any word from that bunch of worthless slaves. Use those flames I got you and find out what happened."
*The boy darted off towards section six, his feet lit aflame. As he ran he became more enflamed, and soon became a flying fireball no large than a grown man's fist.
Haku jumped down from the remains of the burnt building and blasted out a large fireball his own size towards section two. His own body dissipated into the fireball as it left. It reached atleast a hundred feet before it simply burst onto the ground, Haku appearing from the dispersing flames. The ultimate means of travel for Haku of the Flame.*

*Within the desert city of Section Five, Everbone sits in an underground lair. His eyes then begin to search the ceiling of the room he was in.*
"Someone...coming..."
*A young woman around the age of twenty three stood nearby in the room, brings Everbone her own brew of tea. The cups are made of a powerful and endurable metal, a small cup and a large mug-sized cup. It is clear which is which, and their materials of make are metal due to Everbone's obvious strength. As the woman places the plate down infront of Everbone on a table she speaks. Her voice is soft, sweet, gentle, and perhaps even weak.*
"Who, Darling?"
*Everbone takes up his 'cup' and takes a drink, his eyes still searching the ceiling as if this someone would burst down through it any moment.*
"Not sure...But he's in the wrong section..."
*Everbone puts down the cup on the table, grabs his massive sword, and proceeds to leave the lair. The young woman smiles as he leaves and affirms him that:*
"Please be back for dinner, Darling."

*Section Six is in quite a rouse. A section of housing has been burnt to the ground, there are no signs of survivors. In the next block, BlueInferno stands over the beheaded corpse of a man still grasping a powerful claymore. Surrounding them are perhaps two hundred corpses of soldiers.

Two soldiers are dragging a woman with burgandy coloured neck length hair wearing a long red dress towards BlueInferno. The soldiers release her as BlueInferno dematerials his blue and red "Typhoon" blade into then air. He catchs the woman being released and lifts her up by her neck.*
"That fire my men spent the entire night putting out, I know none of them nor I started it. Now I want to know Who you work for. Who is the leader of your little Rebellious group. And why did you set buildings on fire that have Nothing to do with soldiers or any general. Answer me!"
*BlueInferno shakes the woman. Her hands grasp at her neck, or rather the hand grasping it. Fear shakes throughout her body, even shaking her dress and hair. She attempts to speak*
"It...We're...Ha...He..."
*BlueInferno believes she cannot speak with his grip and releases her. She falls to the ground. She cannot speak, they'll kill her. She cannot refuse to speak, or BlueInferno will kill her. Her thoughts stress her head before her knees hit the ground. Luckily this was just the trick. The fear, stress, and utter pain she was in pushed her body to the convient limit. She Fainted.*

*The rain soaked city of Section Seven was rather quiet, peaceful, and perhaps even dead for the moment. The parade, and the city-wide celebration afterwards, had effectively drained everyone of their energy, but left them truely happy. One could mistake people on this day for being homeless due to many of them having simply passed out on the streets before making it home. Passing out against a wall, the floor, or even other people. Most of them smiling, many oblivious to their oncoming hangovers. It was certain today would not be the greatest day. Albeit most were seemingly sleeping through it. Even the air itself seemed to still be dancing with the happiness it witnessed last night.*

-End of Chapter II introduction, you may begin with your Chapter Post now.-

OOC: YES!!!Done...Again...Sadly...Urgh...
I'm abit tired at the moment, having had to write this a total of three times...In a row...On a Friday night...Yeah...Joy.

Anyways I'll do a follow post either within a few hours or half a day(Depends on if I go to sleep within the next two hours or not). That post will cover both my Alexia Post and covers a few other events I have yet to cover via this post. Which means it will also introduce several new characters, whose profiles/pictures will be available in the Advent Legacy Off-Topic...topic...Renamed the Advent Legacy Sign-Up topic for clarity.

So yeah, if you really want to start writing. Do it in a .txt document and save it. However:

A. Do not use the previous events list to go off of. Most of them are already taken care off by this chapter's intro, the rest will have more information posted about what happened/if they're still available for user interaction/etc.
B. This chapter is called "Strings" meaning your character's actions in this chapter will them being strung by the events of Chapter One. Being strung more into the plot, if you will. So they will infact continue off the events of the last chapter.
C. After the follow-up post is posted, if you wish to join in with an event's happenings feel free to do so.

So...yeah...Wait for the next post before continuing your character please. Like I said, make it a .txt document that way you can just edit it when the follow up post comes.
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OOC: After 6 hours of excess character/legionare writing I'm ready to continue on!

Back in Character(s):

~Red's Intro~

*A girl lies alone, unconscious, amongst the wrecked junkyard that is Section One. The area she lies in has a mist-like rain from being close enough to Section Seven. Her eyes awake, she pushes herself up from laying down to a rather lean. She looks around at the area, and then stands up. Something black moves that catchs the bottom of her eye.

She looks down, it's a black cloth. The cloth is against her body. She continues looking at it and realizes she is infact wearing the black cloth. She feels the fabric, and it is soft on her hands. Her pitch black hands? No...More cloth, black gloves. She takes them off the better feel the dress. It is velvety and soft. She puts the gloves back on. A thought crosses her mind.
When were these clothes put on her? By who? Did she put them on herself? She could not remember it.

She felt alone, and stay quiet. She could not hear anything. Her sight was still somewhat blurry. Then she was started, something of a vibrant of bloody shade of red seemed to reach out from behind her. She backed away abit. Her eyes focused abit more, the red thing was...parting...waving...It didn't look alive. It wasn't cloth though. She grabbed it, and tugged abit. She felt something pull at her scalp. She felt up the large strand of hair and traced it back to her own head. It was her own hair. Why was she surprised by her own hair? Why couldn't she remember that was her hair?

Suddenly she could hear again. Someone was talking to her. She looked around, there was no one. She couldn't understand their words yet. The words became more clear. Something shined in the distance, a red spotlight on...something stick out of a massive pile of scrap...metalic scrap. Finally she could understand the words*
"Come to me"
*She noticed, as she stood up and began to walk, she still could not hear. Her bare feet made no sound on the massive metal walls that had fallen. Nor could she hair the wind or rain. This voice could not be heard, clearly. Was it in her mind?

The girl began to walk, her sight was blurry. She could not smell anything. Out of the corner of her eye she saw something red. It seemed like her hair but then that same hair she was thinking of flipped infront of her by the wind she could not hear. It was something else...something on the ground. The voice called to her again. She left the red blur alone and continued onward to the light.

Finally, she came into the red light. Her vision hadn't improved, everything was still blurry around her. Except...Infront of her in the middle of the red light, there was a sword she could see so clearly. It's golden handle, it's crystal clear blade. The voice spoke again.*
"Release Me"
*What did it mean? No...What did it matter? She was being told what to do. Not with words either. Her arm began to pulsate. She lifted it up until the pulsation stop, when it was on level with the sword's handle. Her hand began to pulsate, and so she grasped the handle. The pulsation continued. And so she lifted the sword out of the ground.

The only thing she could see clearly in this world shattered and exploded in her hand. There was no pain, and the shards did not touch her body at all. The blade changed, but it was still the only thing she could see so perfectly clear. The blade was silvery and curved somewhat at the end, while the tip was flat. The golden hand had become silvery also. The blade's form had completely changed(See Red's image to see what it currently looks like). The voice spoke again to her, seemingly stating it's name.*
"Blood Reaver"
*Suddenly her nose began to pulsate, it got hotter. And then...Something...A smell...Many smells. She could smell many things. Things she did not recognize, things she could. Rain, blood, rotting, along with many of the smells in this area. She lifted up her arm and smelt it, the smell was distanct and clearly her own. Suddenly her tounge pulsed and got hotter as her nose had. When the pulsation stopped, she understood what had happened. She stuck her tounge out, she could taste the misty rain. The salt. She licked the blade, it was metallic. She was somewhat happy to have both taste and smell back in her world. That feeling of happiness was stopped by the agonizing pulsation and whitehot burning of her eyes. It stopped, and so too did her deafness. She could hair the wind, the mist, even the raindrops. She even heard clattering, something soft hitting...no pushing through the metal in the area.
And finally her eyes pulsated, intense and burning pain. But she could not close them. It seemed like the world around her was shattering like glass. Suddenly she could see everything, perfectly clear as the sword was. She felt truely happy to have all her senses back fully.

That Red blur earlier...What was it? She began to walk in that direction. But something stopped her. The chance to enjoy her hearing again. A voice called to her, clearly this wasn't the voice in her head. She could almost instantly pinpoint the exact location of the voice before the first word finished. The man started down a hill of scrap metal before finally getting close enough to talk to her. She back away abit, scared.*
"Yo, kid. I gotta say I am Quite surprised you managed to get that sword out. Heard about it myself and tried, I couldn't do anything. Heheh."
*The massive backpack on the man clearly outweighing him. He stood just under six feet, rather intimdating for the girl. She stepped back abit more. The man understood her fear. He waves his hands abit once she begin instinctively clutching her sword tighter.*
"Ah ah, Hang on Hang on. I'm not gonna hurt ya. Relax relax."
*The man rubs his head. He looks around.*
"I'm looking for a guy around her, short guy big backpack like me...Seen him?"
*The girl is startled. She's being asked, even if she doesn't know. She wants to help the man...but she doesn't know how. Suddenly his mind is flooded with the image of that red blur. She doesn't understand it, but she remembers where it was. She turns away from the man and starts climbing up a large pile of junk, never letting go of her sword. She stops at the top of the pile and looks where the red blur was. It's still there, but it's not a blur. It's a large puddle of blood that was spread around by the rain. Small bits of pieces of whoever owned the blood lay within it. The man calls out to the girl as she begins to climb, and then proceeds to follow her. Stopping at the top.*
"Well I'll be. These things are real aren't they?"
*The man grasps the top of the girl's right lightly. It shocks her and the wing quickly shrugs off the man's hand. She freaks out and scurries abit away from the man, a good foot or two.*
"Oh sorry now. Didn't mean to startle you. Just never seen someone with wings before, especially ones like yours."
*Ones like hers? The touched right wing flapped abit, as if shaking off the man's presence. The girl touched it, feeling it. It was real, she could not only feel her hand touching it...She could feel the wing being touched by her hand. She couldn't seem to move them much on her own...More things she's forgotten...Along with when did she get these wings? What happened to her that made her end up here?

She turned her attention away from the wing and back to the pool of blood. The man's eyes followed.*
"Sheesh, told him to be careful. Well...No point worrying about something ya can't fix, right? So how about you, kiddo? Care to be my new assistant? What's your name?"
*The girl went quickly to answer the man...No...She couldn't...Why not? Her mouth...Couldn't speak the words? No...She couldn't remember what words to speak. Her name...What was her name? She hadn't thought about it since she awoke...What was her name? What was it? The voice in her head return, perhaps trying to answer her question. She held out the blade her right hand grasped with the tip pointing to her left and repeated what the voice told her.*
"Blood Reaver"
*The man waved her down and patted her on the head.*
"No no. That's the weapon's name. What is your name, kiddo? Or maybe...ouch...Forgot your name?"
*The girl's eyes began to tear. She started try to remember anything, anything at all about her past. She couldn't. Her tears were let loose and the blade vanish is a whirl of red light as she grasped for and fell onto the man. The tears wouldn't stop. The man rubbed her head and back to comfort her. His kind and strong voice spoke to her for more comfort.*
"Heheh, don't worry about it, Red. You've got a name, it's not like you lost it. You just don't remember it right now. I don't suppose you remember anything...So how about I bring ya back to section seven with me? You can stay at my place for awhile."
*The girl's sobbing stopped abit. She managed to let out a single question, still holding her small head into the man's chest, still crying.*
"R...Red?"
*The man let out a strong, but small, laugh. He rubbed her head alittle harder to tease her.*
"It's cause of your hair, Red. So? Gonna come with me? I can't tell ya much about your past, but I do know alittle about that sword. Could help ya remember something. I'm a merchant from Section Seven, even calls me Merk."
*Merk got Red to her feet and they began their walk to section seven. Before they got far, Red spoke again with her soft and still breaking voice from her sorrow.*
"Merk...I'm sorry..."
*Merk slapped her head abit. She shuffled down abit, but they kept walking.*
"Gotta say it right. When someone does something nice for ya, you gotta say "Thanks" not be sorry about it. Got it, Red?"
*Red nodded.*

~Suis's Intro~

*Suis stood upon the roof of section two, still watching the city. Master Rain sent her here to check out...Something he wouldn't say, simply that she would watch the city for two days or until the unspoken event happened.

She often pulls out her silver legionare orb and marvels at it for awhile before putting it back within her own body.
Shows how fun this assignment is...

Then it hit her. The Event was about to happen. She watched as the two girls were roped to a poll. And she continued to watch for an hour after. There was still something going to happen she was supposed to observe. This was why Master Rain did not say what it was, he didn't completely know. He only knew that something was going to happen.

A human-sized fireball hit the ground near where the girls were roped, out of it came General Haku of the Flame.*
Suis:"(What is...He doing...Here)"
*General Haku of the Flame walked up to Merciless and the two proceeded to converse*
General Merciless: "Asshole! You're late."
General Haku of the Flame: "Shut up and come here, bitch."
*The two entwined and kissed...rather deeply. Suis felt so violated. Her eyes felt as if they should be burned out or in some way just be removed.*
Suis: "(Master Rain...What have I done to diserve this? Please tell me there's a plot to destroy my master here rather than just torment for my eyes...Or anything...)"
*The tape on the mouths of the girls were removed rather...cruelly. A sound RIP. It certainly hurt, but the dark haired girl did not scream. Appearently she understood that pain wasn't even comparable to what they were about to go through. Haku of the Flame lifted up his hand, it began to enflame the air infront of it. Forming a small fireball. Suis knew too well where the flame was headed...The hay at the bottom of the poles. Truely Cruel. The reason was just to please the two Generals. Suis wanted nothing more than to stop it but...She was told to observe for a reason. Then General Merciless spoke, after licking both his and General Haku of the Flame's lips.*
General Merciless: "So, you burn the three places we talked about?"
General Haku of the Flame: "Yeah yeah. Not sure about that set in section six, but the fires in seven and in my own personal town I know went flawlessly. They're all dead."
*The fireball spinning with General Haku of the Flame's hand gained more and more power with time. However, it seemed General Merciless was displeased with the spoken words.*
General Merciless: "What the fuck man? Fucking make sure of it. If even ONE of those magi lives it'll fuck Everything up!"
General Haku of the Flame: "Shut up. They're dead."
*The generals' arguement had distracted them. The Dark haired girl's ropes were cut by someone in the village. When the generals attention turned back the girl after General Haku of the Flames spoke, the man had made sure to already be gone. The ropes very loose and about to slip.

Haku released the fireball with all it's force. The size of it blocking their view. It lit the two poles aflame. The screams of the blond haired girl extremely loud, and the flames so powerful, that when the dark haired girl escaped just after the fireball being launched, the generals did not know. And the people would not point it out of the few four who noticed.

The girl escaped into the alleyway behind the stage. Two of the gaurds had however noticed their escape. The man that helped her out stood against the wall, silently. The man pointed out there was a Spy nearby and pointed to...Suis's Location! The guards turned too fast, she was seen. The man was clever, with the guards attention drawn on a 'spy', the priority on an escaping 'demonstration' that may later please them physically was...non-existant.*
Suis: (Dammit...Sorry Master Rain, I can spy no more...)
*Suis pushes away from the ledge of the roof she was on and ran quickly, as fast as she could towards three. Section one would a much faster way of getting to Section Seven. But it was not only more dangerous to someone whose existance and rank is only known within section Seven, thus marking her as an ordinary bistander...But going that way would put her in the eyesight of the two dark generals nearby...

She ran quickly off to section three. She had to get there with enough distance between her and her persuers that she could convince the guards to let her through...Would she make it? Could she?*

~Milly&Goliath's Intro~

*Within the greenery and flush trees of Section Four, Milly lies sitting on the ground. Abit dazzed, holding her head.
The mammoth Goliath lifting up a soldier by his skull. His grip tight...ening. Despite being threatened by the soldiers, Goliath merely ignores them. Milly is in danager, milly was hit by this person...*
Milly: "Goliath! It's okay, put him down."
*Goliath obeyed and let go of the man, he fell to the floor with a sound thud. Milly was still rubbing her head.

The soldiers found Goliath to have threatened their comrade and drew there weapons. Goliath put a hand infront of Milly, she stepped back abit...But not without a good warning to give...with a smile.*
Milly: "Careful. If you fight Goliath you'll probabley die."
*The soldiers laughed and announced themselves as 'Gods among men". Milly's somewhat demented smile shown true.*
"Oh...But you don't strike me as any threat to Goliath. You'll die if you try, just warning you."
*The soldiers would pay no heed to the warning and charged at Goliath. With a single swing of his arm, he both blocked several attacks and swatted several soldiers almost ten feet away. Afterwards all the soldiers bowed down. The soldier that bumped into Milly came forth directly to her feet.*
Soldier: "I'm sorry, miss! I didn't mean to hurt you, I promise!"
Milly: "It's okay, I'm fine."
*Milly pats the soldier on the head and with Goliath at her side in all his massive glory, continues her walk through the town. She still hasn't decided where to go yet, but she'll know when she gets there.

This event distracts a nearby fruit vender who was holding down the hand of a girl with a knife over it for some reason. However, he finds the girl has vanished during the course of the event.*

~Event Checklist/Clear Up~

Allow me to explain The results of each sections 'events' and where they're resolved/taken care of:

Section One:
1. The merchant is the character Merk in Red's Intro.
2. Is the dead merchant the two see.
3. Is the sword Red takes up.
4. The girl is Red.

Section Two:
1. The two girls tied to the poles in Suis' intro.
2. Just as the girl would finally have to give up on protecting the colourful bottles, the soldiers' attention is grabbed by the girls being tied to poles. She is lucky, and escapes.
3. Nothing unstated happens really...
4. This girl is Suis. The color of her orb is different, I apologize.

Section Three:
1. The house Haku burns down.
2. The boy Haku makes his scout. The soldiers are the corpses.
3. Resolved by WhitePhoenix's "Rail Phoenix" character.
4. The girl is lit aflame...and dies...The reason why is unknown.

Section Four:
1. The event goes as one could expect.
2. The girl is forced to 'compensate' the man for his damaged hip by doing something that would infact damage it more...
3. Milly&Goliath's Intro.
4. Resolved in Milly&Goliath's Intro.

Section Five:
1. The girl manages to withstand the brutal punishment long enough for Everbone to arrive to stop the annoying soldiers who continua kicking the woman with their loud "Come on!" and "Give'em Up!" along with the loud clattering of their armor. Clearly both the soldiers in this and the 4th event are not from section five or they would know better and have more silent armor. Everbone pays no attention to the girl, she was another good girl by remaining silent.
2. The man is mentioned by Everbone in Chapter II's intro, further resolution will be in the next post.
3. The man was appearently mugged, and rather than being unconscious...is dead. The thieves stole his clothing as well.
4. Resolved by HeartCard's character "Alexia Varnet".

Section Six:
1. The houses are burnt to the ground. There is only one survivor.
2. The fued dissolves and the couple return to being normal.
3. The man is killed at the hands of BlueInferno.
4. The girl decides not to take the shot after much dilerberation when BlueInferno shows up to take down the man listed in Event 3. Best not to have to fend off a Dark General.

Section Seven:
1. Resolves as one would expect.
2. The flames appearently burnt down the house. No one has noticed yet however, due to everyone being tired from the parade/party from that same night.
3. Resolves with the young lady finally passing out near the soldier while leaning against him.
4. Resolving with Therren Cragan's character "Pariah".

OOC: Whew! Done!
Next post willl be Alexia and moar development on Suis and Red. Along with some development on what Everbone 'noticed' and even moar!

P.S. Anyone notice how I wrote the non-speech parts of each character's intro to reflect their thoughts on a person and certain things? Such as Red not even thinking about her wings or past until it comes to that point, along with the confusion in the post until she can understand it. Or Suis naming each general by their full name(EX: Haku of the Flame instead of Haku) along with the pre-tag of 'General' showing her regard for the Dark Generals.

I would write more but...Umm...
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OOC: I'm not entirely sure if the numbered events mean they happen in the said order, but I'm gonna go ahead and throw my piece in this together now.

With the sudden thrust of The Dress having thrown Pariah back, the girl, Alice, was able to come to her feet. The force from The Dress was substantially weaker than when she attacked earlier and Pariah was able to land on his feet with relative ease.

"Now then, I've shown you my trump card. Why don't you explain that eye of yours?" Alice asked.

"You've got some questions to answer yourself," Pariah said. "Before I answer anything you will explain some things to me."

Alice let out a frustrated sigh. "Fine. Since you're obviously not going to back down until I do answer then ask away."

"What are you? How is it that you knew I was dead even when I kept my form hidden?"

"Well the second one is easy," Alice began with a laugh. "You're so damn wet that you smell worse than a landfill."

Even though the girl found it funny Pariah was not amused, what remained of his lips tightening in anger, the grip on his axe tightening as well.

"None of your stupid jokes! Answer me!"

Another frustrated sigh. "Look, I don't know what to tell you. I'm just a simple girl who..."

"Simple girl? A simple girl doesn't have eyes like mine. Now what are you?"

Alice placed her hands on her hips, letting out another irate sigh. "I'm really starting to get sick of-"

Alice stopped mid sentence, a bead of sweat traveling down her cheek and dripping onto the blade of Pariah's axe, embedded mere millimeters from her neck in the wall behind her. A stream of violet light extended from the handle of Pariah's axe back to his hand, and with a flick of his wrist the weapon returned to him.

"You haven't seen all of my tricks either," Pariah said. "Now then, why don't you answer?"

Alexia's throat pulsed as she forcefully gulped. Pariah could see the nervousness in her eyes, the fear in her body. It was the same fear she held when he had her pinned, axe to her throat, only this time she was trembling.

"There's nothing I can tell you right now," Alice said, a thin stream of blood flowing down the side of her neck. Pariah was even closer to killing her than she could ever know. He had assured the truth now because he made sure she knew that her life depended on it.

"I see. Well then, I suppose a promise is a promise, but there is little I can tell you about the eye, or my name. I have long since forgotten how I came to posses this eye, much less the extent of what it may be able to do. Thus far it allows me perfect vision in the darkness, but in the daylight it is blind. With that said, there is one more question I have to ask."

"And what's that?" Alice asked, her body beginning to still and her breath finally returning to normal.

"Tell me how to find the one called Vetmode."
I can not tell, is it just me or do we all look just like
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I now activate the Yugioh Card: Emo Field!
Now I am protected from all joy and hope by this force field of emoness, threaded together of the constant words "Jannelle, Chippette, and FAIL"! Your rays of thread activity will not be able to reach my happiness points!
And I end my turn!

P.S. : Therren:
1. The events a listed by numbers only so people could call dibs on them or say which one they were participating in. Making it easier to say which one is taken. They happen(Chronologically speaking) in roughly the same time.
2. Let's keep Alice's mouth sweet and playful please. Vulgarity, swear words, and egotisim should be thinks she lacks in speech. When scared she is direct and to the point from her fear. Thus far you've done it amazingly and perhaps creepily well, the only slip up being her use of 'Damn'. The reason I exclude swear words from her speech is becuase they are only appearent in characters with anger or hatred, for characters like Alice who are without hate and anger(While still holding all other emotions), swear words would be very unlikely to be said. Thus why all the "Puzzlers" in stories, such as the Cheshire Cat in any of his incarnations of the Alice and Wonderland series, does not swear at all.

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~Alice~

*Alice trembled. Fear overcame her. Her eyes watered abit. Fear was an intense emotion for her. Her hatred was sealed away and thus all her other emotions have been made more intense, in times like this it was perhaps too intense.*
"I...I wouldn't if I-"
*Her voice was cut off, she saw Pariah's arm twitch, and the blade seemed to come closer to her. Not enough to make a difference, but enough to make the point clear.*
"The Main Castle. Vetmode's in the main castle."
*Pariah's mouth open to move, but it was cut off quickly before anything could be asked by Alice's mouth*
"Do not say it! Do not...call me one of them...I'm not. Vetmode is in his throne room, always, in the main castle, always."
*The axe let up on her, she caught her fault using the bandages over her hands and feet to avoid injury.*
"You won't get in easily. Only the genearls do...I swear you're just like that person...HeartCard...She should be in section four by now, if you want her."
*Alice didn't want to be forced to go along, she made her attempt at an escape. But in her panic, that attempt was made easily to foil if one tried. She began to run to try to jump through a window, hoping to escape the range of Pariah's abilities, and hoping for a chance to escape all together.*

~Suis~

*Suis' ears caught something as she bribed the gatesmen to let her through with a small bag of gold coins. These were the exact words she was sent to hear. Her ears were excellent, and the Dark Generals were less than a half mile away, the city was mostly quiet, and their rant could be heard vaguely by most, but perfectly by her ears.*
General Merciless: "And the flames?"
General Haku of the Flames: "It worked perfectly, even the damn rain in seven couldn't stop it. Though I'm not sure six's fire ever started or not."
General Merciless: "About damn time. Time to get rid of those two sections, and when Boneface, Bluefag, and Spit are distracted, ha we'll fucking kill them."
General Haku of the Flame: "Yeah then their seals are mi..Ours."

*A smile reached from ear to ear as the gate closed behind her. The few gold coins she gave the guards more than convinced them. Her mission was indeed complete. The information was gathered perfectly.
The gate was almost completely closed before she heard the voices of the guards finally catching up to the gatemen. She took off. With the gate down and no one on this side chasing her, she quickly escaped into the city, and then through it.

She continued going to city through city, being forced to have to bribe the gatesmen standing guard at the entrance to section four.

At this point she was safe. Soldiers from sections one through three were very not welcome in section four, Kitten rather hated all three of the dark generals that governed them.

She continued her way to section seven. A long and tiresome walk, she first stopped and got some fruit first. The gaurds up ahead would require no fee to use their gates. The only problem was Section Five's gate. Annoying. Rather than most gates it was a tunnel underground with a locking gate on both sides, both sides would be unlocked if either side flipped their side's switch. It was such to avoid causing too much sound that the large seven foot doors made when one was leaving a section.*

~Red~
*Merk continued to lead her through the wreckage that was section One, or as he called it "The Grave of Merchandise". Finally they reached the gate to Section One. Every so often merk would stop to add things to his massive backpack.

Several times, Red's Blood Reaver blade would manifest itself into her open right hand(The left being held most of the time by merc).*
"Hey, Red. See if ya can keep that thing out of sight."
*Red nodded but couldn't seem to do anything with the blade. It wouldn't unmanifest itself when she wanted it to.*
"Nothing, eh? Alright hand it hear, we'll put in my bag for now."
*Red nodded again and attempted to hand the blade to him. He got a good grasp on the blade, but the moment Red let go of the blade it would pass through Merk's hand and landed on the floor with a metal thud. Red would always pick the blade back up and merk would laugh.*
"Ha ha. Guess it doesn't like me, eh? Alright, Red, that thing is your birthday present from your parents!"
*Red's head tilted in confusion as she tried to grasp these words she could not remember.*
Red: "Birth..day? Par..ents?
Merk: "Guess ya don't remember. Alright lemme explain. Parents are the people who raised ya, normally the same people that made ya. Like a mom and dad. Guess ya could call me yer dad, eh?
And uhh, lets see... A Birthday is normally the day number out of the month your born in. Like the third of march for me! Every year your friends and family celebrate your birthday by giving ya presents and such with a big party.
But in your case, it's the day I found ya, Today. And that sword is your first birthday present. When we get back to my place we'll have a real birthday party with Jesse, Tips, and everyone else!"

*Red seemed happy. The fact that she couldn't remember the words, or remember what they were for her before today didn't matter. She'd already taken up Merk's catch phrase "No point worrying bout something ya can't fix." But something did bother her. Two more words she didn't know.*
Red: "Jes..se and..Tips?"
Merk: "Heh, you'll meet'em soon. Let's call them your big sisters. We're all one happy family...Now if we can find your brother...ha that guy won't be back for days though.*
Red: "Family?"
Merk: "Urgh, I gotta stop that. I'm just confusing ya more. Alright, last one. A Family are the people ya care about, the people ya care about, the people ya love. They also live with ya for a long time."
Red: "Merk is...Family?"
*Merk laughed and patted Red on the head.*
Merk: "Yup, I'm family, Red. And you're part of my family now."

OOC Break: My mp3 player epically hates me for letting it's battery run out today during my walk. It's sitting on the charging buy also playing. For those who don't get it, Red and Merk have a Father/Daughter relationship, and what song would my mp3 player on ALL+SHUFFLE play?
Why the Little Mermaid's "Kiss the Girl". EPIC FACEPALM!

~Milly&Goliath~

*Milly is spinning. A girl in a black dress with long purple hair just ran right past her almost colliding. Goliath lets out a small grunt and then picks up Milly and puts her on his shoulders.

Appearently tired of people running into her due to her short size.*
Milly: "Ahaha~Sorry, Goliath."
*Milly points to the massive gate to section Three.*
Milly: "That way! That way!"
*Goliath grunts, and rather than turning to the left where Section Three is, decides to head for the gate to Section Five to his right.*
Milly: "Goliath, no no. Wrong way! Oh well..."
*Goliath continues walking, ignoring the squiring Milly on his shoulders tapping his head. His instincts tell him to keep milly away from that direction. Death and heat seem to be coming from that way.*
Milly: "I guess it's fine...You probabley know better, right? Good Goliath!"
*Milly pats Goliath on the head as they walk. Often distracting people on the streets due to Goliath's massive and muscular size.*

-~Section Five~-
~Alexia~
*Alexia continues walking, the girl still walking next to her. Their walk is silent, but neither of the girls is on the inside. The physical pain of the girl holding her dismembered arm in place.
The mental pain of the Alexia's empathic situation for the girl.

Alexia kept her hopes up for the girl though. It would be better to simply leave the arm behind and wrap the shoulder to avoid further blood loss. And that thought couldn't have been more right. Alexia noticed the wobbley walking of the girl, blood loss was leaving her weak. She put her hand on the shoulder to signal the girl to stop. She then whispered softly to the girl.*
Alexia: "hold that arm tight, i'll carry you."
*The girl nodded. And Alexia picked her up and almost cradled her with her arms. The girl held tightly to her severed arm, holding it in place almost perfectly. If one had not known what had happened, one might think the arm had simply had a wire tied around it or something. Every few steps Alexia was sadly reassured the arm was indeed severed. The seperational point in the arm would open abit and blood would come out if Alexia didn't walk soft enough.

Something didn't seem right though, the arm had been severed for almost five minutes...It should be stiff atleast somewhat. But it bent just as a normal arm would when Alexia picked up the girl.

They continued their walk...No, something would stop them. Alexia heard it. Moist boots pressing into the rough dirt and sand. Small metallic clanking sounds here and there...
Him?
No...He wouldn't come to this town. It's be a contradiction of his name to be in this time. This town never rains, so there should be no person in this time with such a name.
She made quick work to hide in an alleyway, still caring the girl.
More terrorible sounds followed. Stomping? Everbone's feet...
Two generals were both enclosing in her direction...Far too quickly.
Alexia turned her head away from the opening of the alleyway just to confirm how horrifically bad this situation was. The alleyway was a dead end. And the roofs were too high up for her to be able to jump up to while carrying the girl. But she wouldn't abandon her.

Rain and Everbone.*
Alexia: (This...Sucks...)
*The general came to a distance of six feet away from one another. Each three feet from being directly infront of the opening of the alleyway that Alexia had herself crouched in, still holding the girl in her arms. And now additionally holding her heart from exploding in panic.

The two generals began conversing.*
Everbone: "You are in the Wrong Section, Friend."
Rain: "Your sarcasim is evident, but perhaps temporary."
Everbone: "Temporary?"
Rain: "How can I put this...How does Haku feel about you?"
*Everbone was slightly annoyed and fringed, Rain's voice was abit noisy.*
Everbone: "At best...Temporary."
*Rain smirked. Everbone was declaring his distaste for the noisy Haku, refering to Haku's thoughts about Everbone as 'temporary' stated that Everbone would end Haku's ability to think if given the chance.*
Rain: "And Merciless?"
Everbone: "Temporary again. Your point?"
Rain: "Have you heard of the unstoppable fires in both Sections Six and Sevens?"
Everbone: "Your Point?"
Rain: "Just wondering...how flammable is your town?"
*Everbone rushed towards and lifted up his fellow general by the color, flipping Rain's long purple hair out of his coat. It was intensely long, coming down to his knees. A powerful and dark shade of purple.*
Rain: "Ahem...My point is, you're in need of help here. Both the mentioned idiots are, if I'm correct, attempting to take down the both of us."
Everbone: "Sounds to me like you're just trying to get generals to turn against each other. I'd like to note I don't see the general of Six here backing your claims."
Rain: "The man is completely against any battling of generals. Either way it should be obvious why those two would want our three sections gone."
Everbone: "I'm waiting..."

*Alexia's situation worsened. Some of the blood from the girl's arm dripped onto the ground, onto hard stone. She couldn't move her arm to catch it, her cloth would be even more loud.
Everbone noticed instantly, releasing Rain and swinging his Tombestone blade at the alleyway.*

Everbone: "Get out here."

*Alexia fringed, but obeyed. Making sure to be as quiet about her movements as possible. She stood up and walked out of the alleyway.*

Everbone: "Appearently that girl slowed your leaving down. Get going."
*Alexia bowed her head abit and attempted to walk away. Her feet were haltered by Rain's voice.*
Rain: "Hold it, HeartCard. I think you should stay."
Everbone: "I've granted her passage so long as she leaves quickly."
Rain: "I believe that HeartCard is one to be killed if recognized."
Everbone: "Do as you wish. She has done me a kindness, and for today I will not kill her. You however, are free to do so."
Rain: "Actually my section holds no bar on miss Alexia, nor I. Besides, I find I'm rather in need of her services. You've been listening, so I imagine you have a good idea of what I have use of you for."
*Alexia's eyes closed tightly in annoyance. She opened them again. She'd fought this man twice before, neither was serious as one in both cases was being forced to hold back for some reason. But certainly, she did not want to fight at his side. She despised Rain so deeply, so madly, she could not allow such a thing to happen if she had a choice.

The general who CHOOSE to serve under Vetmode the moment the war began. There was not a single general, even Vetmode himself, she hated more.
But the situation entailed she get the girl to whatever place she wanted in section seven, by any means.
Alexia ran from a battle she could not win, but never from a promise. And this was certainly a promise, if unspoken.*
Alexia: "I refuse. This girls is going to Section Seven before anything."
*Her voice was strong, sturdy, and certainly determined but still not loud. Perhaps abit much so still, Everbone grunted. Alexia lowered her head abit.

Rain thought to first ask 'Why' but he thought of a more effective statement.*
Rain: "Why miss Alexia, how DO you plan to get through Section Six?"
*Everbone chuckled. Alexia's arms tightened up.

She couldn't protect the girl afterall...She could take her to the gates of section five at best. She could not enter Section Six, everyone recognized her and most of the soldiers would be able to block her off and force her into fights. Something impossible to get through while protecting the girl AND worrying about BlueInferno's location along with how soon it would take him to arrive.

The girl was at more risk of death by traveling with Alexia in section six than from blood loss.
Her head sunk lower. Her eyes closed, her teeth closed. Rain snapped his fingers.*
Rain: "Exactly. You can't. Of course...I might be able to get you directly into my section. But why would I do that?"
*Everbone clapped, and Rain took a bow. Alexia raised her head and opened her eyes.
She bowed her head again, but this time keeping her eyes open and bringing her head back up. A long nod, or more of a sigh changed at the last moment into a nod.

With that said Everbone lifted up Rain again by his collar.*
Everbone: "I however, am not so easily convi-"
*Everbones voice was interupted by Suis' appearence and calling of "My Lord!". She leaped at Everbone, thinking her master in danger. But caught so easily by Everbone's grip.*
Rain: "You're abit late, aren't you? This, Everbone, would be my convincing and seductive 'Proof' you asked for."
*Everbone released the both of them, Suis' mouth gapping at the term 'seductive'. Flattering but...Was she just a bargaining chip!?*
Everbone: "I find her unappealing for a 'Truth'. Your have what to tell me, Toy of the Rain?"

*More confusion. Should she be flattered for being mentioned as something Rain makes use of, or should she be offended?*

Suis: "M-Master Rain, I witnessed Generals Merciless and-"
*She was interupted by a loud grunt from Everbone, and Rain's hand waving weakly. Tone down the sound... She lowered her voice.*
Suis: "...Haku of the Flame admitting to the recent fires in section three, six, and seven. They stated they would distract General Everbone, General BlueInferno, and Master Rain with unstoppable fires on all the housing to ensure they could get a chance to slay them. And something about taking each General's 'Seal'?"
*Everbone arm was again...lifting someone in the air. Suis this time.*
Everbone: "She knows What of the seals?"
Rain: "Nothing. But it seems both Haku and Merciless do. This is why I came directly to you rather than BlueInferno or anyone else. Aside from us two, there shouldn't be anyone who knows about the seals."

*Suis and Alexia, despite being on previously opposing sides, held much the same thought.
The seals is...What?

Everbone released her grip on Suis, she fell to the floor, unlike the rest of the party here she wasn't quite able to catch her fall and landed soundly on her bottom with a Thud.*
Rain: "Like my 'Proof', now?"
Everbone: "Convincing...At most. And why do we need the help of the HeartCard? We should be more than enough."
Rain: "If they know about the seals, they're no doubt using their own. Explaining why even the perpetual rain of my section could not end the fires started there.
Besides the fact that this is something we can't exactly involve Soldiers in.
HeartCard would be useful, especially if she ends up as a perminate fixture in my elites. Something I've offered you before, Miss Alexia."
Everbone: "Fine. I suppose I am lacking in terms of manpower myself. I have only two Elites..."
Rain: "What'd you expect when no one can pratice from the sound restrict-"
*Rain was beginning to get accustomed to being lifted in high places by this point. He closed his annoying and noisy mouth. He was dropped for being a good boy and starting a nice gentle silence.*
Rain: "Suis, Lady Alexia, we're going now."
*Rain waved his hand and a portal of black opened up, a visible purple aura surround it. Within the portal one could see the blessed town of eternal rain.

Rain bowed and invited Alexia to be first as a 'Good Gentleman Should'. Still holding the girl in her arms, she stepped in, followed by Suis and finally Rain before the portal closed.

They found themselves on the streets within the Seventh Section. Already Alexia's hair was getting soaked from the pouring rain. Rain and Suis began walking their own direction.*
Rain: "My dear lady Alexia, please come to my mansion by tomorrow at One o' clock in the afternoon. I imagine you would know where it is, after storming it thrice."
*Alexia sighed and the girl lifted her legs and moved them abit outward from Alexia's chest. Signalling she wanted down.
Alexia let the girl down gentle. During all the commotion she hadn't let the arm get out of place at all.*
Alexia: "So...Where now?"
Girl: "Merk's Pub...please..."
*Being out of Section Five, the girl's voice level was just below normal, but still soft.*
*Alexia and the girl began walking further. The Blood loss didn't seem the affect the girl anymore, and the bleeding had stopped for the most part. Alexia followed the girl's slight lead through the streets.
Of course there was still one more question to ask.*
Alexia: "By the way, I don't suppose we've been introduced. My name is Alexia Varnet, and yours?"
Girl: "Rose...Rose Victoria..."

OOC: YES! PARTEH! DONEZORZ! This one took three hours to write just like the last one. Less Pew Pew more Q Q!
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3. The man was appearently mugged, and rather than being unconscious...is dead. The thieves stole his clothing as well.


Hunger knawed at his gut as he stared at the mans dead and naked form. A sort of primal, beast-like hunger felt to overtake him. His body burned like fire, despite the bone-chilling rain pouring upon from the heavens above. A number worked through his mind. Over and over again, a number that held a terrible prospect.

Twenty-Four. Twenty-Four. Twenty-Four...

He sat in the rain, his cloths soaked by the rain and overcome by a cold so great that it seemed to bite into his bone. Despite this he merely sat. His head tilt slightly as he stared at the water-logged body.

He licked his lips, unable to wait any longer. He slowly lifted himself to his feet; the tendons and muscles in his body protesting with delicious agony. His sword rattled a little as he finally made it to his feet.

"Ahh..." The Butcher spoke "So your hungry? Of course you are... always are... always..."

His his body waved, as if to fall at any moment. Each part of his body screamed at him to go some place warmer, that the meal could wait. But he ignored it. Never deny a meal... feast... devour...

Twenty-Four. Twenty-Four. Twenty-four...

He slowly made it to the body with shaky, his heart beating fast, drool dripping from is agape mouth. He was so hungry... He finally made his way to the body and knelt down next to the naked corpse; His face a bare inch from that of the dead man. His nostrils flared, inhaling the sweet and intoxicating scent of death.

Overcome by his desire he licked the dead-mans water drenched cheek. The hunger was too great, it compelling nature stronger then any drug. He bit into the mans cold cheek. The putrid taste of dead flesh attacked his taste buds, and with it an unreal since of euphoria washed over him.

He licked he wound he had caused and let the rain wash the blood away from his face. It wasn't enough, never enough. But it would settle his hunger for now. He slowly lifted the dead-mans body to his shoulder, and prepared to take his leave. Using the shadows and seldom-trekked paths to find his way to his home in Sector-One.

Unless something were to stop him...

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Firstly: There's no current rain in Section FIVE described as the DESERT section also noted to NEVER HAVE RAIN.

Another thing is how EXTREMELY far your character is from Section One(A total of Three sections away).

Albeit I doubt anyone would stop you from devouring the corpse of the man there.

I'll let it be only under the assumptions that this action takes up the entirety of your day. It takes about three hours to go from one section to another via walking. Assuming the character is running we can cut that time in half. Either way, That's 4 and a half hours to go to or from, 9 hours if you're doing both. This is excluding the time you stalked the body and the time the 'ritual' takes. That's about 10 or so hours outta your day.
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[[Hrm. Well, I honestly would rather not rewrite all of that. And I swore it was section Five that was currently raining. Which one is raining? The long walk back dun bother me. Arbeurs has all the time in the world. and you said it was a desert city... how do we know this? You can't expect us to read all of your posts, when it has nothing to do with us. Update the main page with info on the sectors or something.

Anyway to gimp it, and just make it so that my dude this this in another sector?]]
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Matar: It was started IN this topic. Plus one could easily discern what each place is like by reading each of the posts in THIS topic.

If the mentioning was in the Other topic, it would be somewhat understandable that you didn't remember it. However Section One, Three, Five, and Seven's areas have been perfectly described in THIS topic as well.
Infact just in the post BEFORE yours(which is in this topic, therefore you have no excuse other than epic failz on your part) there's this certain line about section five:

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No...He wouldn't come to this town. It's be a contradiction of his name to be in this time. This town never rains, so there should be no person in this time with such a name.

This was from Alexia's Thoughts/actions which were stated both in that same post and in the previous ones involving Alexia to be in Section Five. The phrase implys that the Dark General character whose name is Rain should not be in a town that never has the weather effect of rain as it was a contradiction of sorts.

That alone would be enough to discern that Section Five never rains.

Section Seven's area is ALWAYS described as very rainy in virtually any post involving it by anyone in this topic thus far. It's described as having such intense rain that for atleast a quarter mile or so out from the section there is light rain, and mist-like rain afterwards for about another quarter mile as is said in Red's intro.

Either way, like I said there's no reason to rewrite your entire post. We'll just mentally slash out the references to rain. The moisture on the man's cheek for example could be changed to sweat or he could just have a really oilly body.
And as you said, time is no matter to your character. There's no reason he couldn't manage a 10-11 hour walk to bring the body back to section One(10-11 due to the excess time from having to sneak through alleyways of Afdefrum).
I most of the edits are mental until I log it in my log of these topics, which I then make the changes myself once everyone agrees. I'd say leave your post as it is, edit ONLY if YOU want to.

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how do we know this? You can't expect us to read all of your posts, when it has nothing to do with us. Update the main page with info on the sectors or something.


This is a STORY. What you just said, if pretaining to posts in THIS topic is baring on stupidity in my opinion. Open a harry potter book(or any other story you've yet to read). Read the first two or maybe three chapters. Then jump to chapter seven/eight and expect to know what's going on.
That's roughly what you're doing.

If you need something cleared up, Say so. But honestly any needed information can be pulled from both topics(Both of which you should be reading to gain the utmost amount of information about the story and characters, along with see if any changes were needed to be talked about on your character).
They are seperate only becuase it makes it more organized and less cluttered with OOC epic talks such as this one...
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[quote[This is a STORY. What you just said, if pretaining to posts in THIS topic is baring on stupidity in my opinion. Open a harry potter book(or any other story you've yet to read). Read the first two or maybe three chapters. Then jump to chapter seven/eight and expect to know what's going on.
That's roughly what you're doing.[/quote]

Not really >.>. It's roleplaying, it's different. Honestly, This would have been much more simple if the Sections, there looks, ect, in the first post. You can't expect other people to read the roleplaying of someone that does *not* pertain to them, espesially if it's a huge wall of text that they dig through.

Ask Jim for a new forum sub-section and make a topic for sector. Keeps things nice and orderly. This topic deserves one, will keep things nice and orderly, and make it look more professional.

Honestly, having a bunch of people talk in one post to several people is confusing as HELL.
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Matar. That's my point. This isn't supposed to be a RolePlaying as much as it is a Story. Note how it's not several people subjecting to the plot of the main story, everyone has their own plot they're writing. Or rather, it's a Collection of stories.

If you're not reading EVERYONE'S posts, you shouldn't be joining the story as one of the writers.

ESPECIALLY considering this topic's NAME is: Advent Legacy(Story)

Read everyone's post or don't join. I didn't mention the rule becuase I assumed the point of joining is to INVOLVE your character in the story, not take it OVER. What your saying is that basically a person joins the story hoping it'll become all about them and they'll be the hero.

And I'm not sure what your arguement here is, becuase I know pretty well that ATLEAST Therren, S.Cloud, WhitePhoenix, and myself are making sure to read every post.
The story progresses slower because of it. HOWEVER, the quality likewise is higher becuase of it. Becuase firstly there's alot less confusion on certain things, making all the corrections the main editor(That'd be me) makes as pretty minor and could just be ignored such as it not raining during your character's event becuase section five has no rain, or Alice not using swear words becuase she has no hate/anger, minor things that are basically just pointing-outs by me.

Now can we end this pointless conversation and move on back to the story? A flame war would do this topic and it's sister no good at all.
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Rizui woke up. The sun was shining in the room. It was a miracle that the light had not waked Rakuo yet. She walked up to Rakuo and pulled his hood far past his eyes, making sure that he couldnt peek through it. She changed back into her casual clothes, making sure that Rakuo wasn't awake. When she had finished, she pulled Rakuo's hood back down.
(Not awake yet? I didn't think he was a heavy sleeper...)
She sat in front of him, thinking of the most...appropriate way to wake him up. She decided that a punch to the face was the best way. She pulled her fist back and slung it forward, hitting Rakuo hard on the cheek.

Rakuo flew back, still holding his sword, he landed both feet on the wall and launched off, tackling Rizui in the process.
Rizui: "What the hell!"
Rakuo: "Oh. Why the hell did you punch me like that?"
Rizui: "So you would wake up!"
Rakuo: "And you thought punching me would make me do that without any consequences?"
Rakuo got off of her and proceeded to sit down on the chair.
Rizui: "Well yeah."
Rakuo: "I'm an enemy of Vetmode. Don't you think that after being away from civilization that I would be paranoid and react quickly to any thing that threatens me?"
Rizui: "I didn't think you jump off the wall is what I didn't think."

After eating breakfast, Rizui and Rakuo exited the pub and found an area which nobody was using. Or even coming near.
Rakuo: "Ok. Pull your blade out and let’s fight."
Rizui: "I'm not gonna hold back!"
Rakuo: "I'd be ashamed if you did."
Rizui pulled her katana out from seemingly nowhere and started a dash at Rakuo. When Rizui lifted her blade to cut Rakuo, he pulled put his Nodachi and blocked the attack. The metal clashed with a soft 'dink' sound, causing sparks to come from them. They parted and Rakuo as the one who jumped back forward to engage in combat. He slung his Nodachi with both hands, the two swords kept meeting in air, creating the soft sound of clinking metal. When Rakuo pulled back, he tripped on a rock, causing him to fall back onto the ground.
Rizui: "AHA! Gotcha now!"

Rakuo could see everything happen in slow motion. He watched as the blade started to come down. He had anticipated as much. It was the usual strategy for people to take advantage of seemingly unfavorable situations. But Rakuo had fallen on his back to many times for this to be a true disadvantage.

He picked him self up, and struck Rizui on the chin with a flat part of his sword, which caused her to fly back a couple of yards.
Rakuo: "Wow. Ya almost got me there I guess"
Rakuo sheathed his sword and wiped the mud off of his hooded robe.

When Rizui got up, she seemed to move stiffly and the air around her changed.
Rakuo: "You ok?"
When Rizui spoke these next words, her voice and the voice of another spoke.
Rizui: "If...you threaten...my vessel...You can DIE!"
Rakuo: "What?"
Rakuo looked over and saw that Rizui's eyes had gone completely black. Except for the pupil, which was red and looked like slits.

Rizui pulled her fist back and threw it out. Despite the rain that was falling, an enormous flame in the shape of a fist came barreled out at Rakuo.

Rakuo: "Shi! Arrogance!"
A strange creature in the shape of a deformed shield came out in front of Rakuo to block the attack. Rakuo looked down at the silvery orb that had appeared next to his right arm. The smaller orbs in it were disappearing quickly. Rakuo would have to drop the shield sooner or later...

The Shield creature suddenly disappeared and Rakuo was left tot take what was left of the attack. This lit his hood ablaze and sent him flying backwards into a metal building. He got up and put the flames out and smashed his fit into the ground.

A creature appeared in front of Rakuo; it was hovering in mid air with a mad glint in its eye. This, was Rakuo's Ultimate Legion, Thanatos. The torso of the beast was huge, and blades were sticking out of its back, And instead of a lower body, it had a tail with orange fire at the bottom. Rakuo threw his and out, which cause the legion to disappear.

Thanatos appeared right behind the possessed Rizui, and brought down its powerful fist to strike Rizui. Before it could hit, Rizui grabbed Thanatos's wrist, picked him up, and threw him right back at Rakuo.

When he saw this, Rakuo gasped and de-summoned Thanatos right before it smashed into him. Thanatos stopped in mid air and a blue fire quickly consumed him. After the fire dispersed, Rizui was suddenly right in front of Rakuo and smashed him in the face. As Rakuo was falling backwards into the metal, he felt hands wrap around his ankles and felt him being pulled up. When he dared to look up, Rakuo saw that he was in the air, and Rizui started to throw him back down.

Rakuo's Body smashed the ground and bounced. Before he bounced for the second time, he felt him self being pulled up, just to be punched in the stomach and as Rakuo fell back yet again, He was hit in the back, which cause him to fall forward, Rizui yet again grabbed him, and threw him back onto the ground. Rakuo looked up and saw Rizui lift up her hand.

Rizui lifted her hand in air and opened it. A small flame appeared in her hand and started to form a weapon. Soon, her katana, Nietono no Hitojini appeared in her hand.
Rizui (possessed): "Heh. Time to die."
She started to bring her sword down to stab Rakuo in the head. Rakuo closed his eyes and held up his hand, as though to try and stave off the attack.

Rakuo heard a grunt, and a clinking of metal hitting the ground. He looked up past his arm to find that Rizui had stopped herself from piercing Rakuo's head. Some of the darkness that had possessed her eyes, started to move out of it.

Rakuo sighed, and saw a small puddle of blood. He opened up his robe, and saw that a cut of a considerable size on the side of his stomach. He put his hand to his head, withdrew it, and saw that blood stained his hand. He tried to pick himself up, but fell back down.

Rizui had finally gained control of herself. She looked down at Rakuo and Gasped
Rizui: "What the hell happened?"
Rakuo: "Do you mean that you don't know what the hell happened from the time I hit you in the face and you fell back?"
Rizui: "N...No...”
Rakuo: "You kicked my ass real bad. You eyes had gone black and your voice was warped!"
Rizui: "Oh no...I must have been knocked out and Sagila took over!"
Rakuo: "What ever! Just get me some damn help before I bleed out!"
Rizui: "Why don’t you just use 'healing factor'?
Rakuo: "I had to use Thanatos. Healing Factor won’t work for quite a while."
Rizui: "Well...Then what do I do?"
Rakuo: "Find some place where i can disinfect these wounds and stop the bleeding. I'm losing too much blood! Look, theres a person named Merk around here. I used to visit his pub all the time when we fought Vetmode during his first revolt. If any one know how the hell to clean wounds, it's him."

Rakuo finished his sentence, closed his eyes, and went limp. Rizui gasped and looked around. 'Merk? I have no idea who the hell that even is! How the hell am I supposed to find him! Hmm...Perhaps someone might know in town?'

Rizui picked up Rakuo and put his arm around her shoulder. She started to make her way back into a populated area of the town. The rain had gotten heavier and Rizui's voice could not be heard through it.

When Rizui finally got someone to listen to her, they pointed just down the street.

She kept walking until she saw a pub sign. She started to help Rakuo toward it, and when they had finally arrived at the doorstep, Rizui sighed and walked in....

EDIT: Added/fixed text that went awry in the copy and paste method.
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